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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part main comes close to geet and then left he said sorry feet feels hurt and thinks main regret s their moment s geet doubt that main and Sam run realition ship nice continue soon
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I'm sorry..it was a mistake..we shouldn't have crossed our limits ..i'm really sorry..
These were the only words that were ringing in geet's mind since last week..his these words left geet to think whether for maan their closeness was a mistake??that he apologized??

When he kissed her she felt like he too love her now , that feeling was so amazing to know that finally ur love too love u but that sorry ruined everything...she didn't even get to cherish her happiness because that sorry bomb was dropped on her!

That night geet didn't came out of her room, not even to say him goodbye as he had a flight to catch in midnight for newzeland..neither did he came to see her..maybe the situations took that kind of turn that both were not able to face each other..spending whole night in thinking about maan's sorry..she was not able to conclude what he wants...but going by her nature , she thought to solve it herself ..she can't wait for him to speak up..finally making up her mind she decided to call him and talk to him on this topic...but to her surprise he didn't even picked her phone up.. thinking he was busy she let it go for one day and thought to call him next day...but again the case was same... plus the rumors which were making headlines in gossip world was also spoiling her peace..one day there was news of sameera enjoying her vacations with her ad in new zeland..geet was not that dumb to believe in this bullsh*t as she know that they are there for work not for vacations..other day there was sameera's interview asking her about her relationship status and about rumors of her link up with her ad to which she just replied no comments!..now this worried her as she thought why didn't she denied the rumors..but then shrugged this news also..

she daily use to call him at least one time but he never responded to her call expect last day and what he talked she was not able to make a head or tail out of it...his this behavior and other factors( though she was denying but they were affecting her )was getting on her nerves now...and she decided something in her mind!

Whereas on other hand what maan was thinking was something else..first that intimate encounter with geet was something he never thought of..yes he love geet but then that...it was not acceptable to do something like that..that too before any commitment from his side..yes they were already engaged but then it was arranged ..it was their family who bounded them in this relation so it didn't give him any right on geet...he wanted to confess first then only he wanted to take any further step in their relation..after that encounter with geet he was so in guilt for crossing his limit with geet before any commitment that at that moment what he blurted out in guilt ..he didn't even realized..he just spoke few words and came out of the room..the situation had turned so awkward for maan that going away from there was only option left for him to do and he did..

Next few days he spend in thinking what to do now..in between he did see geet calls which she did every day..but he didn't picked it up because he didn't knew how to talk to her..or what to talk to her..nothing...in short he was not yet ready to face her...so he avoided her calls and geet just called once in a day so avoiding her calls was not so hard for him too..
Finally after one week, maan came to a conclusion to confess his love to geet..now he can't wait for right time..if he will not confess then how will he face her..how will he answer her questions which might be running in her mind right now..in between he also noticed geet's call and picked it up..taking a deep breath he said..
Maan- hello...
Geet- maan...she was going to continue but maan cut her in between..
Maan- geet I'm returning next week and I need to talk to u and its serious...
Geet- serious talk ..what??
Maan- that u will get to know..
Geet- but??
Maan- bye geet! , and then he hanged the call...he thought may be now she will stop calling him and might have understood that he needs time...but he didn't knew how much frustrated he had made her in all this...in his self realization he had taken so much time that he failed to realized that how much he had hurted her.. maybe the reason for this can be his over functioning brain which was trying to balance his professional life plus was always lost in thinking different ways how to propose geet..when it comes to creating different scenario's for a hero to propose the heroine in his films..his brain was super active in giving ideas but when it comes to himself ..many materialist things used to come in his mind but then he misses the actual feel in that and use to reject all the ideas..after a lot failed attempts to think a way for proposing geet and making her feel special , he finally finalized to book a whole restaurant for geet..so there they could get the needed privacy and he can propose her and he will do it right after landing in Mumbai..he will go to their flat no matter what geet will be doing he will pick her up and will give her the surprise..may be after hearing him out , she forgives and accept him happily!
2 weeks have passed..their shooting schedule in new zeland was over and today whole team was coming back..maan was ready to implement his plan..the restaurant was already booked..he was just waiting for plane to land..so that he can run to his geet and confess his feelings but he didn't know what toffan(tornado) was waiting for him...
The plane landed on Mumbai airport, maan along with team members were moving towards the exit of the airport when suddenly maan's eyes landed on a similar figure..at first he was not sure whether she is the one whom he is thinking or someone else..but when she lifted her eyes and looked at him..he didn't need anymore confirmation to say its geet only..maan's steps halted at his place ..while geet with brief steps moved towards him.. now they were face to face with each other..
Seeing Geet this silent maan got the intuition of something is going happen now..geet glared at him..her eyes contained some strange kind of emotion which maan witnessed for the first time..was it anger..pain or something else..he didn't knew..
Maan-g.. but before he can utter her name , he was cut in between by geet's next action.. still glaring at him..she removed her engagement ring from her finger and passed it to him..
Geet- here, without any emotion she passed it to him..
Maan(confused)- geet ye??
Geet- what do u accept me to do after ur sorry!
Maan(full confused)- sorry??
Geet- hmm..the sorry!
Maan(still confused)- geet what are u saying..let's go home we will talk there.., maan tried to grab her hand so that he can take her home..but geet jerked his hand
Geet- no.. I have a flight to delhi in next 2 hours!
Maan(shocked)- what!
Geet- yes!
Maan- but why??
Geet(shook her head while looking at him..her eyes were filling with tears now but she still mentioned her composure)- after all that u r still asking why!
Then it clicked maan , that she was still angry on him for his in descent act which he committed that night, bending his head down he spoke, geet I'm..i'm really sorry..but please try to understand I didn't do that intentionally..it just happened i..
Geet- again sorry!, mocking him..she grabbed his hand and placed the ring on his hand..enough maan..now u don't end to say sorry again and again..its over..giving him a painful look she turned to go away from there..but maan grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him..
Maan- geet please don't go...give me one more chance..give our relation one more chance please...
Geet closed her eyes in pain, why u need one more chance maan .. I don't want to force myself on u..painfully she said and tried to free her hand from his grip..
Maan- geet why are u doing this please..please give me one more chance...maan pleaded..till now he was thinking that geet is leaving him because of his act on that night..while geet was still in this misunderstanding that he was still guilty about their closeness..
All the team members who were with maan looked at maaneet to figure out what's going on..at the same time sameera along with her dad too came there and looked at MK and the girl with him..
Seeing sam there , geet's anger and pain doubled...and with a strong jerk she freed her hand from maan's grip..
Maan- geet..
Geet- maan please...I know what u want in ur life..she said while eyeing sameera and then looked at him..just because ur dad choose me for u.. don't leave ur happiness..
When geet gave sameera a brief look..sameera understood that somewhere she is involved in this topic..and then it strike her what it could be..but before it can get worse she thought to reveal the truth..
Sameera- wait..
Both Maaneet looked at sameera..who came close to them..maan didn't liked her interference in their personal matter but then this moment he can't even stop her while geet looked at her curiously...
Sameera(she looked t geet)- hey..i'm sameera..r u MK's fiance??
Geet(looked at maan)- I used to be..but now I'm not!
Sameera- why u both are fighting??
Maan- we are not fighting! Please leave us alone!, maan straightly asked her to take a step back!
Sameera- but...i need to clear something!
Maan- now what u want to clear??, angrily he asked
Sameera- I don't know the reason of this fight but..geet let me clear this we ..i mean MK and me are not in any relationship..okay all the news reports were rumors and nothing else!
Geet- but..why didn't u cleared it in ur interviews??
Sameera- who..actually it was my mistake..my upcoming film was getting publicity with this link-up rumors so I thought..to keep it going till my film get released so..
Maan- what!..linkup rumors about u and me, when how???
Sameera and Geet(both rolled their eyes on his reaction)- MK apart from direction u don't pay heed to anything then how will u know!..geet I think now ur misunderstanding is clear..please don't misunderstand MK!, she requested geet to give maan one chance more..
It was not that geet didn't trusted maan she did..if maan would have said this then also she would have happily accepted it but her main issue was maan doesn't love her and he was sorry about their closeness so how can she still be in this relationship where there is no love from other side..
Geet- thank u for ur words sameera but I trust him and I know how loyal he is to his relation but when there is no love in this relationship then why to burden someone!
Maan- but geet u r not any burden to me..
Geet- leave it maan..don't lie ..u are still guilty about our closeness..and..but he cut her in between
Maan- what..what did u say that I'm guilty about our closeness..who said this??
Geet(confused by his reaction)- u urself called it a mistake..u said "I'm sorry..it was a mistake..we shouldn't have crossed our limits ..i'm really sorry.."..after ur these lines its clear that for u it was a big mistake!
Maan closed his eyes in realization and held his head- god! Geet that sorry was not for our closeness ..i was not sorry that we came close ..i was sorry because without any commitment I crossed my limits with u...I agree that we are already engaged and officially we are in relationship but this relationship was arranged by our parents for them we are committed but for us we are not...that why I was sorry that I came close to u without any commitment..and for that I'm still sorry geet..
Geet, briefly look at him and then automatically on her own teardrops start falling from her eyes.. u still don't love me right??
Maan- geet...
Geet- its okay..i can understand love can't be forced..it's okay.. she said this she turned around to go ..she just took 2-3 steps ahead when maan voice stopped her again..
Maan- geet please don't go..please look at me once please.. maan's pleading voice forced her to turn around and look at him and when she turned she was shocked ..maan was on his kness..
Geet- maan...
Maan- geet..i never thought to do it like this but I think babaji want this only...last time u went on ur knees to propose me to be ur bf for fake..but this time I'm proposing u to became my wife and its not fake its for real...damn real! So..(taking a deep breath) miss.Geet Handa..i love u..i love u a lot..will u be my wife??..cutely he asked forwarding the ring towards her..
Geet's eyes which were filled with painful tears filled with happy tears as soon as he said I love u..she ran to him and hugged him forcefully..the impact of hug was so strong that they both fell down...

For few seconds geet just cried holding him tight..maan hugged her back to assure that he is always there for her..after few seconds she looked at him and said..i love u too! To which maan smiled and said- I know!
Geet(made a face)- how??
Maan- like u can understand me ..i too have started understanding u !

Both were lost in each other until sameera's voice interrupted them..
Sameera- guys bas karo ab...
That's when they both realized where they were and what they were doing..maan looked around him..only to see people surrounding them ..immediately he got up taking geet along with him..

Presence of so many people around them , made maan feel bit embarrassed but was happy to have a happy geet in his arms!
Sameera- wahh! What a way of proposing MK..ab us ring ko bhi uski sahi jagah pe puchado!
Maan looked at the ring and then at geet...geet herself forwarded her hand towards him , while maan again made her wear that ring..crowd present there echoed with loud round of applause for them... geet lovingly looked at him I love u.. I love u too and both hugged each other again!

EPILOGUE

After that tamashader proposal... Maaneet life become more sweet...

Mr.Karan kapoor offered maan a three film deal to direct for his production as he was very impressed with maan abilities..
Just after the completion of 6 months , Maaneet parents called them and fixed their marriage within a month..with grand celebration they got married ..
Maan fulfilled his dream of becoming director and after the deal with KK productions there was no turning back for him , with every new film he tasted success only...
But in all this too..he never let his father down..after getting a good name in film industry maan opted to director only one film in an year..so for 6 months he used to give his whole to his film while other 6 months of the year he used to give it to kc and help his wifey ...now Kc was handled by geet and she was perfectly handling it too !

Maan even didn't forget about adi's long lost dream of becoming writer..he asked about his stories ..after reading them maan realized what gem of writer adi is...maan decided to director the film having the script of adi..
With all these responsibilities too, maaneet never forget to love each other.. the love, understanding, care everything was still growing more and more for each other...

Greece

Maaneet were finally free from there commitments for the time being and what's the better way rather than having a romantic time with each other..so this time maaneet thought why not explore the same place again where they met for the first time ..so here they were in same hotel and accidentally they got maan's room which he booked that time..
Maaneet's room
Clothes were scattered here and there carelessly..nothing was at its place..but still there on bed the couple was asleep in each other arms covered by the blanket.. but soon the peaceful sleep of geet got disturbed due to sunrays..she stirred in her sleep few times trying to escape the sunlight but getting unsuccessful she finally got up..she grabbed the phone from side table to look the time..with half open eyes she looked but got shock
Geet- 11 am!!!!!!
She tried to get up and sit but maan's heavy arm around her waist didn't allowed her..she angrily tried to push it but no use.. it was getting more tighter with every push..pouting she looked at him only to get lost in his peaceful face..an automatic smile came on her face..she caressed his face with her hand..
Maan- geet..u r again getting naughty..don't blame me again for my next actions as it u who started..
Hearing him , geet slapped him playfully..
Geet- maan get up..its 11am already..remember last night we planned about our tour ..we have already wasted 3 days in this room now I don't want to waste another..
Maan opened his sleepy eyes and looked at her- who said we wasted 3 days..i don't think so..he said while pulling geet more closer to him..
Geet- accha maan aap bhot lazy ho rahe ho aaj kal..now leave me..
Maan- sab aapka asar hai mrs.khurana..naughtily he said while biting her shoulder..
Geet- maan..no..., but stopping maan from loving her was something in which geet never got success..
Maan- hmm..mummering he moved further to kiss her but geet covered his mouth before he can proceed further..
Geet- nahi..not today..maan's lets go and explore Greece as husband and wife..please..
Removing her hand from his mouth - we will do geet..but first I want my morning kiss and with that..maan sealed her lips with his...but it didn't stopped there ...😉😳
Maan consider geet as an angel in his life...who came and changed his world altogether..he knew whatever he is today is just because of geet..he achieved his dreams just because of geet..he started living his life happily just because of geet...she is his life ,without her he can't even imagine a single day of his life now!





phew! its over...😃, will miss writing it but it has to come to an end one day ...
eagerly waiting for ur reviews now..do tell how was the story..u liked it or not, ets etc..would love to read😊
it didn't know what to write in epilogue so just summarized everything..hope it was not bad😕
do like and comment for one last time please😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
End of mind blowing story
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Posted: 9 years ago
every story has to end one day-nice jorny of maneet,thodasa spice,thodasa ruthna and thodasa manana-ise to kahete hai chalti ka naam ghaddi, bye maneet and Maroon...phir milenge chalte chalte...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely ending to a beautiful story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb one finally all mu is cleared loved the dramatic proposal of maan too gud superb one loved ig
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely ending...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update and epiloque but I think u end it very early I was waiting to read more parts but 😭 hope u will update new ss soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous updatel and wonderful epilogue dear

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