Kahe Toh Se Sajna / revised version ch 9 n 10 updated pg23// 2nd Jan - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

197

Views

9.4k

Users

57

Likes

761

Frequent Posters

Monikaarora thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#71
part-1

..very nice part dear ... geet and her mother rano lived in small villege in hill area ...here both can be seen hardworkers... rano knitt woolen clothes and geet also helping her as well as typist ...

.
Monikaarora thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#72
part-2

...amazing part dear ... geet went to lake as per her mother order to flow stickers in water ...and there she saw a wounded man drowning in lake .. its shocked to see she can't speak ..

.
Monikaarora thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#73
part-3

awesome part dear ... geet is such a kind hearted girl .. she made that wounded man in hospital with rahul nd sham help.. even she sold her ring to pay hospital bill .. but doc announced man has been praylised completly .. lets see kya hota h next ...waiting for next part dear ...

.
Monikaarora thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#74
part-4

..omg.. the man had a blood clot in brain that block his nervous system ..and there are almost no chances of his recovery .. lets see what will geet do now ...
.nice part dear ..

.
Sonia.KN thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#75



Chapter 6


Next day Geet paid dues...Even Dr. Khanna helped in Maan's case...but there were some dues which Geet had to clear...Sham n Leela was also with Rano..when Geet asked Doctor to arrange ambulance for them..Maan was not taking food so drip was necessary for him...each n every third day...Geet learned how to do that.

Leela: Geet ek baar fir soch lo beta...u r doing rite or ... ? (a mother like figure to her put her doubts in front

Geet nodded her head ...n held tightly Leela's hand..that she was rite..Within one hour ambulance siren alerted whole village Maan..Geet's arrival.Village streets were narrow...so Ambulance could not b taken in front of Geet's house...so helpers within ambulance took Maan stretcher out..


Passing through narrow village streets they were covering step by step distance to Geet's home.Like those narrow streets thinking of people here had been turned very narrow n low...Those who loved n respected Geet ..now they were gossiping about her relation with this poor creature on Stretcher.But She had no effect

Before going to hospital Rano had done all arrangements for Maan . She knew her daughter was rite..as between those many eyes gazing them ..She was moving with head raised up ...with self dignity ...the feeling she was not wrong.

Within her house there was less space but great space in hearts.She had asked her mother to arrange things for Maan in room...Which was her room few days back. There were no bed ..Just cots ..so Rano put two quilts instead of mattresses.

Helpers put Maan on cot like a thing .People were peeping through open window. Which Sham closed...Geet put blanket on Maan.Within half n hour everybody left.Geet cared nothing about people outside talking about Maan..Talking about her.

Rano : Geet beta maine I brought unstitched material from market and stitched it for Maan...With same measurement I took at hospital these will be comfortable for him... ( She handed few hand made dresses for Maan)




Rano n Geet arranged every thing like Maan gonna b permanent third member of this family of two...Geet hugged her mother...But she knew what her mother was thinking..Before society first thing was how they gonna survive..Even for Maan they need more...medicines...were most important.

Both ladies looked in each other's eyes.Like some thing both were thinking but same thought...Geet left place took her slate n started to write

Geet (wrote): Don't worry Maa..we again have to restart...n we ll...(with confidence she wrote and smile spread on her lips...)

Rano: Geet I know we can..You r a fighter...But what about Maan 😲 ? Beta what about people ? What about yorself ? Its sure Maan may have a family he loves and his family love him..One day I hope he ll overcome..or his family ll come to take him..What ll we do...? But if it ll take long..itna lamba safar ho jaye k tumhare liye aagay jaana mushil ho jaye aur piche dekhna bhi..Then what beta.? You have whole life o spend...( sa scared mother cried her heart out ...holding Geet...)

Geet : U also had same kind situation..when u left every thing behind for me...jst for me...U r still so young...But u just think about me..Maa...so why not me..?(Geet assured her mother )

Rano : U r my daughter my blood...Our situation was such ..but different...We had to restart..but society ko jawaab denna pade..yeh jaroori nahi tha...( she cleared things)

Geet: Maa..rishte kya hotay hai u know ?...per sirf khoon k ho yeh jaroori to nahi..n I done wanna mess with u on this..(she finished clearing finally )

She left place...Went to room where Maan was ...Looking at his face..She thought why she was doing so.. Hurting her mother.But now she couldn't look back.Rano was kitting outside n had not seen Geet from last one hour.When Geet came to her She had a little beg in her hand.n Rano knew what was there in that.

Rano : Yeh gehne kyo nikal liye Geet...? Now what u gonna do...? Hope not what I can't bear...(Rano questioned looking at beg )

Geet gave that bag to Rano n brought her slate..where she wrote..She gonna sell them.As she needed money

Rano: Geet you turned out to be mad ?( she busted )

Geet : No Maa I m not mad...but I had planned what to do..U know yesterday...leaving u with Maan...I visited my boss...

Rano: I know..then what...?

Geet: I explained everything to them..n they asked me for help...n I gonna do work for them from home...In gehno ko bay-ch kar kaffi paise aa jayegay..inse main ek computer...printer...aur ek scooty le lungi...baaki paise bank main daal daygay..( this was plan ..lol...😆 )

Rano: Geet I can't understand why are you doing all this...( really fed up)

Geet: Maa wo log mujhe..apne saara material mail karegay...jinko correct karke...unke documents banna k ..print karke bhej dungi unko...jisse se unka kaam kamm ho jayega...aur kai log bhi mujhe kaam denne ko maan gaye hai Rahul ne baat ki unse..jin takk main nahi pahunch sakti..unke documents prepare karke mail kar dungi..hamara kharcha aaraam se nikaal aayega.and being at home I can help you more ...kaam karegay..aur Maan k pass bhi reh sakugi...baas aab to kush ( she made childish expressions...n hugged )

Rano: Itna sab ek ajnabi k liye...

Geet: He is not stranger any more but a part of our small family.Its my responsibility to be with him until he recovers...I took him to hospital and not gonna step back...After that it is up to him...and please you sold these ornaments coz I will not be able to talk to shopkeeper...(she handed beg to her mother )


Rano was thinking her daughter was so confident about her decision. Without caring about future.But she had to be by her side n she would...

Precap :

Geet face to face...Panchaayat...n Society...

For final decision about Maan...



No on cry updating own words but I alwayz cry after reading /writing nxt updates 😭...amazing 😆😆

Edited by Sonia.KN - 9 years ago
susm thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Nice update. Geet brought Maan to her home. It is difficult for both n now Maan added in their family. Rano is worried for Geet. But Geet want yo face n keep Maan with them. Geet sale her jewellery. Working from home. Rano decided to support her daughter.
love2_soma thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#77
kya hoga abb...geet kaise samna karegi samaj ka...

awesome updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

annirogc thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#78
amazing update..maan condition was worst..but geet was doing everything for him
6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#79


itne saare updates ek saath...

I will take time to read all chapters...


suhaaana thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 9 years ago
#80
awesome updates
I am waiting for next parts specially them getting married

till now geet is the lifeline of maan
n she is helping a stranger selflessly

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

1 years ago

FATE 3 Updated P 44 on Pg 73 / 31-7-2025

Introduction Small os or ss not decided yet... might be dependent on the response 🤔 I am not sure.

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Dragon-Heart

2 years ago

The Lost Prince MG FF Updated P 37 on Pg 62 / 21-8-2025

Introduction As I already told you that I am going to write period fiction... So here is it... Let's see how is the response. That will decide...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

6 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07 Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07

Chapter 52 Sameera watched as Maan arrived at her house. He hadn’t visited for a couple of days and Aavya had started asking when her new friend...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF- Silent Whisper- Updated Part 27, Pg 105, July 31

Overview Two people completely poles apart in career, status and style. One is the epitome of elegant, the other epitome of simplistic. One is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".