This story is really very special... A different concept which is handled so superbly by u... Angel mitu ki kahaani hai niraali..
Geet is taking her love to maan as a sin... Maan nor her family had shared such thoughts, and her such feelings had brought this sin mentality in her... Maan bhi tho aankhein hote hue bhi andhe jaisa kaam kar raha tha ab tak... future mein jab sab track pe aajaayega i want mitu to take sweet sa revenge on maan for all this... itna tho bantha hai...
Geet is taking her stay in london away from all as a punishment... but i think its good in this way ... other wise she would not been strong enough to stay there alone
and complete her studies... if she comes to know what happened in india ya about maans feelings... she will not stay back in london... she will wish to go back to her
angel ... so i too feel what u have planned is just perfect though kabhi kabhi red smileys ki baarish karne ka mann kartha hai tumpar for making maaneet seperate and
far away...
Mitu ki mooh se angel sunke ... maan became statue kya... kitna gussa aaya mujhe... "mituuu" aise waapas bulaa leta tho kya chala jaata... but after some time when i took a time to relax and think... fir socha if maan had talked to mitu kya hota... mitu would have known ki he is not angry on her aur agle hi flight pakad ke aa jaathi waapas... then what about her studies? and also what about maan falling in love with geet? tho i think jo hua acha hua...
new entry... Lucky... maan ne bheja... haayee... ithna pyaar ki india mein tassalli se bait nahi saka mitu ke baare mein sochke... tho bodyguard ko bhejj di... but maan kab samjhega... abhi bhi he is like karta hoo ya nahi karta... tubelight kahinka...
mitu is said to be the innocent, immature one here... compared to maan... but kuch maamlon mein mujhe ulta lagtha hai... maan is like addicted to mitu... he is thinking all the time of her still he doesnt realise its love... at last mitu her self had to come and make him realise and say those magic words...
the story is really magical... maaneet ke na hothe hue bhi maaneet ka ehsaas dilaatha hai in each line and update... pat on ur shoulder on my behalf buddy for a very well done job here...
Edited by -lakshmi- - 9 years ago
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