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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Superb update di

Even though maan is big businessman he knw his roots nd attachd 2 it nd geet is totallt opposite 2 him geet went manofy maan aft realsing it was her mistake nd maan taught her lesson

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

nice story..their love and their silly fightsare nice ..loved it

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miss_mystery

@miss_mystery

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Superb OS Sonia

Likes it a lot

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@simi91

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

All three parts hilarious awesome fantastic OS

Love maan & geet Tom & jerry fight

Thanks dear

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

what an equation!!! But Maan and Geet - despite their differences - complete each other.

A complete package. Sigh!!!!

Loved the story. Thank u.

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

amazing os

bole toh jhakas tha re 😆 really enjoyed it

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

nice os!

yeh toh sach hai ki humare roots hi humein achhe insaan banate hai aur maan ke pyaar ne geet ko sachhai dikha di...geet ko beena badale maan ne sachhe dil se geet ko pyaar kiya aur geet mein bhi samajh aa gayi...

loved their nok jok!

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turbulence

@turbulence

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Beautiful oneshot, sonia. Excellent. Really very well said n shown too. Yu can be a good, understanding n sensible person only when u r attached to your roots inspite of all the modern lifestyle adaptations. But nowadays people want to drift apart from their roots. You knw my maasi has d same problem. Both my cousins r now settled in d U.S Maasi always criticizes indian people n our home style living, whenever she comes to visit us. But i think after making her read your oneshot, i'll be able to bring some positive changes in her.

Maan has made geet understand things bit unusually, but in an interesting way. But poor geet, she made dat omlette wid hard work n nanu fell sick due to allergy. Maan cud have atleast helped her wid some basic instructions. Akeli hi phas gayi. Actually not her fault, she wasn't aware about the negative effect of mushrooms. And then travel by bus n roadways, dhaba food, but then she wore salwar suit n d stage performance, awesome. Seriously, maan didn't snatch away her real identity, just introduced her to some new n situational adaptations, so lovely. Don' have words to describe it.

Waise when will dis readers vs. writers challenge be over? Want to have you back in d forum wid all ur updates very soon. Plz disappear mat ho jana. I miss u very much. Plz come back quickly wid all ur beautiful and mesmerizing stories.