Two Shot : LoSt In YoU.....Updated Last Part @page 10.....4th Oct

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Wow that was Superb !!!!

Maan all grief stricken as he have to go forward and marry the girl his father had vowed

him to marry yet he loves someone else and there is nothing he can do

Maan and Geet gets married and he tells her that he is sorry but he loves

someone else and cannot truly be her husband but the next day he thinks

its his illusion seeing his Geet in his home and its only at night in his room when again

he speaks Geet decides too that she has to quickly say something otherwise

again he will leave and when she talks Maan realize her voice and later realize he married the girl he loves and she too loves him

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

hi tabby

suspense..nehi tha woh..we know its geet vandy

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vandy28

@vandy28

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: CrazyEyes
😆 yes aaj jaldi unres kar dia 😳

haha...kya baat...

Aaj toh hum par kismat mehrban...lolzz

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vandy28

@vandy28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: abba12
Array wah ..updated already

yup already planned nah will update by sunday

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meerasaravanan

@meerasaravanan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

nice story please continue this type of stories in future also it gives pleasant to our readers

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Awesome part maan rejected even without seeing her but geet made him realize her presence

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Well written! Maan gets engaged! they get married! Maan rejects her on the SR! he says he loves Geet! Maan leaves! Geet sad! her thoughts well portrayed! Maan sees Geet arnd the mahal! he wonders if he is imagining her! finally they talk! they confess! pls post epilogue

Edited by khwaishfan - 9 years ago

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jyotiagarwal

@jyotiagarwal

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Awww!!!

Superb update...poor maan ...so loyal..both to his love and his family values...loved it

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Maan was unaware that he had married his love and so he rejected her on their first night. She was initially hurt but later was determined to win him. He was cinfused all day catching her glimpses and dismissing them as illusions.
She finally confronted him and revealed the truth. He was delirious with happiness! Finally their love emerged triumphant!!