The Princess and the Pauper - MG - Ch 6, pg 138, new thread link pg 1*

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Chapter 1

The story looks really promising.
Geet seems like the classic poor little rich girl.

Such a fresh and unexplored side of Maan. Him being a pauper. His self respect took a big hit and he chose not to return.

And Mohinder... I do not understand. Had he opposed her love and uprooted her to another city/country, I would not have minded much. But locking her up and destroying her life and studies... absurd man. What an imbecile!

Are Maaneet running away in the BMW?

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Binish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Congrats on ur new ff dear.. Superb.. Geet rich but in love with the poor maan.. Bff.. Cont soon hun.. Nice beginning

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indiegirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Another good story, loved the first part, rich Geet and poor Maan. Poor fellow ill treated iby Geets father, very mean... It is a good concept cannot wait for the next part...

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singh24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Hello my dear friend Avi

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singh24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Awesome Update

so maan is not well of here .. he had a falling business..

mahinder was very rude ,, grr .😡. he parted Maaneet ..

poor geet was caged in HP ..

hope Maan find her soon ..😊

precap is confusing .. 😕

waiting 😊

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ambeern

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Congrats on ur new ff dear..

Superb..

Geet rich but in love with the poor maan

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ambbiha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Geet is a princess and maan is a normal middle class boy. They both are friends and geet's dad saw her with maan. He brought the status in between them and separated them by keeping geet in brij capitivity.

Nice part. Wondering how maan will reach her😉

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bina_a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Hi Avi!! That's an interesting begniining! There was a lot going on in the story. So Mohinder hurt maan's ego!! I am little confused with the precap. But I will wait to see what you have planned. Love it Avi :)

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ja1970

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

interesting start. waiting for the next.

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Susmitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Hi avi congrats for new one. U know u r the one who forcedme to comment. First I thought by seeing all other members every post reaching 1000s how is it possible but kniw see I became goldie. N the credit goes to u mainly. Because of u I made few friend n reading amazing stories.

Awesome start. Maan n geet childhood friends. Geet rich n maan poor. Maan there for geet n loves eachother. Geet papa dont liked it n insulted maan n locked geet. Precap is intresting