The Princess and the Pauper (2) Ch 12, pg 123, new thread pg 1 **** - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry for the late response.. i had tears reading this part... poor geet her loved one nor the strangers acknowledge her.. pandeyji is rude😡 how can he think of a women like this.. his mother is a women too he did not fall off from sky 😡
now maan feels the pain, hope he does more to understand the pain of geet 😭

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Posted: 9 years ago



Hi Avi ...
how r u dear..?
enjoying winter ...







Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update
Maan n dadi convo was good
Maan is right... He only can rectify his mistake by being near geet
Romeo too funny
Pandeyji😡... Geet want the job... So chup chap taking
Geet remembered maan's words while entering his house
She couldn't see maan in pain.. She ran with the ointment
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

tum bhi na avi

always devilgiri😈
i was scrolling down thinking there will be maneet talk
but no..only note..
stopping at r8 point...grrr
w8ing for next


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tum bhi mujhe devil keh rahi ho?😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl.white

Hey Avi,
Ek chotu-sa teaser milega?? Pretty please 😳


kya likhu samajh nahi aa raha hai..

jo main likhna chahti hu ... does not seem to be what the readers want to read😕

chalo since u asked I will try for something 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
TEASER


It was meant to be.

As she stumbled in her hurry, she found herself in the arms of the man she loved.

As he burned in the pain of shame, his hands found the salvation for his battered soul.

The embrace made time stand still.

It could have been a second or an eon could have passed.

None of the pain he had unleashed on her mattered in that moment.

In her innocence, she had not yet learned how to "unlove" someone.

Sometimes it takes a few days or months and sometimes it takes a lifetime to forget that person and move on.

She had only but had two days. How was it supposed to undo the feelings of years?

She took his hand in hers and opened the ointment tube but was startled when he threw the tube from her hand behind him.

Taking her left hand in his, he checked the wrist which still bore faint marks on it.

As she raised startled eyes to his eyes full of immense pain, she realised he knew.

He knew!

She shook her head as if to undo the knowledge.

She had never wanted his pity.

She was not an object for his charity.

"Maan!" the urgency of the voice calling out for him startled them both.

Geet's eyes widened as she saw the person approach Maan and she stepped back from the circle of light to blend into the shadows.

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"Aur Maan? Usse main kyun na gussa karu? Kyu usse ghar main wapis le lu? Uss ne tumhare saath jo kiya uske baad .." Daadima asked, not understanding Geet at all.

"Kya galat kiya hai? Unse meri beizzati bardasht nahi hui thi. Wo nahi chahte thay ki main sadak pe aa jau. Na chahte huve bhi, meri khatir, mere family honor ke khatir unhone mujhse shaadi kar li. Main unse shikayat kyu karu? Isse badi kya misaal hogi dosti nibhane ki?" Geet asked turning away.

Maan had thought her as a friend. Was it his fault that she had thought otherwise? She had no one to blame but herself.

Daadima rolled her eyes heavenwards.

She thought to herself, I taught you many lessons in life Geet and you learned them all so well.

This time I am going to teach you something more.

A lesson in self respect, a lesson on learning to put yourself first and a lesson in getting what YOU want out of your life.

A/N: Just an advance notice to new readers. If you expect that my characters will tumble into bed in chapter 5 or 6, you will be disappointed.

Sorry, I don't know how to write like that.

Dono ko milao, milao karoge toh I will end the story fast.

Thodi patience please.



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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. Awesome teaser... So Geet got to know Maan knew everything abt her past.. Dadima planning something.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice teaser. Geet is making herself believe that Maan only thought of her as a friend.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dadi in right track.,. Self-respect is needed...hope maan wait... Till she understand... Nice precap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet is in Indian Paints with a bad boss! But Pandeyji doesn't yet know who the big boss is. If Dadima comes to know how he is treating Geet, that will be his last day on job!.

Diwali party at KM and geet in red dress. They both looked so good in that scene in GHSP.

Maan remembers Geet's Diwali wishes of past.She had her priorities straight, even then.

She stands in front of him with Aarti thaali but only his harsh words echo in her mind. But still she is not able to take his pain. She runs with ointment for him. She is really so naive and innocent.

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