Do u want TWO BROTHERS written in 1st person or 3rd person?

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Do u want TWO BROTHERS written in 1st person or 3rd person?

sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey guys , I am again disturbing u all with my queries...As u know when I started the story , it was written in 1st person - like introduction of Maan , RK , Geet and Madhu...Then I switched to 3rd person...In one update I used 1st person again to show Vicky's inner thoughts and in another update , I used the 1st person to express King of Neotopia's evilness...Then as the story became complicated with more and more characters , I stuck to 3rd person narration as if I choose one character's pov then other characters will be left out...their feelings and thoughts will not be shown...and if I show same incident in different povs , then my already lengthy update will become more lengthy...So , I don't know how to write the story now...Please help...Badly needed ur advice as end of the day I expect ur comments on my updates...I will try my best...

Don't give one line decision...just state 1 line reason too for ur choice...

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I don't know whether I have understood what u wanna ask or not... U r asking whether to write their thoughts or feelings .. Or to write direct speech... Telling about the scene and happenings around them... If this is the case ... Then I think I wanna go for both... 1st reason.. Because of many characters sometimes it becomes hard to understand the act of theirs.. So their inner thought's gives us the inside out of their mind... 2nd reason ... Their dialogues always been a medium to convey the thoughts... But the story which you are writing is super natural... Not all the things go smoothly ... They have devilish mind.. Their powers... Need to be showcase ... What they feel and how these change effect their mental state... hope it clears your confusion or if I'm wrong.. Hehehe... Do tell me..

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I believe writing in your own style will be perfect

unless you have portray the characters inner thoughts than surely in their own

POV

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