KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#4, pt23/pg3...27nov

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Maangeetlove7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

I waited so long!!! The update was worth the wait tho! Love it! I hope they don't die :(

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storytellerm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

wow
they r going to do it
hehehehe
awesome part

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angeldream14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Amazing

Finally they r gone be one

So Geet had realize her love for him

N will she die or will this bond them more

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

She could not ran away n came back to him...they r going to b one but what will b happened after that

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Shruthe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Congrats on the new thread...

Phew.. am so late...

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Shruthe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Loved the update..

Surely this was a big turning point in the story..

Though it was sad to see previously Geet feeling down coz of Maan ignoring her, it was just for her own good..

he loves her so much that he actually had to hold back and in order to avoid he chose to ignore her n be rude..

but then with Geet partially hearing the chat with the doc, he had to explain..

Geet doesnt seem to know anyone in her family to be a werewolf.. but that whole case is what causing the danger at present..

i was actually so anxious when Geet decided to run as per his words.. coz if she had run far n away, there would be nothing left in their story.. their love..

i loved the way you had put in the previous confessions of maan in this part.. it was actually very necessary to understand the decision of geet to get back to him.. He loved her. she was his mate.. and he would do anything n everything for her.. and if the same situation happened with their role reversed, i dont think he would ever leave her just to save his own life and live a little long..

So i loved the part where she decides against her better judgment and gets back to him.. and i absolutely loved their conversation..

and i need to mention.. I absolutely love the name he calls her.. SUGAR.. ❤️☺️

and with the whole revelation and all of it comes their need to be together with what little time they have got..

Iam just waiting to know what would happen when they copulate.. would there be any thing happening .. and then there is this book that only she can read.. surely all of that cant be of no use..

I want another update sooonn..

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jasmine15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Geet feared first for dying. Maan ask her to run away n she did..but later she left she miss him..c cudnt stay away n even realized he too wud die, if c did. She come back n maan was elated...he won't let anything happen to dem ..She came to know where he was from days..hiding himself so dat he don't hurt her n make love..As its full moon,..n geet herself ask dis time ...her approval n demand surprised him..n now dey on d way to b one ;) I love dis story alot..

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Madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Part 23 - Thnx for updating. In the start it was too painful. I thought they will be separated when he told her the truth. First she will die and eventually he will. He asked her to run from him to save her life little more and that's why he was hiding in underground just to pass this full moon time. She could see how much it costing him pain and agony not be with her, just to save her. He asked her to ran and she did. After recalling what he said earlier she made her decision as anyhow both were going to die then why not live together. And she agreed with his long-awaiting-desire submitting fully. He assured her that he will do anything to find a solution to this. Their mating was so passionate and his wolf was fully woken up to get his desire fulfill and give her full satisfaction.

Waiting for more.

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Auchi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Wow update finally. Was waiting for the up date for so long dear. Please dont quite it complete it dear. I just love the story. Hoping to get regulare up date from now. Plz plz do complete it.