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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC



She's on travelling mode but I'll ask again

Any news?? Did u ask??
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: doll.12


Any news?? Did u ask??



Yea I asked..she's on vacations.. usne kaha jaldi karegi update..
I hope wo wapas ajaye
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Posted: 9 years ago
thnx for the info
waiting for her return form vacation.
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Ch# 18


Pari excitement had no limit on sitting in train for the first time. It was entertaining for Geet too, but happiness was not reaching to her heart sensing Maan lost gaze. He was sitting quitely, with no emotions on his face but Geet could sense increasing storm inside him. The train finally stopped at Shimla station. Wearing their coats & jacket dy stepped down in chilly world of Shimla. Holding eachother hand tightly Geet & Pari followed Maan , looking around. The hustle bustle there, da colourful stalls everything was so fascinating for them. While for Maan da world had fogged...In his eyes, his mind was lost in memories of his Geet.


His ringing cell broke his chains of thoughts. On picking it he was able to find driver sent by managment. He turned to signal Geet & Pari to sit in car & found Pari puppy face. She innocently pointed:mujhe ye lena hai.
Maan followed her gaze & da remaining colour from his face too drain away seeing Mouth Organ. After a long pause he took out his wallet & payed for it. Pari happily took her new toy. While sitting in car she excitedly asked: Geet tumhe ye bjana aata hai?
Geet : bikul bhi nhi.
She asked Maan : aap ko aata hai papa?
Maan sat in car & nodded in determined No.


They walked inside da cozy, little cottage. A tidy kitchen, a small living area wid a working fire & comfortable bedroom wid attached washroom.. it was beyond perfect. Pari rubbed her palms together: wow its so lovely.ab dekha car men aate hue, Shimla is so beautiful. hum buht ghummenge gey.
Geet took her hand & guided her to room: pehle fresh ho kr, khanna kha kr khana khao.a ur rest kro.

Maan went out of cottage,f eeling suffocated. She was in sky, she was in stars, she was in air, she was everywhere. He took out mouth organ from pocket, which Pari had forgetten in car. And than his lips leading on his heart played dt memorable tone. Even after so many years he didnt miss a single beat. He opened his eyes & found Geet standing with a coat for him. He stammered, taking da coat from her, started walking inside. Geet followed him inside bedroom taking quick steps: hum kl subha hi wapis chle jaynge.
Maan turned & looked her in shock.Geet :men Pari ko smjha lungi.Kisi aur jga chlte hein.

She finally added: mein janti hun yahan tumhari yaddein hein..Shimla men reh kr tumhe buht takleef ho rhi hai,khud ko itni tkleef mt do.
How she always hear his unspokble words? Their eyes fall on Pari who was staring dm wid sad & confuse eyes, standing at washroom door.
She walkd to Maan ,in worry: aap ko tkleef ho rhi hai? Aap ko mere sath yahan acha nhi lg rha?


Maan sat on his knees, cupping his daughter face.. his treasure which he will cherish at every cost: tum mere sath ho to kese kuch acha nhi lge ga? Sb acha hai, Shimla bhi buht acha hai..buht beautiful hai. He added in a promising tone, a promise to her ,a promise to himself:aur hum yahan beautiful memories bnaey gey.
Pari gave him wide smile: love u papa.
He picked her in arms & placed her on bed: chlo,lets sleep. subha ghumne jaeynge.
Pari excitedly: wow..mein Geet aur aap sb sath ek room mein soeynge.itna mza aaeyga.
Geet who was still smiling on watching papa daughter love, frozed realizing Pari words. Maan tucked sleepy Pari in blanket & went to washroom. When he returned Geet was still standing, awkwardly looking around da room. He sat on his side,placing third pillow on da other side of Pari he spoke to her: so jao..subha aankh nhi khuli gi.


Without meeting his gaze she lay on her side, facing away from them. He switched off da lights. In the pin drop silence, beating of her heart was sounding like drum in her ears. After few minutes, she could not help herself any more & turned.Tears of joy filled in her eyes on seeing her dream in reality. She with Maan on a same bed,with Pari between them,under one blanket like a FAMILy.

A stolen moment,a dreamy bubble...but she choosed to act on Maan words. She will not miss this one & only chance. She will make beautiful memories of her life. She cuddled to Pari & slowly placed her hand on Maan hand,unaware of da fact sleepy Maan was infact not sleeping.

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The resort management did their best job too in breakfast. The odd expressions on Geet & Pari face was not because of taste but of Maan words. Maan looking through da tourist catalog: north hill buht unique hai, phir temple jaeynge wo 100 years se bhi zyada purana hai. us area men ek church bhi hai,famous for its interior.
He looked up at them, getting their silence he asked: plan theek nhi hai? tum ne kahi aur janna hai?
Pari & Geet nodded in yes & dn spoke one by one: shopping, park, boating, movie.
Maan looked dm stunned & keeping da magazine down: ye sb to Delhi men bhi skta tha phir yahan aane ki kya zrurt thi.
Geet & Pari lowered their eyes. He enterd inside washroom taking his bath robe. Seequizng tooth paste on brush he announced: jb itni lambi outing list bnai hai to tyar bhi jaldi ho jao

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He closed da bathroom door. Pari jumped on bed in joy, Geet too joined her. They both froze in embarrasment as Maan opened door of washroom hearing da noise. With brush in his mouth he only shook his head & closed the door again. While Geet & Pari laughed & hugged eachother.

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At Night"


On Pari touch Geet opened her one eye. Pari whispered: mujhe bhook lagi hai.
Geet signaled her to brought her ear closer: mujhe bhi.
Pari slowly sat up, assured herself by looking Maan who was in deep sleep & signaled Geet to got up. They finally let their lungs breath when dy closed room door behind them. Feeling cold in their night pajamas dy quickly moved to kitchen. Geet : Maan ne kitna kaha tha naa dinner krne k lye.cinema men dusri movie naa dekhne bhet te to dinner miss na hota.


Pari too proud like her dad to accept her mistake: to us waqt bhook nhi thi, abhi lg rhi hai.
Geet opened fridge but found nothing: to khanne bhi ussi waqt tha, abhi nhi hai.
She saddly cupped her face: mere peyt men chuhe cricket kheyl rhe hein; subha tk to sari dunya k world cup ikhte ho jaeynge inke pass.
Geet smiled : dnt be sad..kuch krti hun men .umm pasta bhi nhi hai.
Taking out vegetables from fridge Geet asked: pizza chlega?
Pari licked her lips: you r da best.
Geet laughed: chlo phir meri help kro,jaldi bn jaeyga.
Geet prepared da dough while Pari washed vegetables. They both frozed hearing Maan voice: Kahan ho?Pari..
Pari hold her head: agr pizza bnate dekh lya to phir se dant padegi k movie kyun dekhi?khanna kyun nhi khaya.
Geet : jaldi se sb kuch hide krte hein.

Maan sudden voice made Geet & Pari jump in shock. Geet quickly kept things back in fridge. Pari stood up on table & pushed da flour jar back in cabinet. Pari quickly slipped down.as Maan walked in kitchen.

Maan :itni thand ho rhi hai, aadhi raat ko tum kitchen men kya kr rhe ho?

Geet & Pari remain rooted in their spot,trying their best to hide cutted vegetables nehind their back

Pari pointed toward Geet : isko pani peena tha.
Geet gave her a look, than spoke: isko bhi.

Maan narrowed his eyes: chlo..wapis room men.

They nodded, Maan was about to turn when da heavy bag pushed da flour jar, which was kept in wrong position in their hurry, slipped from. cabinet & covered Maan in flour...
Maan Khuranna covered in flour, no doubt da sight was funny but da situation was equally dangerous. Instead of Geet pleading gaze giggles escaped from Pari lips. Getting Maan killing look Geet slowly: bhook se neend nhi aa rhi thi to Pizza bna rahe the, jaldi men jar galt rkh dya. sorry


He tried to jerk off da flour from himself when his eyes noticed his own reflection & he brust into laugh.
Pari & Geet watched him without blink. State of their disbelief was written on their pretty faces. His laughter stopped noticing their shocking face but he continued to smile: mein fresh ho kr aata hun,jaldi kro mujhe bhi buht bhook lagi hai.
He went while Pari to shocked Geet : Geet dekha tumne? Papa can smile.
Geet who was still in dazed state shook her head in yes.

In the warmth of their bed dy attacked da pizza. Maan fnishing first leaned back to bed. As Pari & Geet extended their legs he ordered: wash ur hands & brush..aese nhi sonna.
Wid full stomach & sleepy eyes Geet picked plates & Pari kept away cold drink glasses. Both looked at eachother as Maan started snoring. Pari signaled Geet & refusing his order dy both slipped in blanket too.


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After a long enjoyble time in park they were taking lunch in open resturant near lake. Geet gave Pari warning glare as instead of eating she was secretly feeding kitten under their table. Pari signaled Geet as da kitten roamed to her side. As Maan got distracted by a phone call, Geet moved her hand under table. In getting no response Geet & Pari peeped under table but found no one there. They lifted up their head in disappoinment. Their eyes wided in shock on finding da kitten on Maan lap. To Maan narrowed eyes they gave him sheepish smile.
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While doing shopping in mall Geet picked one red t-shirt from men's wear area. Pari showed her thumb in approval & went to Maan taking it. After a moment of thinking Maan took it.Pari again went to Geet in happiness. Geet happily select shoes for him & sent it wid Pari. After sending many items Geet excitedly picked Pink tie for him. She turned but found Maan standing instead of Pari. His brow raised & hands filled wid her selected item. She turned pink & giving him fake "I dont know" look,quickly walked away from there.
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Pari happily jingled her cute bangles. Geet kept back da bangle on counter she liked from samples. They were about to went when to Geet shock Maan picked da bangle & asked to pack its set. He walked away widout meeting her gaze while she followed him wid a dreamy smile.
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Maan came out of bed for da 3rd time & still found them in looking jewellery dy shopped today. Like an annoying teenage boy he picked it from there & taking advantage of his height kept dm above da tallest shelf. Instead of their protest he slipped in bed wid a content expression. Accepting their defeat they too joined him for sleep.
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Geet was not able to move her eyes from him. He was looking deadly handsome in his new red t-shirt. Pari threw snow at her to caught her attention. She gave her teasing smile as her papa didnt noticed her mishivous action. As Maan got busy wid his incoming call, Geet slowly stood up from bench & walked behind Pari, continuosly hitting Pari wid snow

. Between her laughter she finally noticed victim of her attack was Maan dis time,instead of Pari.
Showing her tounge Pari run away, Geet tried to follow her but lost her balance. Maan tried to hold her but slipped himself too. They rolled in slippery snow, finally stopped on Maan on top of her. The spell of their just inch away closness broke by Pari musical laughter. Maan got up,offered Geet hand to stood up. She slowly hold it & stood up.Maan ran behind Pari & picked her in arms while Geet was standing looking at her hand.
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Maan sleep broke, he tried to turn to other side but felt resistance. He opened his eyes & found Geet pressed to him wid her arm wrapped around him. He slowly turned but she again kept her arm tightly: baahir thand hai,soti raho.
So she was considering him as Pari. He tried to lift her fingers one by one but she pressed her hand again: tang mt kro..thandh lg jaeygi.
Maan :t handh k dar se kya sara din sote rhenge?

When instead of Pari chirpy voice, his husky voice melted in her ear she opened her sleepy eyes & jumped up. Geet slipped from out of bed as Pari walked inside wid red envelope in her hand. Geet :itni thand men tum bahir kya kr rhi ho?
Pari walked to her: door pr knock ho rha tha.manager uncle ye de kr gaey hein.
Geet opened it: party ka invitation hai.
Pari: wow..papa jaldi ready ho jaey,i love party.
Geet : raat ko hai,abhi nhi hai.
Pari: pr hume tyar hone men to time lge ga naa.
Maan : good..aesa kro,tyar hona shuru krdo.aaj hum kahi nhi jaeynge tum log bs tyar honaa.
Pari made face: ab itna bhi time nhi lgta.
Maan laughed while Pari jumped in bed too.

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Maan horrible doubt cleared as hotel car stopped on Shimla Lover Point. Geet & Pari looked happily around.Maan colour changed to white as memory washed over him. In pain his eyes shut close as da wind whispered his wife voice in his ear. Why fate is this much cruel. Why it bring him to dis place years ago he had proposed his wife, his love here. His chest heaved wid intense pain.

Geet feeling cold in her red dress, come back to car for taking shawl & found Maan standing there: kya hua?
Pari too came running: wahan aao naa itna maza aa rha hai.
Maan looking in space: car men bheto,hum wapis ja rhe hein.
Geet looked him in confusion. Pari protested:kyun papa?itna mza aa rha hai.mujhe nhi jana.
Maan brust into anger: kahan naa mene car men betho.
Geet wrapped arm around scary Pari & made her sit in car.

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Geet walked out of room after making Pari sleep. She found Maan on coach, drinking 2nd bottle of brandy. In whole way Maan had not uttered a single word. Geet slowly:r aat buht hogai hai, so jao.
On getting no reply,she turned back in sad disappointment. But stopped in her way hearing his voice: mene geet ko wahan propose kya tha.


Geet turned & looked him in shock. Staring at his glass he continued lost in his own world: mein pehli baar train mein bhi uske sath hi betha tha.


Geet slowly sat wid him as he continued to tell her their each moment: mere office mein job krti thi. Pehli nazar mein hi wo mujhe employer se zyada lgi thi.. apne naam ki trhan thi . sur rang. Muje flute bjana sikhaya, painting sikhai..hasna sikhaya. Jb dad kop ta chla wo naraz hogaey.. wo job chod k chli gaii...24 ghante k andar mein apna sb chod k uske peeche chla gya . meri mohabbat ki taqat thi ya uske baba ji k tawiz ka jaddu dad maan gay... hmari mohabbat jeet gai .khwabo se bhi. zyada khubsurat life thi...

Geet : phir..kya hua?

Maan after long silence: mene use maaar dya.

Hope u like. Hit like do comments. Eagerly waiting.

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Posted: 9 years ago
It was amazing. Maneet with pari went to shimla. Maan was little lost as it is the same place where he spent beautiful moments with Geet . but for sake of pari , he decided to enjoy instead of going back. Three of them enjoyed every moment. That kitchen part was so cute. It was the moment of perfect family. Everything was going smooth until that party moment. That party was held on the same place where maan had proposed Geet . it was unbearable for maan to stay there so he went back taking them both along with him. In this process maan hurt pari.first time during the trip maan started to have drink n finally he was opening his heart in front of geet.last part.was shocking. Maan killed Geet . what does it mean. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
maan turned pale entering shimla
his wifes memories made him sad
geet said they would go back
she will manofy pari too
but maan accepted to stay for pari n make new memories
the stay of shimla was like a cute family enjoying their holidays
maan smiled n took them for outing too
finally they went to the place where maan proposed his geet
which made him upset
they w ere back n maan sharing about his wife to geet
last sentence...why he said so he killed his wife
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update pari and geet so cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
They were enjoying in simla
Totally a different maan
Pari and geet r so happy with each other
Maan opening up
And speaking his memories geet
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amazing update.

Maan is opening up..he agreed to the travel to this place where he had spent some beautiful moments with his wife in the past, but the same memories are haunting him now..still for Pari and Geet, he was there.
loved those moments they enjoyed there and created beautiful memories to cherish.

Pari is just adorable, she is combination of cuteness, naughtiness, innocence and understanding attitude..the way she asks questions in her innocent way, she manages to pull the strings of heart for everyone around.

and the shocking revelation in the end..why did he say he killed his wife, and if he thinks it that way then the pain he feels is too much deeper than that meets the eye.


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