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Posted: 9 years ago
It is a good thing that both are talking about the future.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update ...
maan suggest they should get married n a fresh start ...but I still want maan to accept his mistake in front of everyone I mean their frds circle ...when he didn't feel any shame living with Sam then why can't he accept his sin in front of his friend ...? geet is too good like an angle ...she does not want maan to feel humiliate... geet told maan don't expect anything from her ...good ...
continue soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was much needed convo between maaneet.
Maan wants to start a fresh with geet and his baby:)
Great..
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sagorika93

nice update ...
maan suggest they should get married n a fresh start ...but I still want maan to accept his mistake in front of everyone I mean their frds circle ...when he didn't feel any shame living with Sam then why can't he accept his sin in front of his friend ...? geet is too good like an angle ...she does not want maan to feel humiliate... geet told maan don't expect anything from her ...good ...
continue soon ...


Totally agree with you :)
If maan accepts vivaan all will think he is a great guy lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi dona
babie..
where r u
aaj update milegi kya
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

hi dona
babie..
where r u
aaj update milegi kya

hi di...babiedi abhi tak nahi aayi...shyad net slow hoga...
kaise ho aap??
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Posted: 9 years ago



my dear friends 🤗
Updating






Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
singh24 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

The Myth


( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.



Part - 101

Part - 102


😃 Plzz play BG ,, while reading ..

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Maybe it's not always about trying to fix something broken. Maybe it's about starting over and creating something better .


That night was d last night of their painful past,, both realised d value of family nd d happiness of their lil baby who deserve his parent's love ,, how cd they snatch his rights bcoz of their broken relation ,, it was Geet's greatness that she was thinking nd doing everything selflessly then how cd he disappoint her where he was repenting for his misdeeds ,, his selfishness nd mistakes snatched everything from him , even his respect too ,, it was Geet who was maintaining d dignity of their broken relation ,, now he promised himself that he wd fill his Geet nd baby's life with happiness nd love.

Both wr sleeping in their respective places lost in their thoughts ,, Geet was relaxed nd contented with that thought that she nd her son got that respect which they deserve ,, her personal happiness didn't matter infront of her baby's happiness nd future .

Where as Maan was relaxed thinking that now he cd express his right on his baby nd Geet ,, he cd plan to get back them in his life nd for this he had to talk to DJ nd Kabir uncle ,, as Geet said that things wr diff in Canada , so he wd start from there , but he broke her all hopes here , so tried to give her a hope to dream for her ,, her dreams for a beautiful life with him ,,, yes with him ... .

He shuddered nd stirred in his bed thinking about him nd Geet ,, felt a gush of emotions ,, desired to be with her ,, to cocoon her in his protective arms ,, to make her sure that she was secure ,, his every cells of body ached for her ,, a restlessness engulfed him ,, he got up nd came out from his study ,, peeped in room where Geet nd his baby wr sleeping peacefully ,, he came close to baby cot nd checked his baby with a contented smile then went near Geet's bed ,, who was looking like an angel in d dim light ,, so serene nd beautiful ,, a smile crept on his lips , heart stirred , an urged forced him to reduse d gap .

Maan came more close to bed nd sat on d edge of d bed staring at his sleeping beauty ,, his hands moved to adjust some loose strends from her face which wr blocking d view ,, satisfied his heart adoring his reason of smiles ,, lastly he bent nd pecked on her head whispering .. GN sona .

Maan came back nd slept with contented heart thinking that there is a lot to do to keep his precious possession close to his heart for ever .

He was unaware that Geet had cherished every moments with thudding heart ,, she controlled her hard to remain unaffected ,, her breaths turned heavier nd uneven when he sat close to her nd pecked her head .

Actually Geet woke up when maan went near baby cot to check their baby ,, she saw him once nd then closed her eyes to sleep again ,, she didn't think that he cd come near her too , but when she felt his touch on her face when he adjusted her hair ,, she felt a shiver in her body ,, she froze nd held her breaths ,, didn't have courage to open her eyes nd to say anything to Maan ,, his closeness nd body fragrance wr tantalizing her senses ,, controlling herself she waited nd when Maan pecked her head nd whispered .. GN sona , she clutch d blanket in her fist tightly .

Maan's this act affected her deeply ,, though she took all his care nd concern as his repentance nd guilt ,, she was not sure what he had in his heart ,, she didn't have any hope for her nd stopped dreaming for her long back , but sometime his actions melt down her heart , nd aroused many raw feelings ,, his loving care soothe her aching heart.

A soft smile crept on her lips snuggled under her soft blanket nd tried to sleep ,, the pain which was hurting her from eve vanished in thin air nd she felt relax .

D night blessed a chearfull dawn to Maan nd Geet ,, they woke up with sounds of chirping birds nd playful squeak of baby ,, who woke up nd started playing throwing his hands nd legs ,, Geet sat on her bed nd looked at her baby ,, there Maan came out from study after listening baby's voice ,, he looked at baby nd smiled seeing him playing nd then at Geet who was also smiling .

Maan: GM Geet , u up ?

Geet: GM Maan , yeah , heard viv's voice .

Maan: me too , , he woke up early today .

Geet: hum,, didn't wake at night nd had a long sound sleep .

Maan: hum,, last eve he was cranky nd get disturbed sleep , but sleep well after coming here .

Geet smiled : u r right ,, Maan u stay here nd let him play , I m going to bring our mrng tea nd coffee.

Maan: i'll bring Geet , u stay here.

Geet: nani Maan , tum ruko , mai lati hu plzz, it doesn't look nice if u work in kitchen ,, guests r in home .

Maan: all wr tired nd came late ,, won't wake up early , so relax,, u r also tired so take some more rest , I m going to bring our tea .

Geet gave him a glare : bahot jidd karty ho , chup-chap baby ke pass raho , mai ne kaha na mai lati hu .

Maan smiled at her sherni mode nd said inwardly ... how sweet .. gussa karti hui kitni cute lagti hei ,, he was smiling nd staring at her which startled Geet few secs .

Geet : aammm ,,, stay here , I m coming in few min,, hhmm .

Maan nodded his head with same smile nd Geet rushed out controlling her erotic heartbeats ,, Maan's this softness disturbed her calm nd compose heart ,, she went in kitchen ,, all wr sleping even servants too ,, they too slept late ,, Geet made black coffee for Maan nd green tea for her ,, when she came back in room found Maan sleeping in half laying position in her bed .

Geet placed d tray on side table ,, looked nd adored peacefully sleeping Maan for few secs ,, he was looking very innocent ,, she saw his every featured keenly .. his long eyelashes , sharp nose , M-shape lips ,, a soft smile crept on her face ,, her baby was riplica of Maan ,, she left a deep sigh nd then decided to wake maan for coffee ,, she bent nd called him patting his shoulder .

Geet: Maan ,,, Maan , utho .

Maan who sat in Geet bed to keep an eye on baby nd then snuggled in Geet's blanket with a desire to feel her fragrance nd closeness ,, he felt d warmth nd geet's fragarance from d blanket engulfed him ,, he didn't know when he doze off ,, baby was still playing seeing hanging toys .

Maan woke up with a jerk nd tried to got up . but bang with geet who was lil bent over him ,,, aahh,, ouch ,,,, G e e t ,, she fall losing her balance nd he held her ,, next moment she was on bed nd Maan was half laying over her ,, her hands wr on his bare shoulder nd arm holding him tight ,, he cd feel d pressure of her fingers over his skin ,, her eyes wr close with sudden hit nd jerk ,, Maan's cheek rubbed with her soft cheek , then he life his face nd looked at her .

Maan forgot where he was? He caressed her soft cheek nd spoke softly , his warm breaths touched her face .

Maan: geet , open ur eyes , r u Ok ?

Geet opened her eyes listening his words ,, his face was so close to her ,, her eyes met with his deep honey brown eyes nd his , with her almond eyes ,, time stopped for them , both wr lost ,, their heart wr thudding nd feeling each other heartbeats , which wr uneven ,, his hard chest was pressing her soft mounts ,, few sec passed like this ,, getting no response from her he asked again .
Maan lost : sona tum theek ho na , lagi to nahi ?

Geet came in sense nd startled with their position ,, she looked at him with wide eyes nd mumbled .. haann ,, plzz move nd let me get up .

Maan too realized their position nd startled ,, at once turn aside mumbling .. sorry .

Both got up from bed nd tried to garner themselves ,, both wr shunning their eyes ,, still feeling d warmth of their closeness .


Precap - a family day nd Maan planned something for Geet ...


Part - 103


sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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