SS- Udhar Ki Zindagi : Part 9, 10, Epilogue / Page 85, 92, 93 : 9 Dec - Page 67

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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful and justified end...
everyone deserved to know the truth about maan and veer...after knowing about maan and accepting veer for who he is i guess is what makes this complete...
loved the end..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Last part
amazing update
maan came to meet yash
and he said that he will come as his grandson
yash named the baby veer
veer is very happy with his life
maaneet are now complete with veer
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Epilogue
Lovely end
i always wanted to geet to know about veer's truth and i am glad that you revealed it
everyone one came to know about the truth
i am very happy that veer got his right
for his family he would be veer but for the world he would be maan
veer kept his promise that he had given to maan
perfect ending
loved it
Edited by heemasomani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful updates...
finally veer ko uska haq mil hi gaya..
it was very emotional story but very nice one... 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for this beautiful story
loved it
will miss reading it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tbis ff is ur one of the most creative one :)
Loved the concept aloottt
So whats thats not maaneet story!! Loved it!!
N the ending is superb!!
Geet gotto know the truth n she was angry!! She also silently left the house n veer.. But she noticed veers pain :(
N finally she freed veer from this hidden pain :)
N the happy ending :)
This is one of the best ss till now :D

I really wish u may never leave writing :'(

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Posted: 9 years ago
Epilogue
Brilliant update... It was a stroke of genius. This story could not have a more fitting end. My every question was answered with each loop summed up intricately. I am floored with your storytelling skills.

It was Veer's birthday and I felt really sad that he had to escape for some time with Dadima and Dad to spend some Veer time. I thought that he would have to forever live in this guilt.

But glad that Geet finally knows the truth and she became his salvation.

She finally let go of Maan and accepted Veer wholeheartedly . Although Maan was her first love but she found her ultimate true love with Veer.

She beautifully handled the delicate situation with Veer, gradually making him believe in her love for him.

Veer, my heart went out to him! He had put so much effort for everybody's happiness without bothering about his own. He lived a life in constant guilt. Ah!

Thankfully, Geet and Veer found love on each other. And ek aur wedding toh banti hai .

And it did not bother me a wee bit that it was not a Maaneet tale. This was the story of Yash and Veer & Veer and Geet. Yes Maan is eternal but Geet cannot stop livimg as he is dead.

Even when the truth was revealed, I was concerned about Geet's reaction and Veer's guilt.
Veer deserved this kind of love from Geet and Geet deserved to know her love's truth.

Looking forward to many more stories from you.

Beautiful story.
Edited by pearl.white - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful SS! loved it! read Part 9 n commented! Part 10 - lovely update! Geet has a baby boy named Veer! Emotional Yash! Epilogue - superb epilogue! so Geet knew! she accepts him as Veer and loved him! she was upset at first! she realizes n goes back! she lets him b Veer! awesome end! 👏⭐️😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-6
Maan & Yash are hiding really a mysterious truth regarding that one whole year. How come minal thakur could be maan's first wife? There must be some truth to this revelation.
Maan too was scared with the whole fiasco & lands in hospital. Still yash manage to hide the whole truth.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just loved this whole story so much. It was so emotional, heart touching, defining a beautiful family bond, specially of a father n son. this was a really different as. it was non MG BuT still it was MG. truly awesome

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