Samjho Na! Part 10 Up on Pg 38! On 11th Feb! - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

214

Views

18.6k

Users

49

Likes

875

Frequent Posters

mayurisb80 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#21
well one does feel like banging both of thier heads together...
honeygrape thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Lovely start kalpana...Really looking forward to see how and what happened after this,,,,,,,,,,,,
supernasahu thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Fabulous nd Emotional prologue...👏 👏 👏
Geet demanded divorce...😲 😲
They didn't think to confess their feelings for each other...
Eagerly waiting for next...Continue soon...
Kalpana_KaCy thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#24


PART 1. RECEPTION: KABHI JO BAADAL BARSE!

Maan sat down in front of the dining table with anger and annoyance written on his face. His Daadima frowned at his expression but shrugged it away. Must have been some deal gone wrong! It cannot be because of his marriage right? After all, he loved the girl, so what will be the problem there? Daadima smiled, "Aa jaao beta! Naashta kar lo!" Maan nodded but continued to remain angry.

Dev and NT rolled their eyes at Maan's angry visage. Both chalked it up to something Geet must have said to annoy him. They were well versed with Geet and Maan's fights by now. So they thought the couple fought again and did not look into Maan's anger further. They simply wished him good morning and waited for the breakfast to be laid on the table.

What none of them realised that the reason behind Maan's anger was not as simple as they thought. Maan had woken up in the morning with pleasant thoughts in his head which vanished when he remembered the evening before and Geet's demand for divorce. Every positive thought in his head flew away and hurt and pain took its place. He turned to look at the couch where Geet had slept the night before only to see no one there. He looked around in curiosity only for Geet to arrive in the room all dressed up in salwar kameez from the bathroom. He looked away not wanting her to see the hurt and pain in his eyes.

Maan watched sideways as Geet did not even acknowledge him and went about doing her work. Maan felt faint stirrings of anger inside him as he realised that his wife did not even like him enough to look at him. Of course, Maan did not know that Geet was ignoring his presence because she felt like she would burst out crying if she even took one look at him. So Geet ignored her husband in name and the husband felt anger at her ignorance. Maan focused on his anger and pushed the hurt and pain away. After all, it is easy to be angry than to be in pain.

And that is why Maan remained angry the whole morning till the breakfast and focused on his anger so as to not feel the pain. The breakfast arrived soon but Geet had yet to come. Daadima told them to eat as Geet is busy in the kitchen. The family nodded and started to eat. Maan was just about to put a spoonful of porridge into his mouth when ...

"Kya se Kya Ho Gaya Bewafaa Tere Pyaar Mein..."

Maan looked up in shock to see Dev sing while adding milk to his cereal.

"Chaaha Tha Kya Mila Bewafaa Tere Pyaar Mein...", Dev continued to sing as he added some fruits to his bowl.

"DEV!", Maan barked, "SHUT UP!"

Dev shut up right away and frowned at his brother. Maine kya kiya? He shrugged and started to eat his breakfast quietly.

Maan looked towards his breakfast and started to eat. That song hit too close to home for him.

Few minutes later, Maan remembered something and asked Dev, "Dev! What happened to that foreign delegation? It is coming today, right?"

"Yes Bro! It is confirmed. They will be coming today. You and I will be ready to welcome them when they arrive!", Dev replied. Maan nodded but before he could say anything else, Daadima spoke up, "Sirf Dev rahenge welcome karne! Not Maan!"

Maan frowned at his Daadima, "Aisa kyun Daadima?"

"Kyunki aaj aap Office nahi jaa rahe!", Daadima announced.

"What?", Maan roared in annoyance.

"Yes! Aaj aap Office bilkul nahi jaa rahe hain! Kal aapki shaadi hui hai aur aap apni patni ke saath time spend karne ke bajaay office jaa rahe hain?", Daadima scolded him.

Maan looked away. Yesterday he would have agreed with her but not today. Jab patni hi khud mujhse dur bhaagna chaahti ho, toh uske saath time kaise spend karun?

"Toh tum nahi welcome kar rahe Maan! Aur haan aaj shaam ko Reception party hai and I want all of you present there!", Daadima announced again.

Maan was aghast now, "Reception? Uski kya jaroorat hai?"

Geet, who had just arrived at the dining table holding a bowl in her hand, took in a sharp breath. Of course, reception ki kya jaroorat hai! Jo shaadi tikne hi nahi waali usko kya reception dena? Her mind snarled while her heart continued to weep at the situation. Geet did not show any reaction though. She remained stoic while family had yet to notice her.

"What do you mean uski kya jaroorat hai? Doesn't the media world need to know ki the business tycoon Maan Singh Khurana ki wife kaun hai? Don't speak rubbish Maan!", Daadima scolded him again.

"Par Daadima...", Maaan tried to explain but Daadima glared at him, "Bas! Aaj reception hogi toh reception hogi. Humein iske aage kuch nahi sunna!"

Maan huffed but did not say a word. Daadima threw the next bomb, "Ab chalo honeymoon ki baat karte hain!"

"WHAT?", Maan stood up in shock.

"Maan bete! Tum aise reactions kyun de rahe ho?", Daadima looked confused, "Shaadi ke baad reception aur honeymoon toh normal cheezein hai! Har couple shaadi ke baad reception karta hai aur honeymoon pe jaata hai! NT aur Dev bhi gaye the! Tum kyun aise fadfada rahe ho?"

Maan shook his head, "Reception tak theek hai Daadima! But I cannot go on honeymoon. Ek bahut important project chaalu hai! I cannot leave it in middle!"

Daadima opened her mouth to refute Maan when Dev butted in, "I am sorry Daadima but Bro is right! Yaad hai aapko do mahine pehle main aapke paas aaya tha shaadi ko postpone karne ko request leke because yeh project shaadi ke time pe bhi chaalu rahega and that's why Bro won't be able to go on honeymoon!"

Daadima closed her eyes as she remembered the request. Oh yes! He had requested that. And she had refused because she had thought it was just another ploy of Maan to cancel the wedding. She opened her eyes and huffed, "Lagta hai aapka honeymoon abhi nahi ho sakta Maan bete!" Maan looked away annoyed at Daadima for not believing him. Geet felt relieved. She did not want the honeymoon. She refused to spend alone time with a man who did not care about her!

"Main upar jaa raha hoon, uss project pe work karne!", Maan growled, not wanting to discuss his marriage anymore with Daadima.

"Par Maan bete, naashta toh khatam keejiye!", Daadima spoke.

Maan shook his head, "Bhook nahi hai Daadima!" and continued to walk off.

Daadima then noticed her bahu and saw the bowl in her hands, "Arre Maan bete! Geet ka aaj pehla din hai isliye meetha banaaya hai! Woh toh chakhlo!"

"No! Thanks!", Maan growled and stomped away.

Geet watched Maan walk away and felt her heart break once more. Daadima huffed in annoyance, "Use chodo Geet beta! Tum humein meetha khilaao!" Geet smiled softly and nodded but the sadness remained on her face. Everyone praised her dessert but Geet was not happy. The one person who was her world did not even try her cooking. What was the use of cooking it then?

Maan looked away just as Geet looked his way. It was late evening and they were at their reception party. Unlike the usual reception where the couple stood on the stage and posed while receiving gifts, Daadima had thrown a party welcoming her new bahu. Everyone mingled around and Geet and Maan were showered with congratulations. They had separated after a while and now both looked at each other sneakily while the other wasn't looking. As far as Maan was concerned Geet looked ethereal and breathtaking in her sexy white saree and Maan could not look away from her. And as far as Geet was concerned, Maan in his black attire only made her heart throb in pain as all the time her eyes betrayed her by looking at him. Both remembered the time several years ago when they were in same kind of party and the song that played was Kya Pyaar Karoge Mujhse...

Geet was brought out of her thoughts when NT came and demanded for a first dance by the newlyweds. Geet refused but when Dev started egging her too she had no option than to comply and nervously headed to the dance floor where Maan met her after being nagged by Daadima to dance with his wife. As music played in the background, Maan placed one of his hands on her waist making her take in a sharp breath. She placed her hand on his shoulder and the other hands joined at their sides. They started to sway with the music.

Kabhi Jo Baadal Barse

Main Dekhun Tujhe Aankhein Bharke

Tu Lage Mujhe Pehli Baarish Ki Dua...

Geet's eyes widened as the song reminded her of the moments in rain she spent with Maan few months back. They had hugged each other then.

Tere Pehlu Mein Rehloon

Main Khudko Paagal Kehloon

Tu Gham De Ya Khushiyan Sehloon

Saathiya...

Geet looked up and noticed Maan staring at her intensely. She did not know that he was reliving the same moments too. He spun her out and pulled her back in. His fingers brushed against her stomach and she sucked her stomach in, his fingers eliciting feelings she wished to forget. She felt his breath on her neck and she took in a sharp breath. Unable to be this close to him anymore, she pushed his hands away and tried to walk off the dance floor.

Koi Nahi

Tere Siva Mera Yahaan

He grabbed her hand stopping her right away. She turned around to look at him.

Manzilein

Hai Meri Toh Sab Yahaan

He pulled her back and she fell into his arms.

Mita De Sabhi Aaja Faasle

Main Chaahun Mujhe Mujhse Baant Le

Zara Sa Mujhmein Tu Jhaank Le

Main Hoon Kya

His fingers touched her bare back sending shivers down her spine. Maan frowned at her reaction. If she did not love him, then why did he affect her? He deliberately brushed his fingers against her back and she gripped his shoulder tighter. His eyes widened but by then she pushed him away and walked off swiftly to the sides. He stared after her in the middle of the dance floor.

Pehle Kabhi

Na Tu Ne Mujhe Gham Diya

Phir Mujhe

Kyun Tanha Kar Diya

What is happening here? She did not love him but she was attracted to him?! No! I am missing out on something, Maan thought as he left the dance floor.

Guzaare The Jo Lamhe Pyaar Ke

Hamesha Tujhe Apna Maan Ke

Toh Phir Tu Ne Badli Kyun Adaa

Yeh Kyun Kiya

Kyun Geet kyun? How could you fall out of love so easily? Maan wondered as he stared at his wife from afar.

Kabhi Jo Baadal Barse

Main Dekhun Tujhe Aankhein Bharke

Tu Lage Mujhe Pehli Baarish Ki Dua...

Tere Pehlu Mein Rehloon

Main Khudko Paagal Kehloon

Tu Gham De Ya Khushiyan Sehloon

Saathiya...

It was late night and Geet was already asleep on the couch but Maan was unable to sleep. He stood by the window looking out. Everything had left him confused. Geet reacted to his touch which meant she was attracted to him. But her love was gone! NO! I am missing something! As he remembered her reaction on the dance floor, another memory niggled at the back of his head. As it came to fore, some pieces clicked into place. It was the drunken dance he did in the club on one of Geet's birthdays. She was affected by him at that time too. Par tabhi toh woh mujhse pyaar nahi karti thi! That's when another thought struck him and after two days of being gloomy, Maan Singh Khurana saw a ray of hope in front of him. Geet was attracted to him then too. And he had made her fall for him then. She was attracted to him now too. Then why cannot I make her fall back in love with me? If I could make her fall in love with me then, why can't I make her fall in love now? Yes! Perfect idea! Aur abhi toh koi restrictions bhi nahi! She is my wife! I can do anything with her! Maan smirked. Mrs. Khurana get ready to be romanced by your husband! And I will romance you in such a way, that you won't even think of falling out of love again! Happy that his love life was salvaged by his sharp brain and fantastic plans, Maan went to sleep. Tomorrow it will be a new morning of his marriage!

Hello people,

How was that for the first part? Did you like the latest idea of Maan?

But what will Maan exactly do? That you will know on 16th of January!

Till then keep reviewing!

Happy New Year and see you Next Year!

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. The song is from the movie Jackpot (2013) and is sung by Arijit Singh.

Edited by Kalpana_KaCy - 9 years ago
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Its easy always to be angry and mask the pain while Geet too believes that
her husband does not love her and his actions hurt her but she is not aware
that he too loves her and he is in pain thinking and questioning how did she manage
to fall out of love
_Maaneet_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#26
awesome update
loved it!
maan planing to make his wife fall in love with him again!
continue soon!
annirogc thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#27
amazing update,. maan was angry ..he does not understand geet at all.. now hegot new idea ..waiting for next
Madhu_31 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#28
nice update
A big mu between Maaneet
geet reacted to maan's touch
thank god atleast he noticed it!!
wow..Maan in Mission to make geet fall in love with him!!
Loved the update :)

heycookie thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#29
nice update
feeling bad for both of them...d dance was awesome
finally maan realize n m sure soon both vl b together forever..thanx 4 d update
cant w8 for next
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written! Happy New Year! Maan wonders when she fell out of love! Maaneet dance! Maan notices she is affected by him! Maan resolves 2 make her fall in love with him! update soon

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

Tere Pyaar Mein Marjawa/pt16/17-pg29/31- 1 feb

previous thread - which get closed now you can read here - click here

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

6 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

9 months ago

Something About Us- MG || (Part 51|Page 52)

Something About Us Hey All, starting a new story. It is a kind of reboot or version 2 of the story Something About You . Hope you will enjoy it...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF- Silent Whisper- Updated Part 27, Pg 105, July 31

Overview Two people completely poles apart in career, status and style. One is the epitome of elegant, the other epitome of simplistic. One is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".