PIC-A-THON : let's have fun ^_^ OS 3,4 ,5/ PG 18,19 ,23/ SEPT,30 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Shoba di kya mast OS hai :p bada maza aaya Maan ki pitai hui :v :v or pio Beer 😆 i wish she beat im with Jhadu also 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Awesome os Shoba di 👏
short and sweet 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Lol shobha di yeh chotusa mast tha.. maan ki jamke dhulai hui.. . 🤣 bechara maan.. n sherani geet... generally pati belan se darte hain.. yeh geet ki jooti se darega.. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Funny os. Poor Maan beaten only for a beer.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Maan beer pi raha tha aur Geet ne uski khoob pitayi Ki wow nice os
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Geet in her Sherni avatar beating Maan for having a beer that too with Jhooti that was gifted by him.He is so scared of her.Nice concept.👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sdlife19

Maan narrowed his eyes seeing Geet stand in front of him with her jhooti in her hands.


Kya hain. He asked sipping his beer. Dekh kyu rahi ho mujhe aur yeh jhooti haath mein leke kya kar rahi ho.


Maarne ki soch rahi hoon. His eyes wide and his hand in air. Kya hua.. aisa kya kaha maine ki aap ke hosh udd gaye.


Kise maarne ki soch hain? He almost shivered seeing her eyes blaze in anger. Kise.


Kisi apne ko. He gulped down. His all beer nasha gone. Aaj khatam hi kar deti hoon.


Kise. He asked again. His hand trembling and even though he wanted a shot of his beer for strength he could not bring the can to his mouth. Kise..


Beer peene wale ko.


Tho maar do. He smiled and shaking his head he brought his closer to his mouth only to stop midway. Kise..


Beer peene wale ko.


Jaan... tum..


Oh yes Jaan. And she started to beat him left and right with her jhooti's while he tried to cover him with her hands. Aaj ish kiseko hi khatam kar dungi main.. na yeh beer peene wala rahega na ye beer.


Jaan jaan... aisa na karo Jaan.. Jaan...please maaf kar do.. please maaf kar do please.please..


Maafi. She hit his head with one jhooti. Maafi maang rahe ho aaj... itne din kya main barki ki tarah mein mein kar rahi thi. She asked hitting him again. Warn kiya tha.. kiya tha ki nahi.


Haan kiya tha par..


Par kya haan.. beer aapko aapki biwi se pyari hai na ab karo pyar beer se. And poor Maan was badly beaten up with her jhooti's tat he had loving gifted her for some occasion just 10 days back but now his very own gift was his enemy. Beer hain tho zindagi hain par biwi hain tho maut.


Jaan he held her hand but she glared and with fear he released her hands and said. Maaf bhi kar do.. aaj ke baad na beer na beer peena wala hoga humare ghar mein.


Pagal nahi hoon main. She hissed at him. Aapko sirf beer chahiye biwi nahi chahiye par aaj main ish beer aur beer peenewale ki kahani hi khatam kar dungi.


Jaan I promise.. sachi mein promise. He pinches his neck. Dekho yeh phek diya. And he threw the beer bottle can away spilling the contents from it. Aaj ke baad no beer no beer peenewala.


Kyu beer peenewale ko bhi aisa hi phek donge.


Haan phek dunga.


Phek dijiye. And she walked away with a victorious smile as finally she threw the beer and beer peenewala out.





Omg!!!! hilarious OS... 😆😆😆😆😆 very well written di... 👏👏
geet's juti and maan's beer...😆😆
bechara maan... 😉

Edited by pinku04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
very funny update yaar..maan was beaten by geet with her jhooti's to teach a lesson to maan to stop dinking beer...poor maan😆😆😆 finally geet won..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Omg what a hilarious os
Maan ki pitai ho rahi hai Geet se kyuki wo bear pick pi raha hai
Maan is cursing himself kyuki Geet ussi jutti se uski pitai kar jo usne usse das din Pehle gift ki thi
Finely Geet ne bear aur bear pine wale dono ko hi bahar nikal diya
Beautifully written
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
hi shobha
its too hilarious os ..
geet beating maan with her jutti ..
beer peenewalo ki khair nahi ..biwi se zayada beer pyaari
toh aa gayi maan ki jutti khane ki baari ..
geet ne kae di pitayi ..maan ne beer bottle gumayi ..

lovely hilarious os ..loved it

thank u ..

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