The Princess and the Pauper (2) Ch 12, pg 123, new thread pg 1 ****

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pop77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Nice part..Dadi knows Geet working in IP..Pandy is bad guy..who use stick in work palace..Geet doing pooja as bahu..no one knows..Maan wants to talk to her..but not give chance..Now Maan find out that she working IP, he might go more often to see her..

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kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Superb teaser.

I have lot of patience. Write the story as you planned.

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Doracake

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Superb update

Thanks Avi for the PW.

Geet started working and Indian Paints nd that Kammena Pandeyji wants to hit her with his ruler 😡😡

Hope Maan finds out he has been trying to hurt his princess.

Diwali scene was awesome. Maan burns her had and Geet becomes pareshan. Who is calling Maan ? Hope its either pinky or DM.

Nice Teaser

Hope Maaneet Sort out their differences

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GBR

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Awesome teaser. .n 8 don't want romance as of now for sure coz therw is so much to mend b4 moving .on

N i like the thoughts of daadi...yes she need to teach so much to geet. ..

Really Waiting for new n confident get b4 the romance.

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jyotiagarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Damn this pandey...no shame raising hand on a woman...glad romeo came to her rescue warna Maan to pandey ki jaan hi le leta..

Poor geet...hope you soon show some real lovey dovey maneet moments...waiting for some hot and happening romance in the coming updates..thanks

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Aakriti Srivastava

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

I am so sorry for the late comments but things are not going gud at my end... lots of personal and professional problems

just read part 5 and as expected it was awesome... I even cried reading Geet's condition... how can those monsters do that to her or that little angel... they are really monsters... now Maan is feeling guilty... but as I said before that I can't blame him completely as he too is a victim of circumstances but still I feel he should have listened Geet's side of story

now waiting to see how the story unfolds next... please update soon

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Shruthe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Loved the update...

So finally Geet is in his house and all she could think of his words for her to go...

How much ever hurt she is, the caring n loving she holds fr him is so much..

she couldnt see him for the fear of his anger, yet she couldnt sit idle when she saw the burn in his hand...

and on the other side Maan is not able to forgive himself for acting without knowing things.. he too loves her.. he too cant see her sad and broken.. but then he has a promise to keep.

Wondering how things are gonna go from now..

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Shruthe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Lovely teaser...

cant wait for the update..

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Kshitija

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

Wowww I just loved this part

Maan and Geet both are in pain

I always liked Romeo in the show too and this Romeo is also rocking

Pandeyji seems to be more strict than in the show

But how could he try to hit Geet with the ruler for not completeing the work

Thank goodness Romeo saved her from Pandeyji

Diwali Pooja and Geet coming in was lovely

Maan and Geet just stood out of all of them the way you described their attires

The pleasant shock and joy that Maan had on seeing Geet standing there and doing the diwali pooja was too good

Maan didn't even realise that has burnt his hand over the flame of the pooja thali

Geet's pain and her madly searching for some ointment seeing his burnt hand shows how deep her love is for him

It must have felt like heaven for them in each others arms when Geet stumbled while searching Maan to apply the ointment on his burnt hand and Maan caught hold of her.

This was beautifully written

Waiting for more such parts

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SGAYATRI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#200

Oye no milan so fast don't end the ff we can wait to see Maan going crazy for geet .Romeo making him jealous &dadi making a real princess out of geet by making her strong

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