The Princess and the Pauper (2) Ch 12, pg 123, new thread pg 1 **** - Page 97

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Posted: 9 years ago


uff thank God story thodi si funfilled hui...it was such a serious story...

Maan is all out to make Geet happy by flowers, aloo paratha but everything went in vain when it was Romeo enjoying them...Geet jealous of Sasha and other girls drooling...

wonderful update...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan is so happy to see geet in house.
Maan introduces geet as his wife to adi but geet rejects.
Geet thanked maan for everything he did for her.
Maan wants to say something but isn't able to.
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Posted: 9 years ago


firse emotional...
he addressed Geet as his wife in front of Adi but Geet still thinks that he is doing this just for fun... they both are making fun of her...so she cleared that it was just a namesake marriage...it pained Maan but he realized that he also said many harsh words to her when she came to him with hope in her eyes...so he is determind to never let her go from his life...he will surely make her his...

awesome update...

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Posted: 9 years ago



Avi dear 🤗


Awesome part
😆 le whole hard work went in Romeo's tummy ..
but koi na ,, MSK did again for his lady love ..😳
Adi nd Maan's moments r so sweet ..
lovely bond ..
Geet saw them fighting nd got worried for Maan...
Maan introduced Geet as his wife ,, aawww...
Geet was shocked , but rejected their relation ..😲
she said that was a favour for a friend ..
sshh,, Maan is hurt ,, very hurt.. nd realised geet's pain bcoz of his rejection. .
waiting what Maan asked ..?

Love it



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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update.
Maan introduces geet as his wife to adi but geet rejects.Maan wants to say something but isn't able to. .. She thanked maan for helping them on time When maan told her about his hp trip.She lied to him😕😕.do update soon please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay 100,000 views for the blog, how awesome is that.👏
Congratulations Avi.

Ch 8

Aww man just want to go inside this story and give her a tight hug and tell her that everything will be okay. Avi will make it so. Okay now I think I need to be admitted to the psyche ward😆
But kasama se her bewilderment, her inability to even garner some kind of anger or dislike for Maan, makes me love her all the more. Her vulnerability is like a transparent shield that she wears all the time and and bullies like Pandey take sadistic pleasure in using that same vulnerability against her.

But finally finally she has developed a backbone and stood up for herself. Good for her.

There was something about this chapter that showed the vulnerability on both their parts. Only Maan's wasn't as clearly delineated as hers, oh but you could just feel it
Edited by Susegad - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maans anger is barley contained when he sees Romeo enjoying instead of Geet. Poor guy has been loaded with so much work so that he doesn't interfere with his plan mission manofy Geet.
Haha omg, it was very entertaining to read of the little fight between Adi and Maan. Poor Adi hurt his hand trying to hurt Maan 😆😆
Geet unable to stop herself rushes to Maans defence 😳
Maan realising slowly the depth of hurt Geet is feeling and getting a taste of his own medicine. My heart broke (as well as Maans) when Geet was trying to laugh off her past and heart ache given by Maan. I hope Maan is vocal to clear the misunderstanding to avoid more dooriyan between them.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lessons in Life 101 Avi style.
That should have been the name of this chapter😆

But jokes aside simple principles such as " Strength is a state of mind" is something we all
keep practicing everyday, over and over again.

I had this saved on my computer and I am posting this here coz I think this is the essence of your Geet




I love the fact that she does not find fault in him. Within most of us there lives a jaundiced bug, who looks at the whole world from our eyes and feeds on liberal doses of criticism.
The Geet who neither faults her father nor Maan is strange creature to us.
It is like we bond through our negative interactions. If I criticize and if you do the same, than I don't feel so bad about myself. Hey look even she thinks the same, she is just like me the mind says.

So I like the fact that she is standing up for herself but I also love the fact that she is not pushing others down in her need to stand.

Oh Go that went way off tangent I think. Okay I shall zip my rambling fingers right her.😳

P.S
I knew it. Lucifer is going to roast Romeo on a spit fire and make sheesh kebabs out of him😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am lost. I am completely lost in this absolutely beautiful VM. 😳
Thanks a million for posting it on your blog with the update.
It is my new go to for romantic inspiration.
Watching such a beautiful VM after so long.

I was trying to superimpose the image of Geet in overalls to that music with our hero making googly eyes at her. I think I succeeded😉

Oh oh neither Lucifer nor Romeo can escape each other it seems. Another love story in the making...or not😆

Finally he has her on his territory. will Dadi come to know about this? I am sure she will have a lot to say about this.

Yay for Pandey rockets👏


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Ch 11
Now tell me who is this Desigirl Sasha fashioned after.
Itne acche characters tum hum readers mein se hi choonti ho😆

"Wo aa gaya! Mera Maan aa gaya! Jaanu ..".

I read that and I imagined a Sasha dressed in sequins panting and singing Piya tu ab toh aaja😆

🤣🤣
I knew it. My thought process was going in the right direction.
This is a love story to the death between Lucifer and Romeo. Geet aur Sasha toh kabab mein haddiya hai, or rather parathe mein makkhiya😆

Rest in peace Romeo. You were a great character that I am sure I will miss after this chapter😆


This one was a crazy riot.👏

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