The Princess and the Pauper (2) Ch 12, pg 123, new thread pg 1 ****

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LM1991

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Posted: 9 years ago

#551

Beautiful update, Avi! Lovely the way Maan put Pandeyji in his place.

How sweetly Maan took his wife with him to KC, it was adoreable. I hope Maan chucks out Pandeyji!

Sorry I'm not at home, so poor internet facilities. Hence very short comment!

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love2_soma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#552

maan bahut papad belna hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Teju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#553

Amazing update di... Finally Romeo played the cupid.. N MSK is in Indian paints... n he was constantly searching for her in IP.. Pandey u are gone now... somewhere convo btwn Geet n Romeo.. hint Maan that all are bechare in front of devil pandey... but I want Maan to know that somewhere Romeo has saved her always from pandeyji's torture.. kamina pandey he gave her w/o button wala uniform.. but don't worry duffer pandey.. her own Maan is there to help her.. Liked that line.. "Like a man in desert, he soaked in the sensatio of being near him...".. aap aise touchy lines likhti ho mastwali.. n then kehti ho.. we don't let U away from writing stories.. 😳 I hope Maan will understand she has misunderstood his care n guilt as just friendship n pity...

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Bhuvanaguru1986

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Posted: 9 years ago

#554

Amazing update. Loved maan so much in this update he is not going to give up until geet realise his love for her. Happy that pandeyji is out.from now on geet going to work in kc n maan is going to whoo her till she convinced. Waiting for next update.

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BloodDiamond

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#555

Chapter 9

Totally amazing talk between Geet and Dadima👏 👏 👏 her teachings are so deeply embed in her ; of what is right and what is wrong
No matter she has lost that single ray of light that gave her hope , Maan , she still would live for her father , not taking the easy route😭 felt bad for Geet
Maan is imposing whatever Geet has endured at least physically to feel how she might have felt
Both are suffering and Maan gets super possessive seeing Geet and Romeo😆
Excited for store room surprise😳

Edited by BloodDiamond - 9 years ago

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SONU_29

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Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#556

Part 10
Superb part.
I just loved it.
Maan ne geet ko apne sath kc mai rakh liya. Lol.
Storeroom scene mast.
Pandeji ka scene lol.
Thanks for pm

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Alpha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#557

Finally Pandiji has gotten his just deserts. Maan has seen through his front for what he truly is a bully and a slacker, someone who doesn't pull his own weight but blames everyone else for his incompetence.

Geet is trying so hard not to fall weak but her love for Maan is not something that she can ignore.

Maan wants another chance but his guilt is holding him back somewhat and giving Geet the wrong signals.

Waiting to see how Maan puts his plans into action now that he has manoeuvred her into working in KC.

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BloodDiamond

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#558

Chapter 10

Wow the store room part was so cute❤️ I really liked Geet managing or trying to manage the buttons herself
And Maan scolding her for changing there😛
he gives it back to Pandeyji that his management skills can get him fired😈 Maan decides to bring Romeo & Geet in KC ... I am happy Romeo is also going😆
He waned to speak with Geet mentally made a hundred plans to tell her and convince her to give him a chance
So now on way to KC
Lovely update and thanks for pw❤️