MG-FF~The Myth~Thread-7~UPDATED~Pt 72 *Pg 100 *30th Oct.** Tsr-Pg-130

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The Myth




The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



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Index

Thread - 1

Thread - 2

Thread - 3

Thread - 4

Thread - 5
Thread - 6



Thread - 7
Part - 65 ... see below
( scroll down )

Part - 66

Part - 67

Part - 68

Part - 69

Part - 70

Part - 71
Part - 72



Link for thread - 8


Part - 73







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Character Sketch


Maan Singh Khurana

Geet Handa
Mahinder Handa

Rano Handa

Darji

Pummi (geet's bua)

Mr YashRaj Khurana
Mrs Reema Khurana
Mrs Savitri Devi Khurana (Dadima)

Fareeda , DaiJaan (geet's Daimaa)

Dev & Meera (Maan's younger bro nd bhabhi)

Tejinder & Lakhvinder Handa (geet's bros)


Sameera Reddy

Kabir Siddu
some more according d flow of story...










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soniaforever, yashvijaysingh, dpurva, krishna., aaahsapca, jyotikushwaha, jagritimanocha,









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The Myth

( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 64


Part - 65



😃 Plzz play BG ,, while reading ..
**
**

How do I fix this?
The shattered remains of an imperfect relationship?
Tell me what tools to use,
I will work for hours,
Rebuild those walls that enclosed us,
My hands will bleed,
My body will sweat,
But it will be worth it in the end,
Because I will have you again.


It was a perfect family time for Siddu family nd for Maan too ,, he was covering d distance with baby steps , having sweet nd sour taste of Geet's rejections nd remarks ,, one mnt it seems everything pleasant , but next mnt it turn gloomy ,, he loathed himself for ruining d happiness of d family nd hurting Geet to this extent that it was going hard to heal ,, now he was feeling d depth of her grief which she felt every moment facing him with Sam .

He felt so miserable when students wr talking about him nd Sam in front of Geet ,, he didn't have courage to say that Geet was his wife ,, how he wd justify his sin in front of all ? he sow d crop of thorn nd those thorns multiplied nd pricking nd bleeding him ,, he cdn't even shares his pain nd grief to anybody ,, he looked at his nd Geet's scattered life ,, he knew that she was smiling , but deep in her heart she was hurt ,, she completed a family ,but she herself was incomplete ,, now he cd feel d pain which Geet was hiding behind her smile , when he himself was doing d same , smiling with wounded heart .

That night was very painful for Maan, he was restless to talk Geet about everything ,, he wanted to assure her that now there was nothing between him nd Sam .

Next mrng at d decided time they all met at d rly stn nd boarded their train ,, when they wr searching their seats Maan held Geet's hand from back nd whispered in her ear.

Maan: Geet let them enjoy their journey together , we cn sit lil behind .

Geet startled nd looked at him ,, Maan nodded with a faint smile .

Maan: let them spend some time together.

Geet gave a thought on his words ,, he was right at his place , in farm Farida nd Kabir wdn't get private time for their talks ,, this few hrs journey cd give them ample time to sit together nd chat ,, Geet nodded with a nervous smile ,, Maan gestured at side where few seats wr vacate ,, she blinked in yes nd Maan choose 2 seats for them ,, kept their bags on seats .

Geet to DJ: ma -pa u both sit here nd I m sitting there, need to catch up with my study ,, OK.

Without waiting for reply she took her window side seat next to Maan .

DJ nd kabir exchange a look , but kabir gestuers farida to sit .

Kbr: it's OK farida , let them spent time together , only then they cn solve their differences ,, Geet was trying nd able to manage d situations, we'll check her in gaps .

DJ nodded nd they too settled in their seats ,, after few min they got busy in their talks nd watching sight scenes .

Maan nd Geet remained silent for few mnt ,, Geet got busy in reading in her ipad nd Maan was eager to talk her .

Maan: Geet , u wanted to talk me , cn we ?

Geet paused , remembered that she said that to him nd then looked at him .

Maan: I m too wanted to talk u many things .

Geet coldly : what u have to talk ?

Maan sadly : want to confess my sins ,, want to assure u that I m no more that Maan .

Geet looked at him nd all around ,, ppl wr busy in their world ,, Maan nd she as talking in a very low voice ,, next row was empty nd they wr in last row ,, totally safe ,, Geet sighed .

Geet: what cn u change accepting ur deeds ? Nothing ,, there was no use talking on this matter ,, u did what u wanted nd planed ,, I accepted in which God put me ,, it doesn't matter to me what is going in ur life bcoz u r nothing to me , u belong to someone else , so no use of repeating d past .

Maan sadly : I know, I cn't change d time ,, cn't redo d things , I cn only regret , nd repenting ,, I really did wrong Geet ,, ruined d happiness of my family nd urs ,, in my selfishness nd blindness I didn't try to see d facts ,, took a drastic step nd spoiled many lives .

Geet: when u cn't redo d things nd change d time , then leave this topic here ,, it'll only hurt , but few things I want to clear from u .

Maan: what ?

Geet : why this change after months ? Why u informed ur parents about me nd brought them here ? what is ur motive behind all this care nd concern ,, Mr MK , u realized ur mistakes nd accept those that is a diff thing , but why this drastic change in behavior ? If I m not wrong this happened only after leaving ur GF (ouch it hurt Maan)?


Maan's face turned ashed : u cn think nd have all these doubts , that it happened all of sudden , but d truth is lil diff ,, Geet I know it hurt u I really didn't recognize u in start , trust me plzz , in my frustration I didn't see u properly ,, I saw u in marriage attire nd here u wr in a totally changed look ,, I m saying d truth , when I saw u here I got a doubt seeing ur eyes ,but ur name mislead me ,, I m saying I was wrong Geet , u cn punish me for that .

Geet; why sd I ? Mr MK ur decisions will punish u ,, i'll only enjoy.

Geet smiled nd Maan looked at her hurt ,, she was right ,, his decisions wr hurting him at ever steps .

Geet: Mr Mk , u didn't reply my Qs , why this change now ?

Maan: not now , i recognized u when I heard ur name Geetika nd, nd tried to find out about u ,, I was hell shocked ,, I never thought u cd come here , then i thought that Dad had sent u here ,, bcoz after coming here dad had stopped my money nd ordered all not to talk to me ,, whole family disowned me( Geet looked at him shocked , thinking that his family was saying right ,, they cut off him ) ,, I was in money prob ,, day by day life was going tough nd then my illusion broke ,, I started realizing d value of money , family nd parents .

Geet I wanted to come to u to accept my mistake , but believe me ,, I was so ashamed , guilty nd discourage that wanted to hide me somewhere ,, it killed me many deaths when u sit behind me in d bus ,, (Maan's eyes turned wet nd he blinked many times to control his tears ,, Geet witnessed that ) ,, I was trapped in web Geet ,, money prob starting showing its effects,, Sam started cursing nd taunting my dad nd family for stopping money ,, I took this job for money , even she too started working , that make us busy nd when she started losing d freedom nd luxurious life style it started creating diff ,, I was trying my best , but for her money became a main prob ,, she was not getting that life which she dreamed ( Maan sighed ),, I was burning in hell ,, my guilt was eating me .

Then she turned sick nd diagnosed C***** ,, that brought a big change ,, she started blaming me for that saying that it was bcoz of my Kundli dosas .

Geet shocked: what ???

Maan : yes ,, she said that it was she who came in my life 1st so as ppl believed nd Pandits say , my doshas affected her life ,, she blamed me that I forced her that is why she came here with me against her parents wish nd knowledge ,, she lied to her parents nd agreed to live with me. ( Maan squeezed his eyes in guilt nd shame )

Geet: what's big in that ,, u too lied, planned nd run away ,, u both r same , but why she blamed u for her disease ? r u both married ?

Maan shocked : no ,, never .

Geet: Ok , but kya farak padta hei ,, marriage doesn't have any value for u nd her ,, she knew u wr married nd u too knew well nd even consummate that , but after that u both lied nd live together like a couple ,,( she smirked ) u married in Ind , but enjoyed ur married life here ,, d word marriage is useless for both of u ,, anyway I don't get why she blamed u ? .. ab jo hona tha ho gaya, face karo ,, now her parents know about u nd her ?

Maan: yes .

Geet : ur parents ?

Maan nodded yes with lower head .

Geet ; then why u r not with her ? she was ur partner , nd u have to be with her at this time ,, when she was coming back to u ?

Maan : never ,, she'll go with her parents .

Geet : why so ? only bcoz of this disease ?

Maan: she blamed me for every loss of her life ,, her parents too ,, she asked money for treatment , but that time I didn't have money , she knew well , her parents too advised her to take money from me ,, she threatened me to talk Dad for money , At last for her everything was money .

Geet: did u give her ?

Maan: yes .

Geet: how ?

Maan: I talked to dad , nd he put conditions ,, he called me India after sem exams ,, took all rights nd KC shares from me ,, I don't have any right on any Khurana property ,, for family respect I cn't ask from outside ,, I did mistake so have to pay for that ,, I agreed ,, dad gave me money nd sent to her for treatment ,, she left with her parents .

I only wanted that she get well nd go back to her parents ,, that is good for all ,, this money issue made me realized that she was an opportunist ,, use me only opportunities for her good life nd in tough time demands cumpan.. even her parents too tell her for that ,, it was not me or love , but it was money nd luxury she wanted .

Geet sighed nd opened a water bottle ,, sipped some water nd offered him ,, he had nd composed himself .

Geet: how cn u part like this ? is this so simple for both of u after all u both had shared ?

Maan: that was an illusion ,, that was love for me , but for her a comfort ,, there was no trust nd respect ,, for money she cursed nd blamed my family ,, for her treatment she didn't say to her parents , but forced me , accused me for d damage in her life ,, she openly said that she want her life not me ,, she'll do what her parents want , even her father too said me clearly to finish everything ,, after leaving her for US , I talked to her only that day when u saw me on farm .


Precp - Geet accused Maan ...


Part - 66


plzz ignore mistakes ...







Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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hi babbie
how r u
after so long we r here together
howz life going on
what abt ur trip to amritsar ..
hope u had great fun there
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oh this is new thread ..

congrats for new thread !!!!


me first ...

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Originally posted by: tabby999



hi babbie
how r u
after so long we r here together
howz life going on
what abt ur trip to amritsar ..
hope u had great fun there



🤗 Hi tabby dear ..jhappiieess
i replied u at many places but i think u didn't see ...
yes t trip was very nice.. spl Golden temple , it's so beautiful ... i love that 😃
How r u dear..?
how is ur mom...?

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Originally posted by: singh24



🤗 Hi tabby dear ..jhappiieess
i replied u at many places but i think u didn't see ...
yes t trip was very nice.. spl Golden temple , it's so beautiful ... i love that 😃
How r u dear..?
how is ur mom...?

srry ,,didn't saw ur messages ..
i am busy these days so get only little time to be here ..
my mom is ok..
yep golden temple is beautiful specially at night with all lights its too divine ..
what abt bhagha border retreat ...did u saw that ??

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congrats for the new thread di 🥳

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