MG OS Who's the boss? (readers vs writers)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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this was a challenge by sophiex hope you liked it😊

WHO'S THE BOSS

Everyone was eagerly waiting for the new owner of KH construction. At the end of the
crowd stood Maan with whisky in his hand. Maan this is your thirteenth one. Adi rushed
to take the glass from Maan's hand. Maan gave the glass and took the whole bottle.
Meera came and stood taking the bottle from him. you have become like a DEVDAS
that too for that b****. Meera yelled seeking attention of everyone.
Meera and Adi gave a nervous smile while Maan was least interested on anything other than
the bottle Meera snatched from him. Meera pulled Maan to go home but before she could
take Maan from there Geet Handa was in front of them. She looked at Maan and
smirked then at Meera who very well knew what was in Ms hitler's mind. before geet could utter
a word Meera asked Mam Mr Maan Singh Khurana is at present not well to recieve you.
If you permit can I take him home? And regarding to introduce you Adi will do that.
geet said offcourse you two can leave with a smirk. No I am fine Maan said trying to
stand straight. Meera was surprised but pulled Maan to leave.

At KM
Dadi why did you remove Maan from his MD position? Meera asked Savitri Devi.
To bring back our Maan. dadi told as a fact.
And what about geet?use india laneki kya zaroorat thi?
Dadi looked up.
Maan aur geet ki kabhi banti nahi. then how can they work
together? they fight like cats and dogs. now she has got a chance too.
Meera complained.
dont you want Maan to get out of this depression? geet will help us.
Meera said really
just wait and watch keeping your mouth shut. dadi said with a glare.

handas and khuranas were family friends and business partners of
KH.Maaneet were best friends till 10th grade. suddenly both turned out enemies.
Reason was still unknown to anyone. Maaneet started fighting very often which
was bothering both families. for expanding business and for their
fighting children khuranas lived in India and handas in US. when Maaneet grew they took care
of company from US and India as MDs in respective countries.

Next day Maan entered ''MD's'' cabin without knocking.
dont you have manners. geet yelled.
ofcourse i have but i dont show to losers like you. Maan snapped back.
May be thats why your gf left you. geet smirked.
Maan tightened his fist. why did you call me?
You have to attend a meeting with me. our client Rahul Chopra wants to make
some clarifications.
No way i would come. that b***d Rahul is...
geet completed Maan's incomplete sentence. your ex-girlfriend's present boyfriend.
Maan frankly speaking I dont care. you have to attend the meeting. do you get
that else i have to take a serious action. geet smirked.
you would ask me to resign right? i dont care. i can make a bigger company than KH
in just a year.
geet gave an expression 'really'.
Maan knew if he resigns then definitely for whole life he has
to tolerate her taunts even if he becomes world's richest man.
Maan went for the meeting.

two months passed and dadi was right Maan had a lot of work to do that
he really didnt get time to think about Sam nor time for drinking. geet was really a
bigger problem than Sam for him. he have to work more and get his position back else
definitely geet would win. Maan was sucessful so was dadi's plan. but dadi still didnt
let geet to go back. A big venture was on the way which will bring KH to top ten in world.
Maan was back to MSK but needed a way to get back the MD seat. and for that
Maan had to lay a trap for geet or to say something has to be done that geet itself resigns
the MD position. resigning means definitely Maan would win. but how to do it was the question.

Maan asked Meera who said a big no. No Maan no help from me. geet is not so bad
as you say. she is just little aroggant. Dil ki buri nahi hai.
Meera thats her trap. She alway take away everything from me. do you know
Dadi loves her more than me.
Maan you are jeolous. let me guess thats why you always fight with her. Meera chuckled.
Its one of the reasons.

when Maan understood Meera would not help Maan took Saasha's help who was
always caught by geet with mistakes. to send geet away was her need too. Maan
asked her to do anything but to make her resign and Saasha took it as challenge.

It was an office party. theme was black and white. geet's dress got spoiled all
thanks to Maan who did that unable to see how sexy she looked. As none other choice was left geet had to wear a white sari. geet looked heavenly.
Maan was staring at her. geet look so
gorgeous envying all girls. Men were looking at her with lust which angered Maan.
Party was going smooth when one of the client asked her for dance. before geet
could say something Maan pulled her to dance floor. for the first time they felt
a spark inside them. both were lost in their own world and danced on a song Kurban hua. suddenly both realised what were they doing.
geet removed Maan's hand from her waist. Maan left the floor.
geet was just looking at retreating figure of Maan. Saasha who was dancing near Maaneet
took the chance and stamped on geet sari. geet's pallu came out. Saasha teared her
sari that her front was exposed. geet stood there not knowing what to do. All
were just staring at her. Meera took Adi's jacket and gave that to geet and droped
her home.

Maan got to know about the incident only next day from Meera. he was guilty.
but it was also truth that he was unaware of this plan. Maan wanted to apologize
to geet but it was very late. geet resigned the post. she left from India itself.
Maan didnt know what to do. At last he said everything to dadi.

Slap! was the first reaction from dadi. i can understand you dont like her
but this how could you. Maan said dadi i didnt knew saasha was planing
something like this. i never thought she would stoop so low.
she did or you but my geet was only affected atlast. no girl can live
with this shame. dadi did you meet her? Maan was for first time truly worried
for geet. i didnt see her since that night. she just left a message she is going
back to US. Maan left for US and dadi and Meera took the charge of KH and made
sure saasha is thrown out such way that none would give her job of a maid too.

In US handa house
Maan went to geet's room. whole room was a mess. geet was sleeping he waited for
her to wake up. he sat on a chair near her bed. for the first time he was watching
geet so intensely. he felt she was most beautiful than anyone he had ever met.
his eyes went to her curves which were little exposed in her spaghetti night
dress. Maan cursed himself to look at geet in that way. he turned his head
only to enjoy view of her sexy legs. he tried to look somewhere else but
he couldnt. atlast he took a blanket and cover her till her neck.

geet woke up after sometime. what are you doing here geet asked looking
at Maan. Actuallyi...i am...i am sorry. for what.? Maan explained
everything he was waiting for a slap and closed his eyes.
do you hate me this much? Maan looked at geet amused. this wasnt the reaction he thought.
geet was full of tears. Maan hugged her unable to see her sad face.
Actually I really didnt know she was planning something like this.
geet pushed him. you told her to do it.
I asked to do something that would make you resign. Maan said.
so she did the same. Maan bowed his head. you can punish me.
that i'll do but before that i want to know why you hate me so much?
Maan looked up at her. because you hate me.
when did i hate you?
you were my best friend till 10th grade suddenly it was you who changed.
because you started getting involved with that Sam. geet yelled.
she was my girl friend dam it.
and i was your best friend and you left me choosing her. geet cried.
hope i had chosen you. then it strike to Maan. why should i choose you
when you went for date with that Yash?
It was not date. i went to eat an icecream with him because you were
always with that Sam and had no time for me.
i was with sam because you weere always with that yash.
yash is my best friend who was with me when you left me for that Sam.

And you both were in your 10th grade. yeh girl friend, date in 10th grade kuch zyaada nahi?
said Mohinder handa who was listening to their conversation.
dad dont take his side. geet rushed to mohinder. Maan looked at geet who was charging
his hormones vey fast. As though Mohinder understod he asked geet to get dress up.


Mohinder asked both to start fresh. Maaneet too decided it as that was best.
As time passed Maan got more attracted to geet. geet too felt the same but both kept quite.
with time both knew they love each other but never waned to confess first.
Meera understood the problem and asked yash now meera's boyfriend to propose geet which was not tolerable by Maan. at last Maan confessed first. geet too confessed her love and
both decided to get married. within in an year they were blessed by a junior Maan and junior geet and they lived happily ever after still with their competition going on who's the boss.


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poojitha96 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story and tq for the pm 😊
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Nice one yaar
everything fast fast
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Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A Fantastic And Vibrant OS
Maan and Geet were best friends until they were in 10th grade
it seems because Sam became Maan's girlfriend and Yash Geet's friend
both Maan and Geet somehow felt that the other has changed and left the friendship
so they decided to become enemies instead
Maan and Sam have a break up and it seems like he has turned to the bottle while
Daadima decides to get Geet back from USA to India and Maan feels defeated so he
plans with Sasha to make Geet leave India and that is exactly what Sasha does she humiliates
Geet and Geet leaves India while Maan now feels guilty and confess to Daadima
than leaves to USA to apologize to Geet where both clear their misunderstanding
that happened when they were in 10th grade
Both Maan and Geet again become friends and both fall in love but hesitates to confess
until finally Meera ask Yash to propose Geet leading Maan to confess his love
both got married and have their own little family
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This one was really awesme...lovd it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow masti you've already written it 😲


THANK YOU, I've just woken up so after I eat breakfast I'll run back upstairs to read it


Can't wait now, thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very wonderful update yaar... Beautifully written..
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hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific OS, superbly written. Maan was depressed after Sam left him! Dadi enlists Geet's help! Maaneet were childhood friends bt things changed! they were also competitors! with Geet back, Maan nw will show dadi he is better! Geet taunts Maan! Maan is angry! he teams up with Sasha! Maaneeet dance - pssioante intense dance! they are affected by each other! Maan leaves the party! Geet humiliated by Sasha! she leaves 4 the USA! Maan gets 2 knw wt Sasha did which was nt part of the plan! Dadi confronts Maan! he goes 2 the USA 2 meet Geet! Maan admires a sleeping Geet! he apologise! they argue! Mohinder intervenes! They fall in love bt dnt confess! Meera gets her bf Yash 2 propose 2 Geet bt Maan confesses n so does Geet! they get married! They r blessed with twins! lovely end
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Firstly I must say I love the title 'who's the boss' the inner girl in wants to shout Geet but my conscious says maan, although I know it's Geet 😆

Maan is seriously depressed, poor guy devdas bangaya over sameera tch tch tch, I like how meera rules over him. He obviously doesn't know better so someone needs to take care. I loved the twist, so Dadi brought Geet to fix maan who's highly depressed, gosh the way his acting it's like his girl just dumped him. Wait she has I know I know how insensitive of me 😳

I loved Dadi, mastermind. So Maans back on track but to show Geet out the door only 😡 I mean it's great that his fixed but boy when is he gonna have some liking toward Geet. He asks meera to help him get rid of her thi refuses that then he approaches sasha, why do I get a bad feeling about this

Yeah I know cos sasha has an aim inalibv Geets life a hell, stupid women. Maan bhi na but I'm interested to know what happened that both hate each other. Kurbaan hua awww saree scene, this sasha will never learn 😆 . Wow slap, Dadi! But he needed to open his eyes, Geet helped him overcome his depression and in his desperation he made the worst mistake, ok granted he didn't know the plan but still he was partly up blame, why hire the cow sasha as his aid 😡


Cool his now in the U.S., they sorted out the differences. Do I feel jealously there, they really weird to have broken their friendship due to sasha, maan the green beast attacks again but this time for the good, they get married and have little ones. Aww perfect OS, I loved it thank you


I think your spin on it, the turns and twist were amazing. Ok sorry for the essay but it was only fair, if you can take your time to create such a beautiful OS, the least I can do is fully appreciate it. Thank you for your hard work and accepting my challenge, you've exceeded in this challenge

Great work, ok gotta go lectures @11, my prof will lock me out if I don't go now, he can be such a cow at times 🤢

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