DEVIL'S POSSESSION 2 Updated Last Part on Pg 45 / 1-12-2015 - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago
Super update. Maan is so ruthless. Wants revenge from his grandfather illegal son. But now is it true that geet is pregnant. Or just igniting Maan Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
maan's revenge is taking a toll on geet... what will happen when he confronts geet, will he harm her considering she is pregnant.. poor her 😭
oh maan's step uncle is so worse that he harmed dadi and maan's parents then he deserves this 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh...😲. Wat will happen now. Fearing for geet di.. Wat will maan do now. Already he is angry and he doesn't even share anything with geet except his frustration and want and anger. With raj's words already his mind is polluted. Wat will he do if he comes to know geet is pregnant. Very tensed. Though maan had his share of sorrowful past it doesn't mean he will hurt geet.
Biting my nails as to what will happen next... Waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for comment

Originally posted by: zaara2212

maan's revenge is taking a toll on geet... what will happen when he confronts geet, will he harm her considering she is pregnant.. poor her😭
oh maan's step uncle is so worse that he harmed dadi and maan's parents then he deserves this 😡

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks sweety and wait ;)

Originally posted by: chiki143

Oh...😲. Wat will happen now. Fearing for geet di.. Wat will maan do now. Already he is angry and he doesn't even share anything with geet except his frustration and want and anger. With raj's words already his mind is polluted. Wat will he do if he comes to know geet is pregnant. Very tensed. Though maan had his share of sorrowful past it doesn't mean he will hurt geet.

Biting my nails as to what will happen next... Waiting...

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Posted: 9 years ago


LAST PART


Maan was sipping his drink in dark filled hall. His restlessness don't get anything to calm. The day she left him, Maan not able to forgot that encounter with her.

He was in rage whem he reached to his apartment where he kept her. Wild wind like him he just kicked off everything coming in his way and grasp her.



"How dare you? You have gain so much courage that you had betrayed me." His eyes were dangerous and only emitting fire. He bear any thing but not betrayal.

Geet was silent absorbing all his frustration and anger not snap even for once. "What is my punishment for betraying you." Geet's voice was ragged and edgy. She not leaving his eyes for a second and directly asked about the her fate he decided.

Maan fumed and his wild grip firmed more hurtful. "Remove it now. Its already decided then why?" Maan jerked her and yelled.

Geet not shed tears as it was expected from him. "And what if I deny?" She simply denied.

Maan firmed his fists and knee down to face her. "This is my place and here you can do only what I want." Till now Maan is controlling the lover inside her but that lover defeated by a mother and her decision astonishing him. Geet stood up and handover the keys of apartment in his hands.

"Good bye Mr. Khurana." She not waste a second and left empty handed without taking any accessories which he gifted to her.


That last words of hers still echoing in his ears. Eight months has passed and no one sees each other after that day. He needs her every day, every second when his restlessness take a toll over him but his anger not allowing him to search her again. She denied to mend before him which he doesn't afford.

"Maan sir..." voice of Adi, brought back him to senses. "Sir Raj had planned something. He wants revenge for his son's death. I think apko ye meeting cancel kar deni chahiye. As he already attack twice since his son died." Maan was about to going for a meeting which Adi don't found safe as the client call him to meet to his factory area.

Aryan commit suicide in jail after getting life time imprisonment. But Raj knew who did this. Maan's next step was achieved and now only Raj remain to get punishment for his deeds.


Maan stood up and threw his glass in bonfires. "Chalne ki tayarai karo Adi." He commands and moved into same dark room.


He turn on the lights and took fresh garland to replace old one from the frame of his dadima. "Kal main apko diya promise pura karunga dadima." He said briefly while staring at the photo frame. His eyes were burning but he not allowed his eyes to shed tears. In that attack he not only lost his dadima,but his only realtion. After that he got Geet in hospital who nursing not only his outer wounds but his soul to. With her he stayed calm and got few moments of peace. But from past 8 months she too left him.

With a sun fully dawn Maan left for a meeting. They reached to a factory at a place far away from moby areas. He went inside and same moment all doors turned locked. He looked all around and Raj appeared with his men. It was his plan to trap him but unfortunately Maan was aware about already so the fear he want to see on Maan's face was missing.

Maan smirked seeing at his foolish act. "Don't you dare. I want you to beg before I kill you." His restlessness reflected. How much he want to torture him but no use. Inspite Maan lignite his cigarette and release smoke on his face. "Ok I have something for you." He signals his men and they brought Geet in front of him. She carrying a baby of approx one month.



"Your shit which you left ages ago. But she brought it to world. Now how about I kill your baby just you killed mine." He snatched baby from her arms and she only pleading helplessly.


Maan still not effected. "Go ahead. I think you forgot that you are the one told me that it is someone else's sin. Remember. So why should I bother about her safety." Maan was calm but Adi scared for a baby as he put her on a trailer which frequently moving towards logs cutter blade.

Geet was screaming but no one pay heed to her. "So you don't mind if I kill this mistake and afterwards your keep?" He asked with a devil smile.

"Absolutely not. Coz she to ditch me." His words broke Geet beyond repairs. Her last hope died and she only left to plead for her baby's safety.

"By the way how you pay to your men after all this? As I made you bankrupt and this time your all illegal and legal accounts are sealed." The moment he revealed his all men stare at him. "Now I offer you double money he offered to all of you which he doesn't able to pay as he is beggar now. Leave him and work for me." Maan threw a bag towards their chief and ready to leave him. Adi quickly grab the baby before its to late and left the place with Geet.


Now his all men stand pointing gun on his head. "Poor uncle." Maan show fake pity. "See I have a very soft heart and I can't see your separation from your son. So Its time to say hello to him." And with the complition of his words he fired a bullet straight into his head made his leave this world on the spot.


The ruffin chief take gun from his hand and clean his finger prints then handover it to his man. In case police need to arrest then they take that man instead of Maan. Maan stare his body constantly. It gives him a piece of relief he was yearning for.


Maan step out and click one button. Which blasts the whole factory including every man inside. Maan wore his shades and glance at the ashes of factory. "I don't like back stabbers." He said and moved from there. Raj was already killed and with him his all men died. Maan planned everything but Geet's involvement made him change his plan a little bit but ultimately he got his revenge.

In KM:

"Dadima that back stabber got what he deserves. Today I fulfill my promise." His voice trembled and eyes shed tears which he held since long.

Adi came there and whispered to him. Maan once again leave KM in rush.


Geet was so scared. Her heart still thumping badly. She hold her little Angel and kisses constantly. She checks her baby's hand and legs again and again making sure her baby is alright. "Don't worry shona. Ab hum yaha nahi rahenge. We go to your nanu." She is whimpering and her eyes sheds tears.


While holding her in one arm she doing her packing to leave the place as soon as possible. These days she was staying on rent at some old house. She was happy with her baby but today seeing her in danger she scared and now don't want to risk her life.

"Where are you taking her?" This voice, send her a shiver. She doesn't want to glance back to face him.


Maan walked and came in front of her. Her hands turn ice cold. Maan lean his head and glance at the baby laying in her arms. Her small glittery eyes bound Maan at one glance. He almost snatched her coz Geet was scared to give her to him but Maan took baby from her. He hold her protectively in his arms. This touch is new for her so she start wriggling. "Relax relax its me, your Maan dadima." He said which astonished her. She was confused why he called his baby dadima.

"Maan ye..." before she completed Maan cut her in between.


"She is my dadima. She came back to me in form of my daughter. I knew it you can't stay away long from me. You know how much I miss you." He was talking to his baby not even ready to move his gaze for a second. "Just look at her. She is just like my dadima and you said she is not. You are not going to take her away." Maan stared him and his tone turned harsh.

Geet's heart skipped many beat seeing his behavior. "So you came here to snatch my Mehar from me?" Geet cried. She fears that he parted her with her love symbol.

"How can I when we both needs you badly. Mehar told your mumma how much we need her." His voice carrying a need he yearning for. She was his relief no matter how much he denied but he needs her. She is his possession and without her no one can handle his rage and frustration. He glance straight into her eyes. "Come back to me."

"Again to become your keep. No. You don't love me but I do that's why I agree to your proposals. Your every condition but now I don't want to spoil my baby's life. Kya kahenge sab ise if I carry..."

"She is my daughter. Mehar Maan Singh Khurana and no one can have a courage to say bad to my blood. You get everything you want. I am not going to offer your previous life. I am asking for marriage. Marry me and become legal daughter in law of Khurana family. Geet I agree there is no love from my side like you do but I promise I fulfill every need of you and Mehar. She is my heart beat and you are a source of my balance life. I need you to breathe. I need you to sleep with out any nightmares. I need you to love me and our daughter." Maan was very straightforward about his feelings. He doesn't give any false hope to her but told her his need. She is his possession and without her he can't stay in solace. Maan sound commanding but indeed he was pleading. Geet accept his marriage proposal because she had a trust on her love. She had a faith that may be one day he to feel same love which she feels for him.

"Will you marry me?" Maan asked and she nods in yes. He embraced her to, with their daughter. Mehar to threw her legs and hands to reach to her parents as she to showing her happiness. Maan kissed both and cocooned them in his protective arms...






Hi friends,
So here is the last part of my OS - "DEVIL'S POSSESSION 2"
I know many are not happy with this end where Maan not accept his love. I know I leave many loops here. But wanna clear you all that its just a small thought of mine and OS me jitna show karna mujhe theek laga maine kiya.

About Love story, then every story is not a perfect love story.

May be I think in future to elaborate it and then I think over it. But right now I don't have any wish for it.

And about epilogue, please don't even think of it. Coz what I thought, I wrote already.


Thanks for reading ❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the update dear. Maan took revenge against his Raj . Gosh! I was scared there for Geet and her baby.
Maan expressed his need for Geet and her baby and got them back into his life.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update... They r together... Life does not depend on love only and need compability.. And trust... Thanks for this ss..
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank God adi saved the baby and geet on time

maan doesn't accept he loves geet but that mehar is his daughter
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice ending Richu.. from Maan's side there was no love.. but he promised her .. sometimes.. his talk abt Dadi it looks like.. he was so close to dadi.. n kind off obsessed with her.. he thought his baby girl returned as dadi.. yes.. marriage will happen but it will be loveless from Maan's side may be.. richa ek epilogue toh banata hain with Maan falling in love..

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