MG OS MILAN DILON KA (readers vs writers) epilouge pg 3

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hi got a challenge from mayurmaaneet to write this OS. hope you like it dear



MILAN DILON KA


Raja Maan Singh Khurana got an invitation to attend a fair conducted by Rathodes
that took place every year. though Rathodes financial problems
were now unsolvable but still they always stick to the rituals and spend money
like water. Though Maan hated their unwanted pride but still thought to go as
Kings and Queen too had some rules After his parents death it was his responsibility to attend these invitations other than taking care of Khurana Estates. he had his own buisness Khurana Constructions which was too big to handle alone but still he didnt leave his legacy and carried it like a priceless possession from his ancestors.

Maan went to the fare. he was treated as a chief guest. After all he was a King Khurana. Maan took his chair and sat to enjoy the programs.

A man probably in 30s started singing.

Is Duniya Main Desh Kahi,
Desh Kahi Main Desh Hai Ek Aur Us Desk Ka Naam Hai Bhaarat Bhaarat Bhaarat Bhaarat Bhaarat
Hamara Bhaarat Tumhara Bhaarat Pyara Bhaarat Pyara Bhaarat
Pyara Bhaarat Pyara Bhaarat Hamara Bhaarat Tumhara Bhaarat
Bhaarat Desh Mai Hai Gaov Kahi Gavo Kahi Main Gaov Hai Ek
Apne Gaov Ke Log Neak Logo Ke Sene Mai Raheta Hai Dil Aur Kaheta Hai Kaheta Hai Kaheta Hai Dil

A child said,
Kya Kaheta Hai Dil Rajaji

the man bent down to the child's level.

Mela Dilon Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai
Mela Dilon Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai
Mela Dilon Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai

Aate Hain Musaafir, Jaate Hain Musaafir
Jaana Hee Hai Sabko, Kyun Aate Hain Musaafir
Mela Dilon Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai

Maan snapped his finger when Munshi ji Maan's right hand said he is crown prince Rajveer Ratode


Rajveer sung

Hans Le Gaa Le Yeh Din Na Milenge Kal
Thodee Khushiya, Hain Thode Se Yeh Pal
Hans Le Gaa Le Yeh Din Na Milenge Kal
Thodee Khushiya, Hain Thode Se Yeh Pal
Ek Baar Chalee Gayee Jo Yeh Bahaare
Laut Ke Na Aayengee Gujaree Bahaare

people sung with him

Mela Bahaaro Kaa
Mela Bahaaro Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai
Aatee Hain Bahaare, Jaatee Hain Bahaare
Jaana Hee Hai Inako, Kyun Aatee Hain Bahaare
Mela Dilon Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai

the kid laughed and sung
Saat Ajuba Is Duniya Mai
Anthva Hai Roop Tera geetu
geetu O Meri geetu Mjhse Door Tu Jaa Naa Meri geetu

A girl clad in white looked like a fairy came into the ground. Maan stood mesmerized looking at her. her curves her flawless skin can make any man out of sense. most amazing was her beautiful eyes which kept him captive. Munshi saw Maan smitten by her beauty.he said to Maan she is Rajkumari geet Prince Rajveer's sister. he mentioned about her alliance set with some prince. but Maan didnt hear anything. he was just staring at geet.
she started singing.

Aayi Re Jawani Jise Rut Toofani
Pagali Ye Diwanee Uf Mai Kya Karu
Mai Bhai Sayani Sabko Paresani
Umra Ye Suhanii To Mai Kyaa Karu

One old man out of the crowd said

Dekh Ri Deewani Naa Kartu Nadaani
Barbar Nahi Aani Ye Pal Bahr Ki Jawanii
Mela Jawanii Kaa
Mela Jawanii Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai


geet went towards the old man and started singing

Aati Hain Jawanii, Jaate Hain Jawanii
Jaana Hee Hai Isko, Kyun Aate Hain Jawanii

All sung with her

Mela Dilon Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai

geet looked worried suddenly. she started searching someone

Bulbul Gulgul Bulbul Bulbul Meri Sakhi Saheli Hai Bulbul

A girl covered geet's eyes from her back and started singing

Hmm Is Gaov Ki Mai Bulbul Hu Main Udne Ki Hu Mai Aadi
Mai Sabkuch Kar Sakati Hu Par Karoongi Na Mai Shhaadi
Haa Karoongi Na Mai Shhaadi

geet became emotional and ran to Rajveer

Khela Hai Yaha Mera Bachpan
Na Chhodungi Ya Aangan Sun Bahi Mere Sun Gaov Mere Na Bandhu Koi Bandhan
Na Bandhu Koi Bandhan

All men with Rajveer started singing

Yahi Rashm Hai Is Duniya Ki Beti To Dhan Hai Paraaya
Duje Ka Dhan Ghar Apne Koi Bhi Na Rakh Paya
Koi Bhi Na Rakh Paya
Mela Beedai Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai

Rajveer hugged geet and cupped her face.

Banke Bahena Gudiya
Mere Ghar Mai Aayi Dulhan Banke Jaana Tha To Gudiya Ban Ke Kyu Aayi

All started singing

Mela Dilon Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai
Mela Dilon Kaa Aata Hai, Ik Baar Aake Chala Jaata Hai

After that fair Maan couldnt sleep. whenever he closed his eyes only
geet came in his mind. he didnt waste time and decided to propose
geet. he sent Munshiji as a messenger to Rajveer.

At Rathode palace

geet stood near the stairs when saw a heated argument between her father and a man in his 50s. she went downstairs to find what was the problem. we may dont have money but we have our pride intact for generations i cant break my promise said King Vikram Singh Rathode. Munshiji left from there.

Rano geet and Rajveer's bua who took care after their mother's demise came and asked to Raja what happened. Maan singh Khurana want to marry geet. Raja said dissapointed.
Its a good proposal bhai.. Rano was overjoyed.
dont you know her marriage is fixed already. Raja closed his eyes to shout at his sister. he said we cant break our father's promise at any cost.
Maan felt disappointed but knew Rajawas right he cant break his promise.
though it was impossible for him to forget geet he tried his level best.

few months passed by but Maan couldnt sleep. only geet was in his mind.
One day while coming back from his office he found geet lying unconcious on
the road. Maan took her to is palace. this was not the geet he saw at the fair .
she looked pale and thin. he ordered munshiji to find about Rathodes.
he got to know that with sudden demise of Rathode king all financial problems
was looked by Rajveer who was now the official King some Dev Singhania from whom Raja took money started harassing Rajveer.
Dev asked geet to be his mistress in return of all the money he had lent. Rajveer tried to oppose him. Rajveer and Rano were killed by Dev's people. geet's fiance left her as he loved his life more than her. Moreover Rathode palace was taken by Dev leaving her on roads. So her fiance left her all alone to face this cruel world.
Maan felt a pank thinking about the miseries she had gone through. he asked geet to stay in his palace. geet's self respect didn't allow her but she knew
it was the safest place in this world for her. Maan understood geet's turmoil and gave her a job as his secretary in his office and to live in palace itself on rent. geet accepted.

As time passed Maanet realised their love for each other and and decided to get married.their marriage took place in a grand way and they lived happily ever after.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CuteStrawberry

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Story Indeed
Finally Raja Maan gets married to Rajkumari Geet
its sad that her fianc left her to deal with all the miseries yet she kept
her dignity intact
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz add MG OS before the name and in brackets write (readers vs writers)
So that everyone can know


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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely story
maan as king ..
he found geet and later both married..

thank u for nice story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute love story...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Os
poor geet
her fiance left her
maaneet realized their love and got married
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW!! fabulous dear...So , at last Maan and geet again met but i different circumstances...I want to read more like what maan did to get back the pride and wealth of geet's family...What happened to dev? How geet and maan fall for each other? How they confessed their love and overcome every obstacles?

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