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Posted: 9 years ago
part 100a n b
very painful for geet n maan
geet's wonds open witheach passing rituals
maan broke done parting from feet n baby as their day to leave canada nearing
maan share his wish to live with both to geet

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Posted: 9 years ago
hello babie
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Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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The Myth


( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.



Part - 100-B

Part - 101


😃 Plzz play BG ,, while reading ..

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Maan was repenting , trying his best from heart to mend everything ,, Geet's acceptance nd his family support was playing a big role to mend their broken relation ,, it was Geet's soft nd big heart , her morals nd family values which became a solid base where Maan cd place a stone to start fresh again ,, he cd move his feet towards her ,, she was clear nd +ive from her side , only he had to make her believe in him .

Maan: Geet if I'll try to manage nd accept everything there too , will u allow me ?

Geet: Maan , it's not so easy ,, it cn raise many Qs for me too which I don't want to face ,, it cn ruin ur respect nd cn affect my image too ,, there I accepted that I m married , u wr infront of me , but I didn't open this truth that what relation u have with me ? friends cn raise many Qs , so it's better to burry that truth where that was .

Maan: then there is only one way Geet .

Geet: what ?

Maan : a fresh start to get back my family .

Geet: means ?

Maan: i'll start from where I left .

Geet gave him a confusing look Maan held her hands , looked deep in her eyes with love nd expressed his desire .

Maan : will u give me chance with u Geet ? Will u marry me Geet ?

Geet startled nd shuddered with his proposal ,, he wished to have a proper married life with her , did it possible ? did he forget what relation he had with his GF ? Their closeness moments , old memories nd his love for her wdn't haunt him ,, nd most importantly if he was saying sorry nd wanted a chance to start fresh , then what he wd do if his GF come back to him nd ask d same?

Both spent a long time together , had a deep relation from yrs which cdn't be ignore ,, up nd down came in relations , what if she came back nd apologized to him ,, reminded him their old relation she desired to be with him again ,, what wd he do if she come infront of him ?

Geet looked in his waited eyes nd expressed her fear in reply of his proposal .

Geet: Maan kya sab kuch bhoolna aasan hei ? Kya kisis ki galti ko maaf kerke usse ek aur chance dena chahiye ?

Maan: we know Geet that life never stopped ,, learning from my mistakes I want to move on ,, want to be with my family .

Geet: Maan what'll u do if ur GF comes to u nd apologize in same way, said sorry for her mistakes , nd wish to live with u again ?

Maan's face turned ash listening Geet's words ,, hit him hard ,, it was her insecurity nd lack of trust in him ,, she feared to make him a part of her life ,, even he didn't think over it that how wd he react if any day Sam came in front of him ?

Geet's words made him mute,, she knew his ugly past , expressed her doubt on him ,, it was quite possible for her to raise this doubt ,, he looked at her painfully .

Geet: bolo Maan kya tum usse ek aur chance de sakty ho ? Kya tum apni GF ki galti ko bhool ker usse maaf kar sakty ho ,, jaa sakty ho uske paas ?

Maan looked at her hurt nd humiliated ,, his whole body shuddered ,, Geet was staring at him gravely like his reply wd be a verdict nd decide their future for ever .

Maan felt a knot in his throat , gulped hard ,, kissed her hands nd nodded in a No ,, spoke in a heavy nd rueful voice , but there was a firmness in his words .

Maan: No , never Geet , how cn I repeat same mistake again ,, now I cn't think for that in my dreams too ,, I regret what I did , then how cn I move on that way again , never.

Geet: why ? u did mistakes saying sorry nd want to move on with me ,, only bcoz of ur baby ,, u loved her , submitted to her, then how cn u be happy with me ? how cn u deny her for giving a chance ,, if u deserve then she too deserve d same .

Maan hurt: it proved that was not love ,, that was only my blind attraction ,, in pure love ppl sacrifices ,, they give , compromise , want happiness for their love ,, there is no place of manipulating nd snatching ,, never ask compensation for their hurt ,, wish to remain together in all thick nd thin ,, swear to live together in all odds ,, respect their love , but what was there in my case ? Nothing ,,(Maan looked deep in her almond eyes )

Geet that was not love only my blind obsession nd her greed for rich nd luxurious life ,, her main attraction for me was my bank balance nd when that finished she showed her true side ,, she cursed my family for stopping my money nd lastly in her sickness put all d blame on me nd demand compensation .

Maan took a deep sigh ... tell me Geet was that love ?

Geet didn't reply only staring at him , but her heart said that he was saying right .

Maan: u didn't know me nd my family ,, I hurt u nd ruined ur all happiness nd dreams ,, u too rejected our relation nd broke all ties , that was quiet possible in that case , bcoz I put u in that situation to take that step ,, but u never show ur back when it comes d time to fulfil ur responsibilities ,, u wr hurt nd angry , but u nourished that new life which was d result of my bad behavior ,, u didn't hate him ,, never asked any favour from Khuranas ,, even u bore pain nd accepted to come here for d respect of this family ,, Geet u nourished this broken relation solely .

Geet: no Maan ,, I didn't , I hate u a lot , but when I thought about my baby I wished a perfect life for my baby ,, surrounded with all relations , a family full of love nd care for d baby ,, u didn't recognize me in college , that was an insult for me nd in my anger for u I decided to hide everything , don't know how nd why u told about me to ur family .

I was angry with them too , but they wr always nice to me , nd bocz of their selfless love nd care I decided to co-operate .

Maan: Geet all wr right at their places , it was me who was wrong nd give pain to all ,, ruined all d happiness of family , nd when God give me a chance to mend everything then how cn I think to go back in dark .

I know I wounded u badly ,, I don't deserve ur love nd care , but u nd baby deserve ,, I want to do everything for ur happiness , plzz let me do .

Geet: nd how u'll manage? Things scattered nd become complicated ,, I m living in Canada now, have a family there , i m adopted by Ma nd Pa ,, now Viv is a Canadian nd I m a single parent .

Maan: that's why I m saying that I have to start where I had left ,, I want to marry u again Geet.

Geet : without telling everything to Ma nd Pa I cn't think for this , u have to talk about this in front of them .

Maan : as u wish sona , i'll do anything to get u back in my life .

Geet : Maan , think twice then decide , still I m saying that u r free from our side nd I won't bother u , don't have any hope from my side in this relation ,, it's really tough for both of us to forget that past .

Maan sadly : I know ,but i'll try my best to make new beautiful memories over those bitterness , I cn't erase them forever , but cn try to lessen d bitterness ,, ur lil support was enough for me ,, u nd baby r beside me , close to me that is more than sufficient for me , our friendship is sufficient for my happiness .

Geet: r u sure u cn live ur whole life like this ?

Maan smiled sadly: I have lost that right nd place where I cn hope for love ,, giving me place in ur nd baby's life is a big support for me ,, thank u so much sona , I promise u that I won't disappoint u this time ,, i'll prefer to die before hurting u .

Geet: Maan ,I don't want anything for me, , but my baby deserves every right for his good future ,, I want to give him all d happiness .

Maan: I m beside u for this , ur wish is my command ,, u don't need to think , just tell me about ur wish .

Geet smiled : thanks for this concern ,, ur nd family's love nd care for our baby is enough for me ,, he got his family that is precious for me .

Maan: nd ur smile is precious for me ,, Keep smiling sona ,, thanks for everything Geet ,, thank u so much.

Maan beamed nd hugged Geet overwhelmed ,, he felt relieved from a burden ,, Geet allowed him to start a new life with them ,, sply accept him as Viv father ,, he thanked God inwardly for his mercy nd to bring back Geet in his life .


Precap - A sweet morning ... Maan showering love on his family ...


Part - 102


sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi Valli ..🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
hello babiedi vallidi...
main dinner karke aayi 30 mins me...
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Originally posted by: CrazyEyes

hello babiedi vallidi...

main dinner karke aayi 30 mins me...


Hi Dona..

dinner itni late ku..?
Ok , i m here ..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Hi Dona..

dinner itni late ku..?
Ok , i m here ..

aaj ek film dekh rahe theuss chakkar me kuch zyada hi late ho gaya...
aagayi 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey Dona 🤗
how are you ? how was your trip ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
m good kuhu...
how are you??
my trip went well...enjoyed time with dadu n dadima...but with nearly no net missed you all n GF 😳

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