MG-FF~The Myth~Thread-7~UPDATED~Pt 72 *Pg 100 *30th Oct.** Tsr-Pg-130 - Page 27

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🤗 Hello Friends
how r u Dona nd Valli ...?
dona pooja kaisi rahi..?
kal mai bhi dhunuchi dance dekhne gai thi..😃



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🤗 Hello Friends

Updating


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The Myth

( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 67


Part - 68



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You don't always get what you Wish for, You get what you Work for ...


Those 2 days wr a family outing for all ,, Kabir's advise worked nd Maan stopped feeling bad on Geet's cold behavior ,, he did what he wanted to do for her good , ignore her taunts nd replied only one sentence .. I deserve this rejection ,, slowly Geet stopped taunting him , but she behaved reserved , Maan became familiar with all d work of caravan ,, nd did without mentioning Geet ,, all went out in mrkt ,, help each other in works ,, ate together ,,watched movies which was stored in Geet's HD ,, listened old hindi songs ,, Maan inspect everything set target for next week nd reported Richard ,, in these 2days he came close to DJ nd Kabir nd they started sharing things to him .

It was d time sunday afternoon time when Geet was playing ludo with d kids in d buggi ,, kids wr very happy sitting in that beautiful buggi ,, so Geet made them sit there for some time nd play ,, kids became very familiar to her ,,both d kids fought between d game when one beat other ,, Geet was enjoying their childish sibling fight ,, Maan , DJ nd Kabir wr watching her from caravan ,, remembering Geet's lonely childhood she blurted in front of Maan that Geet never cherish these beautiful moments of family nd siblings ,, Maan who was curious to know about Geet more nd more caught her words .

Maan: DJ if u don't mind , I want to know about Geet's childhood ,, why she hates her parents ,, DM nd Mom told me that in her tough time too her parents didn't support her ,, why ?

DJ nd Kabir looked at each other ,, Kabir knew many things about Geet ,, he too hate Handas .

Kabir: u both talk , I m coming ,,I don't like to listen about those crap ppl .

Maan looked at Kabir nd then DJ ,, he was sure that there was something big .

Maan: DJ plzz , I want to know about her ,, u know she won't share with me .

DJ sighed nd told him in short from Geet's birth to her marriage ,, how they find d Kundli wrong nd Geet burnt that ,, discarded her family nd never talk to them after that day,, Maan was stunned listening all that ,, how cd parents dejected their baby in their selfishness ,, how they thought only for their happiness not about a small baby ,, he too hate Handas , his respect for DJ increased many folds who brought up Geet showering her love nd care , nd now Geet was doing d same ,, doing everything for their happiness , even she put her in trouble last time for this caravan, but DJ words pierced Maan's heart nd put him in d pit of guilt .

DJ: my angle like child is facing rejections from her birth ,, she never got d happiness of family ,, she never got her family love , but now she knit this small family with diff lonely ppl ,, brought love between us nd today we r a family all bcoz of her.

Maan felt a lump in his throat ,, Dj was right ,, she never get her family ,, even he too was not less than Handas ,, in his selfishness he thought only for him nd his love for Sam,, he too rejected her nd never try to know about her that how she was facing d life after d rejection of her husband nd where nd how she was living ? Even he avoid his parents too who only think for his happiness .

What an irony ,, one side a parent dejected their child for their happiness nd other side he nd Sam dejected his parents for their happiness ,, Sam was with him , but didn't say nd ask once about my wife ,, being a girl she never thought about Geet's happiness ,, even accused him for spending night with Geet which was her right ,, he was d worst person nd Geet never forgive him ,, Maan loathed himself ,, drown in his guilt he held DJ's hands.

Maan: I m sorry DJ ,, I m very sorry for hurting Geet nd all ,, trust me DJ, I want to mend everything I want her nd all's happy .

DJ: Maan u cn't redo d things , but I m happy that u realized ur mistake ,, I cn't say about Geet that how she'll take all this , if want to mend then go ahead ,but remember one thing that it's easy to break , but hard to mend , nd things never come in same shape ,, i'll be thankful to u if u filled my child's life with happiness, God bless u .

Maan kissed her hands mumbling Thanku DJ nd i'll do anything for her,, DJ caressed his head lovingly .

DJ: go wash ur face nd call ur uncle nd Geet for coffee then we have to pack nd leave.

Maan nodded nd went with heavy heart ,, when he looked at Geet his heart cried for her he wanted to cocooned her in his arms to soothe her pain nd to assure her that he never give her pain now,, he wd do anything to keep her happy ,, he sighed in cursed his helplessness for not able to do it openly ,, Geet didn't trust him ,, he cd only determined him for doing this for her .

They all returned back from farm at eve nd reached home at night , had their dinner in train under d clear roof of train enjoying stary moon light , that was also a fun nd they had a pleasant journey ,, after this it was going hard to travel for Geet bcoz she wd be in her 8th mnt preg nd need to be careful ,, she had to cover up her max study in coming 2 months , then she hd to take few days leaves nd all wr clueless how they wd manage her delivery nd study ?

Maan reached at his home after droping DJ, Geet nd Kabir at their home , same night he called DM , talked to her nd his Mom regarding visiting DM at d time of Geet delivery ,, they agreed happily ,, Reeema cdn't come for long , but DM accepted to join him ,, Maan desired to take home close to Geet's house ,, DM asked to Yash who was listening their talk nd he permitted bcoz he too wanted to visit there at d time of his Grand Child arrival , but he didn't show .

Maan was on cloud9 getting his dad's approval ,, he thanked them nd after catching up with his study he slept with a smile ,, there was an excitement in his heart thinking that he was going to live near Geet .

Happiness wr coming to him , but wrapped in pain nd guilt .


Precap ---- opportunist Sam nd her parents ... oops ,, Daijaan hurt ...


Part - 69


Sorry for mistakes ..



Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing
so the mist is cleared as why he had the change of heart
Geet is too bruised to let him in
his betrayal was the final nail in the coffin
he had hurt her and its still fresh it will take time for her to let the bitterness go only that their relation can have a fresh start
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Hi Dona..
pooja kaisi rahi dear..?
maine bhi kal dhunuchi dance dekha 😃 aaj visarjan tha..😊
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puja achi rahi di...
mere apartment me visarjan sunday ko hai 😆 dhunuchi nach mazedar hota hai 😃
sindur khela??

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