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Teri Meri Equation M + G = Desi Tashan





As always this is all about Maan and Geet and cute love story full of romance and drama.Maan a 27 years old successful businessman.Running his family construction business Khuraana Constructions.Lost his parents in childhood .Now just have Daddi Savitri Devi Khuraana and younger brother Dev Singh Khuraana in his family.


He did his masters in business management from US even after having privileged lifestyle of Aristocrats ,he was very close to his roots.The rural Punjabi backdrops of Hoshiarpur..From where his Grandfather started and took this family business to heights.


When his grandfather was alive , he never forgot to pay visit here to Hoshiapur every year .Especially taking Maan and Dev with him intentionally to keep them close to their real identity..This was the reason Maan a brand conscious man loved his branded clothes as a business tycoon.. He always seen in desi attire at home especially Kurta Pyjaama.






Khuraana Mansion


" Sssirrr..."Addi , KC's GM stammered while uttering " woo..aapse ek baat puchni thi ? " he completed...



Maan usually ask Addi to pay visit at home if wanted to discuss something important.



"Kuch bologay fir he answer karuga na...?" Maan who was engrossed in his file answered without looking at Addi.



" Ssirr...Do you know something about Dissociative identity disorder..I mean dual personality ?" Addi questioned.


Till now he was busy with his work...these words startled Maan.Addi was cooking something in mind " Addi !! what is this nonsense...We are discussing business matters ..I think you have any disorder...?" Maan get hyper due to his idiotic ways.


" I mm...sorry sir...actually I was reading a book on psychology.This was mentioned in that...A person with this disorder has two different identities at same time..He lives with it even without being aware of it...behave totally opposite at different places.." Addi revealed why he asked this question..



"Addi." Maan roared "KC runs construction business not Classes on Psychology even hired you due to your business degree.." throwing file on table he got up which scared Addi..


"I am sorry Sir...but ?" Addi wiped sweat over his forehead due to fear.


" By the way..what is there in your mind that you are asking this to me ? Dekho mere ko pagal mat banana...because I know whenever something silly comes in your mind...you always link that up with me some way or other." He put hands on waist and stepped toward Addi...


" Actually Sir , wo kya hai na , I am working with KC from last two years.Even pay visit to KM regularly..Out of KM you are Great Maan Singh Khuraana ...per KM k andar (inside) jo aap hai wo aap nahi hai..." Addi exploded in one go..


" What !! are you out of your mind ? I am not what I am ...?" shocked to extreme Maan couldn't make hand and tail of what Addi said .



" In your business and social circle you have your own style statement with branded cloths...but inside home...Aap is desi look main he hote ho..kahi aap bhi dual personality disorder k under to nahi ? " hesitatingly Addi put his doubt in front of Maan.


It amazed Maan to extreme.But he knew how innocent and pure at heart Addi was.Too much intelligent but little bit confused soul.Maan bursted in laughter like Addi had cracked any joke..." Addi ...oh...you are impossible.Yes I have dual personality not due to any disorder.But due to my upbringing." He then explained everything to Addi.Why he loved to adopt this lifestyle ? Addi was trying to find out reason from long long time..


" Now stop this..bahut ho gaya.I have checked all files.From now I will not be available for two weeks.And where I am going only you know and Daddi knows ...kissi ko patta nahi chalna chaahea..except any emergency..." Maan instructed Addi warning him...


" But Sir...what about Geet..She is coming back from London after two weeks trip.Aap ko yahan na paakar ..she gonna make my life hell to know your whereabout ..." With pitty face Addi was on verge of crying...He scratched his head.


" I don't know how you gonna handle.Let her work hard to find my whereabout...Dekhte hai kya karegi aab Miss Handa.." He was on his words.



Geet 21 years old beautiful girl of Handas..Only child of aristocratic family...Both Khuraanas and Handas had family relations from long time..So Maan and Geet were friends from childhood.In teenage this turned out to be attraction.Even if they had lots of different in their nature...Still no one could part them..They got separated for few years. When Maan was doing his masters in US and Geet his studies in Canada.


After coming back home this friendship developed in a strong relation of love..Even they had totally different personalities both knew they are for each other.



Geet totally opposite to Maan ...love outings with friends where Maan liked to be alone to wander aloof.Geet carelessly spend money on shopping but Maan love to contribute in charities...So they fight regularly on these points but soon after reconciled.



Why Maan is angry with her this time ? : Geet desired to go outside country for vacations especially London.Maan was busy to finishing his project and Diwali was coming.So Maan asked her to wait for few days.but stubborn girl didn't listen to him.She had made mind so went alone.





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Lovely and Pleasant Update
The Concept Is Different And Holds Respect ,Friendship And Love
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Teri Meri Equation M + G = Desi Tashan



This was not first time but a routine affair , lets find out more about them :


At wedding of Maan's Cousin ( Massi's daughter ) in Amritsar :

" Geet here in Amritsar people's life style customs are totally different from any metropolitan so yahan koi hangama mat karna " Coming out of Amritsar Airport Maan warned Geet.


" Oh Baba Maan Singh Khuraana aab apne parvachan yahan mat dejiye...I know how to behave " Irritated Geet answered pinching Maan's cheek.But she smiled mischievously thinking " Yeh to time he bataaega..."


What she did in Sangeet...Mixed brandy in Maan's drink she knew Maan couldn't control himself in drunken state and behave totally funny.But happened totally opposite to it.Geet's drink got replaced with Maan's glass..


What happened after : A high voltage performance of Geet on

Main Talli Main Talli ...talli ho gayi...

Patiaala peg lagga k ..Deewani main pagal main jhaali ho gayi...

Main Talli Main Talli ...talli ho gayi...


Maan struggled hard to handle her...



Situation Next : When Geet's Grand Pa (Nannu ) paid visit to them


Maan always suggest Geet to learn how to cook..But she toke it casually.According to Maan it was not necessary for her to cook at least basic cooking skills not let a person dependent on else...Where Maan could cook himself.Geet always made fun of him that after marriage he gonna cook for her.


No one was at home even servants.Just Geet with her Nanu..When Grandpa asked her that he was hungry and as diabatic he couldn't stay hungry for long...Geet hardly made mushroom omelette for him.Result Nannu suffered from alerry ...In emergency he was taken to hospital..



Another One :At Lohari ( A traditional north indian festiv usually get celebrated in mid Jan...People gather around bonefire at night and celebrate singing dancing ..In moden times people organise parties on grand scale )


Maan asked Geet to celebrate Lohri with them .Her parents were out of India so Geet was staying with them.. .He wished for a bonfire get together in KM lawn .But she was on her words and left to attend her friends late night birthday party in such dark. Police raided that hotel where was party to catch some culprits.Police was enquiring there from people too.Not letting anyone go out of hotel.Situation was really miserable for Geet somehow she text Maan.


" Daddi kya karu is ladki ka...yeh pagal kar degi mujhko.." Worried Maan said.



" Beta gussa baad main hona ...first bring her back home .." Daddi suggested. Maan used his links and brought Geet back..Next day they had a huge fight ..They stop talking with each other for a whole week.





When on her friend's requested Geet get ready to take part in a stage act for a NGO working for women rights...



Geet and other performers were rehearsing in Handa House Back yard..Geet and one more girl were pretending three males around are beating them..Screaming alod..

Maan was not aware of it ..When he visited Handa house ..He thought Geet was in danger..and showed his martial skills on those men..Beating them hard single handley...Poor guys ran away from the place with severe injuries " Maan you ask me I never listen to you..what you did ? Kaise dhulaae ki aapne behcaaron ki..Meri baat bhi nahi sunni.." annoyed she said...


" Mujhe kya patta ...Its unimaginable Geet working for any NGO ...I thought they are thieves..." Maan busted in laughter...

" You are impossible Maan...Sabko patta hai ..You have Punjabi blood ..no one dares to stand in front of Maan Singh Khuraana..But these poor souls what was their fault " Geet said..


This was again a reason to clash...



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Teri Meri Equation M + G = Desi Tashan



Coming Back to Present

Maan left for Hoshiarpur...When Geet returned she stormed at Addi...Really made his life hell...Poor Addi's only hope was Daddi who assured him for help..



Next Day when Geet met Daddi and opening her complaint box against Maan that he wanted to mold her like him...But never try to understand her..



" Geet betay these are your matters sort out after meeting Maan.Jiase aap akele gayi.. same he did...how ever I know where Maan is...You will also find out.But if you assure me to follow as I say you " Daddi tried to solve her and Addi's problem...


Geet got ready and she was now craving to met Maan...Some where she realized her mistake..So as per Daddi's condition instead of Airways..Geet reached Hoshiarpur through road..Addi was with her..She was travelling by bus first time...A long hectic journey in such crowded bus..Lots of wait and to eat roadside dhabbas...




Addi's company was just till this point to bring Geet safely.Maan was in nearby village..According to Daddi's instruction Addi made her sit in Auto till village and left from there...


" Maan Singh Khuraana aapne mujhe kya se kya banna diya...?" mumbling she made baby face..Auto dropped her in front of Maan's ancestral house .Where an old lady Raj Kaur caretaker for this house welcomed her..and informed Daddi of Geet's safe arrival..Maan was not at home...


" Geet betay aap fresh ho jaayo...Maan betaji late ho jaaegay aate aate..." She suggested.


" Ji Aunty...but where is Maan ?" Geet nodded asking about Maan..


" Maan Beta... he is at local school...Annual function hai na...bachon ko help kar rahe thy unki dance practice main...Aaj Bhangraa Competition bhi hai na..Our Maan Beta you know he is such a good dancer." Raj said proudly..


" Ha wo to hai..." Geet stamped " Per yeh Geet Handa bhi kaam nahi..aaj aapko patta chalega..get ready Mr.Khuraana..." she thought a mischievous smile came to her face...


She had brought the tradition Punjabi dress Maan gave her as Diwali gift along Which she hadn't tried coz she usually wore westerns.


At School after few performances stage anchor made announcement " Khuraana saab ne bahut help ki bachon ki..bachon ki taraf se koi Khuraana saab k liye shukriya karana chahta hai..." Curiously whole audience especially Maan gazed at stage


" So now a special performance " Anchor left saying this...


Who was there at stage ..Who stunned Maan...Non other than Miss Geet Handa in same costume gave typical Punjabi Bhangrhaa(dance) performance..She really rocked that stage whole gathering came in dancing mood..Maan also jumped on stage and both performed all together..


After whole event


" Kyo de diya na jhatka...?" Geet hit hard on his chest...


" Wo tum aksar deti ho...whats knew in this but ya this jhata is totally hatke... You give biggest jolt to me..." He winked...



"Fir aab challe ...I am too much tired ..First due to long bus journey ..aur fir yahan aayi...just for you..." she claimed she really could do anything for him...




" Just for me...no Geet I never desired that you change yourself as according to me..I just thought to make you realise a person should mold according to situation..should understand whats need of time...care for them who care you. But no one has right to snatch any one's real identity...Like I have no right to take away your identity because I love Geet and always love whatever circumstances may be .."he cupped her face ...having lots of affection in his eyes for her...


" I love you too Maan...you really made me realise what real life is...I will keep in mind from now onwards.Baba Maan Singh Khuraana aapke parvachan mere dimaag main padd gaye..."hugging Maan tightly...she burst in laughter...


" You are impossible." Maan nodded in disbelief that she never left a change to pull his leg " But yeh I want to do one think against your wish.."



" Kya ?" Geet curiously looked at Maan...He smirked...



" A Ride with Maan Singh Khuraana in his Jeep..Which you never like.." he winked...



" huh !!! " she pretended like it was hard to decided " theek hai aap bhi kya yaad rakhogay." Both cracked up...



She took seat along with Maan's driving seat..Geet was much tired so first Maan took her home...Next morning they had great fun together..Roaming around in Maan's favourite Jeep...


Instead of two weeks Maan returned back to Delhi in ten days along with Geet...Her parents and Daddi all were happy seeing that they brought such understanding in their relation.After closely observing rural /desi lifestyle. Geet had realised ..How wonderful feeling is being close to real identity.Both families now were deciding to tie them in a knot ..


But what can never change Maan Geet's Tom and Jerry fight...😆


We should adopt new ways of life but never forgot who we are...A wonderful experience writing this and wrapping in three parts...Which is really hard for me to write short ones...


Such an awesome Desi Tashan brought their equation to wonderful heights.
In which Daddi also played her part wonderfully too...



With Love



Sonia


Tense Liberties are always here according to rules of contemporary fiction writing





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Hahaha rofl dual personality disorder.. Too good.. Love maaneet relation.. Superb yaar,, cont soon
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Sonia,
Beautiful TS! Very different. Maan usually is vilayati & Geet desi but his story was vice versa.
Loved it!
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more then story i love the dialouge between them it was light humour ,come romance come fight all the mixer of 3 is called entertainment.
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👍🏼 Superb os. Light hearted and sweet 😆 Their noke jhok was so cute. Thanks for pm.

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