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Posted: 9 years ago
Fun Filled Update
Geet plans what she and Maan will do and he has to do the last day which he agrees
she still talks so much but it almost seems now that Maan likes her useless talks
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loving the story
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy new year😊
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Happy New Year Everyone !😳
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happy new year to u too dear :)
egrly waiting for an update ...
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Part 5

Geet- except the unexcepted! What i thought that the adventurous Mr.maan will plan something as thrilling as his choices of sports but na..how wrong i was! Whole day u asked me to rest in the boring room of mine i thought kuch zayada hi special planning hogi but see what i get...a plain, boring, dinner date...

Maan- wait a second its not a date..its just a dinner..maan emphasized on the word dinner

Geet- whatever! Geet turned her face away from him

Maan- don't u get tired..i mean..from 6 days continuously we are roaming from here and there..i thought to give u a break so that u will feel fresh when u will leave but no r complaining..

Geet- i have my whole life to rest..anyways..leave it as u have planned this only so lets continue with our dinner date and then.. but maan cut her inbetween

Maan-ahh! Its not a date its just a dinner between two people!

Geet- but i will consider it as date only, what will u do.. she showed her tongue to him..

Maan made a weird face to see her these type of expressions- ahh..u..r..u..r..

Geet- i know mad..stupid.. such a bore u r maan!

Maan- u know what i shouldn't have planned this too..u don't deserve it!..what i thought chalo..koi nahi how insane she is leave it..afterall she accompanied me here and made my trip enjoyable so this much i can do..but..u don't deserve it!

Geet made a face but didn't say anything for few seconds..both stood their only , maan burning in anger and irritation ..breaking the silence geet said accha thik hai..chalo..don't spoil ur mood! But he didn't moved from his place..chalo na..geet pleaded again but he ignored romeo ab chalo bhi..u can't miss a chance of date with a girl like me..sweetly she said and held his arm and dragged him inside the restaurant with her.. maan was also used to her this behavior so didn't resist her plead any more and went with her..

Inside the restaurant

Maaneet seated on their respective place which maan booked , a sweet and romantic music was being played in the background..many more people were present there..the atmosphere was silent ,calm, composed , sophisticated everything ..geet looked around herself and made a face..

Maan- what happened didn't u liked?? Its best place here..it took me 2 hours to search this after so much of google searching and after reading of thousands of reviews i selected this place, everything is best here the food , the place , the service , the music..everything! proudly maan said!

Geet just nodded her head as she didn't want to again make him angry by saying its so boring...

Maan- should we order??

Geet- hmm...

Both read the menu and ordered their choices , maan was silently enjoying the calm atmosphere whereas geet she can't remain calm for long right..so here she started again..

Geet- maan..now u should admit that u planned a date for us,teasingly she said

Maan- its not!

Geet- don't lie..see this restaurant is full with couples only and plus the romantic music in background what should i assume seeing all this..

Maan- assume anything but not a date..i just planned this dinner to say a thank u to u that's it!

Geet- thank u ?? what for?? For annoying u??

Maan- nahi! For giving me company..i kind of enjoyed it

Geet- oh ho! Don't tell me u have fallen for u and now u r going to propose me..omg... dreamily and over dramatically geet said..

Maan- u have some mental issues i think ek normal conversation ko bhi u turn it into something else!

Geet- first about my mental issues that u r saying from day one and second u didn't understand me yet..i was just trying to add some fun in this boring conversation of urs! By the way didn't i annoyed u in these 6 days that ur pov changed for me, curiously geet asked..

Maan- no doubt u r still annoying but..but..itni bhi buri nahi ho..

Geet- sachhiii dramatically geet said...

Maan- i know its difficult to believe but yes...

Geet- aww..so sweet of u.. chalo..if i was sweet to u then now u have to come with me after this dinner..

Maan- where??

Geet- that's a surprise..wait..till then..

Maan(st)- hope surprise hi ho na ki shock but i can't trust her with her weird brain..

After that maaneet completed their dinner and came out of the restaurant..Maan start moving in an opposite from geet..

Geet- where r u going??

Maan- back to hotel..and u too come with me day is over and now ur holidays too go and sleep in ur room as u have a flight in morning tomorrow!

Geet-stop ordering me and chup chap mere saath chalo.. she started dragging him with her..

Maan- geet..where are u taking me??

Geet- after this boring dinner ..its time to have some fun buddy!

Maan- what fun are u talking about doubtedly maan asked..

Geet- soon u will know..she winked at him and continued dragging him..

After few minutes of walking , they finally reached where geet wanted them to be..Maan read the board and was shocked

Maan-PUB! Geet we r not going inside..

Geet- shut up! U said u will accompany me after dinner, now don't deny u have to come!

Maan- i never said that! I'm not coming inside and u also..this time it was him who started to drag her..but geet is no less..

Geet- maan please...please...

Maan- geet stop pleading chalo!

Geet- no..no..please let me go inside..pls..pls..pls..she started pleading continuously even sat in between the road while maan tried to drag her but her continuous pleads with now child like annoying voice made him loose and he left her!

Maan- ahhh!!! U frustrate me!!!!!!!!! Go and do whatever u want to do!!!

Geet- not without u.. chalo na..maan okay just for an hour not more than that i promise please...please...

Maan- thik hai chalo! Irritated he moved along with her..

INSIDE THE PUB

Here the atmosphere was completely opposite to what it was in restaurant loud music..crowd..uncivilized people dancing like some mad.. maan made a irritated face

Geet- cheer up maan! U r behaving as if u came for the first time in this kind of place..

Maan- shut up!, Maan was so irritated with her that he was not in mood to reply politely to her..

Geet- haww..how rude.. few seconds later accha leave it what will u have wine, vodka, tequila, or cocktail, what??

Maan gave a horrified expression to her and replied- i don't drink all this!

Geet- what! R u kidding me??

Maan- no..i don't drink !

Geet- lair..

Maan- i'm not lieing ..its truth..and if u drink then u should not haven't u heard drinking is injurious to health!

Geet-oh hello..i'm not a regular drinker kabhi kabar..just for fun.i.. but maan cut her in between

Maan- that's also not good..Geet gave a weird expression to him

Geet- u r from this generation only na?? U talk like u belong from some baba adam ke zamane ke ho..

Maan-(sarcastically)- very funny!

Geet- okay no hard drink for u soft drink toh order ke du tumhare liye??

Maan- hmm..by the way what will u drink??

Geet- tumse matlab..

Maan- that means u will drink some hard drink..then listen to me clearly if u start fainting here or behave like how alcoholic people behave then don't ever except a help from me..i will leave u here all alone!, maan warned her

Geet- don't worry mr.maan i have greater capacity not like u huh! , with that she moved from there to bar and ordered a hard drink for herself , when she was going to order soft drink for maan , an idea came in her mind to take revenge from maan for making her do all that pleads which she did in between the road..so she asked the bartender to give half glass of soft drink and mix half glass with a hard drink.. the bartender tried to oppose but she shut his mouth with few bucks!

Geet(st)- looking at his glass..its time for payback ! and moved towards him

Maan was already having headache with the loud music and seeing the youngsters here... maan looked at his watch it showed that only ten minutes have passed since they arrived..that means..50 minutes more to go..

Geet- stop seeing ur watch again n again and start enjoying time will pass more quickly then...geet suggested and offered his drink to her.. and took a sip from hers..

Geet- aa..what a taste..u know after so many days i'm tasting it..

Maan- i don't wanna know that... Dis interestingly he said and took a sip from his drink.. but the taste of drink left a weird expression on his face..its taste...

Hearing him geet thought she is caught and thought to confess it..but next set of words made her sigh in relief ..its tastes different ..but its nice i liked this.. saying this he took another sip..babaji bachha liya..thank u!

Geet- chalo..let's dance and enjoy tonight excitedly geet said..

Maan- no i don't dance..

Geet rolled her eyes on him- is there anything which u do??? Leave it..now i will not waste my time in pleading u..i'm going to enjoy..bye...

And she left to dance floor whereas maan found a small corner for himself and kept his eyes on her and enjoyed his soft drink... on the dance floor soon geet found a group of youngsters like her which have most of the girls only , she joined them ..maan didn't object as he thought she is enjoying let her enjoy..

Geet's one drink turn into 2 then 3..maan noticed it but from his perspective she was still in control and was behaving normally only so nothing to worry.. slowly slowly his headache started increasing..he thought maybe because of this loud music..he looked at his watch..just 5 minutes were left to complete one hour here ..so he got up from his seat and moved towards geet on dance floor and pulled her hand and dragged with him..

Geet- arre..maan..maan... he pulled her in front, the alcohol has already started showing its effect on her so her body was not in control and when he pulled her body collided with him , maan placed his finger on her lips and said chup! Not a word now as u said one hour...one hour is over..now its time to get back so..keep quiet and come along with me..

The intensity in his voice and in words were so much that geet didn't utter anything and simply let him drag her..Maan headache was increasing as the small amount of alcohol which he drank unknowingly has started showing its effect too..but ignoring his headache his priority was to first make geet reach her room safely! Soon they reached to their hotel and entered inside the lift ,maan's was feeling some uneasiness so he thought to let geet go from here itself..as its just one more floor and she will reach till her room..so he asked her..geet now go to ur room .. i'm going to mine..maan stopped the lift at his floor and immediately ran towards his room without looking back whether geet left or not..

Unlocking his room he immediately ran towards washroom to throw up.. without caring to lock his room..here geet who was not in her senses fully followed maan and entered in his room..she first looked here and there to locate him but soon she heard his vomiting voice..yuck..but then she felt bad for him and then she felt guilty as she is the one who is responsible for his this condition..

Geet- poor him..i will say sorry when he will come out deciding this geet sat on his bed crossed leg after removing her shoes...

Maan came out wiping his face with towel.. but seeing geet there he was surprised..

Maan- what are u doing here, i asked u to go in ur room na??

Geet- woh..woh... geet was finding words to say sorry but her intoxicated state was not helping her..

Maan- geet..woh woh band karo and go..my head is paining..i need rest..

Geet- aww..i'm sorry..she crawled to him on bed and half stood to reach his head..

Maan- why are u saying sorry..

Geet- woh..woh..

Maan- again this woh..woh.. geet please stop annoying me now..i'm tired...u please go and let me sleep..

Geet- woh.. Maan had enough now first this unbearable headache and this drowsy sensation and this geet whose record is struck on woh.. irritated he covered her mouth with his palm and told her to quiet!

Geet angrily removed his hand and said - tum meri baat kyu nahi sunte!

Maan glared her and sat on his bed- tum kuch bolegi toh na.. bas..woh..woh.. kar rahi ho..Geet again crawled to him and sat beside him- woh i want to confess something..woh.. WOH..

Maan- aahh!! Geeet!!!!!! Bas not a single word anymore..he held her face and turned it towards the direction of door ..look there's the door..jab tumhara woh..woh end ho jaye toh please waha se seedh aapne room mei cahle jaana, okay!now let me sleep.. with that he laid on his bed and closed his eyes..

Geet looked at him..he had covered his face with his one hand so that the lights don't disturb him..

Geet- so gaye...but how can he sleep..he have to first here my confession , so she poked his leg to wake him up..

Geet- maan... but he didn't responded..she again tried but same result but then she poked his stomach hardly to wake him up maan!!! And it worked kya hai??

Geet- sunno na..

Maan- kya??

He didn't get up so geet went close to him and laid beside him closely and faced him..

Geet- woh...i...i..

Maan- now i! God geet..i know u r trying to annoy me so stop doing it and sleep..

Geet-nahi sachii i want to confess my bad deed..

Maan- toh bolo na..what r u waiting for !

Geet- thik hai listen..i..woh.i..

Maan had enough now he got up and pinned her to bed enough now no woh i..bolona hai toh bolo warna i will through u out right now!

Geet got scared seeing his red eyes and quickly blurted out- i mixed alcohol in ur soft drink..

Maan- what!!

Geet- i mixed alcohol in ur drink..

Maan- what!

Geet- arre how many times should i say i mixed alcohol in ur drink..geet waited for his reaction and his scold but none came and maan just glared her angrily only..

Geet- i'm sorry..i didn't want to harm u...i did it just for fun..sachii i didn't have bad intention.. please forgive na..i'm reallly..really really sorry...

Maan left her and said- ho gaya tumhara confession now go..with that he again got back to his previous position and closed his eyes to sleep.. but geet thought that he is angry with her now also and didn't forgive her.. she went close to him and this time poked his shoulder to wake him up..maan..and that's it this time he had enough of her and this time without caring what he is doing he pinned her to bed and sternly asked what!!! What the hell do u want?? Can't u let me sleep in peace??

Geet cutely - i was just asking whether u forgive me or not??

Seeing her cute expressions maan's anger mellowed down a bit..

Maan- hmm..

Geet- hmm matlab..yes or no??

Maan- yes! Aur kuch.??

Geet shook her head in no.. toh jao..yaha se! She again shook her head in no.. then what u want to do??

Geet- can i sleep with u..woh i feel scared in my room all alone..cutely she asked, maan was already tired because of all that arguing and then his headache which is increasing minute by minute..so now he didn't have any energy to deny her which will lead to another argument which he was sure of.. and the alcohol did effected his thinking process so without any nok-jhok maan agreed and let her sleep ..separating himself from her he divided their sides on bed and slept ..

Early morning..

An alarm broke geet's sleep.. when she got up she felt a heavy pain in her head..without opening her eyes her hand reached to her head, slowly slowly she got her conscious that's when she felt as if she is trapped in some chain around her waist and legs..she tried to remove it but when her hands reach there she felt them as if they are hands of someone a fear captured her heart and soon her eyes were open ..but seeing the handsome face of maan her fear disappeared and looking at their state too it confirmed that nothing wrong has happened.. but yes their current position did made her embarrassed a bit..she tried to free herself from him without disturbing his sleep and she got successful too , after getting up she switched off her mobile alarm..

Geet- i got up hearing this alarm but why didn't he, should i wake him up?? Nahi.. how cute he looks while sleeping..hayee..she was again going to get lost in him when again a reminder alarm rang and brought her back .. she looked at her mobile to see for what she set this reminder alarm for.. and seeing it..shit! i have a flight to india after 2 hours..babaji how i forget this!.. she immediately got up to leave..but then she remembered something and turned back and looked at maan..

This man always pull her towards him the reason is still unknown to her..in her trance she moved to him and bowed down in front of him..she caressed his face lovingly as if trying to memorize his face.. unknown to her she bend close to his face and pecked his lips..bye maan... a lone tear escaped for her eye.. but soon she controlled herself and got up to leave.. reaching to door..she again turned to have his last look.. capturing him in her eyes , she left from there...



Precap- mm..now what??🤔

Edited by ..Maroon.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part...geet maan have fund on last day of there trip now they get separated can't wait to see what will happen now so update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely Update
Maan takes Geet to the restaurant and she finds it boring
later she decides to take him to a pub and spike his drink too
but at least she confessed
now its time to return to India
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome part ...maan planned a dinner at their last day ...geet teased him saying its a dinner date ;) hehehe ...geet love to annoy maan :D
after their dinner they went to a pub offcoz geet keech ke leke gyi maan ko after lot of noutankis :p
how cutely geet confessed maan that she mixed his drink ...!!! they both slept together ...awww ..!!!
continue soon...n thnx for the pm dear :)

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