PIC-A-THON : let's have fun ^_^ OS 3,4 ,5/ PG 18,19 ,23/ SEPT,30 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
LP was awesome! Geet's jhooti wins over the beer! Geet makes sure he gives up beer! she advertised he is looking 4 a bar girl! she wants a divorce! Maan has 2 chose! well written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hilarious update...geets plan is really awesome and maans beer surrender in front of her jhoothi and poor maan has to bear all the pain now...really funny
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely os Shoba di :)
Finally her jutti won and make Maan force to get rid of Beer :p heheheh sahi hai... Waise i like this cute MSK who bow down before his jaan only in two jutti maar 😆
loved it alot
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one suhi :)
Geet tried to mend Maan ;) making him jelous

Originally posted by: suhaaana






Geeettt!!!!!!
Maan shouted seeing his would be wife , His better half whom he loved for ten years now standing on the top of the table and dancing while some random boys whom he knew were dancing trying to touch here and there.. She was wearing a sexy off shoulder black dress that was probably the first time he was seeing her wearing and that too in this dangerous position.. She looked at him and the beer can that was in her hands went straight towards her mouth making maan to close his eyes .. He looked at the guy who was trying to get his geet in his arms and maan who just held his baby doll in his hands before any one could even touch her..

Geet : maan.. She said seductively looking at maan with her drowsy eyes and maan forcefully tried to take that beer cane from her hands..

Geet shouted at him as she was still on the table and maan was trying his best to cover her.. When she glared at him..

Maan : niche uthro abhi.. He tried to sound as rude and angry as possible but his emotions were getting too impulsive seeing his geet responding and smiling at the random guys..

Geet : kyun.. Kyun.. Kyun uthru mein.. Haan.. Kyun uthru.. See I am enjoying so much.. We are having so much fun.. Hain na gaurav .. Sourav aur.. Aur.. Kya naam hai tumhara she pointed at the random guy..
This maan is na so bore sooo bore.. You know B.O.R.E bore..
She said while her hands tried to pry off maan's grip which was getting tight as he was getting annoyed..
Come on lets dance .. She came down and as she was about to take a step she was in maan's arms and he walked as fast as possible taking his geet while she still had the beer can in her hands..

Geet was chattering while maan took the cane and threw it away placing geet on the car bonnet as they reached the car parking.. She was already intoxicated and maan held her tight while she continued giving him glares with her almond eyes ..

Geet : you dusht daanav.. Das sir.. Wala.. Hiccup.. She hiccupped and maan smirked..leaning on a side as he opened a beer bottle in front of her..
Geet snapped his hands and jumped off the bonnet only to get her five inch heels making her fall as she was not used to these.. She loved her jooties so much..
Geet held maan for support while she cursed him..
Geet,: this is you get from these stupid sandals that MAAN SINGH KHURANA likes babaji.. She talked and grabbed the bottle and when she tried to drink a little maan held her from her waist taking the bottle and opened her sandals making her feet free from those freaking heels..

Maan : you will wear this dress , will drink and then dance geet .. maan asked now getting angr
Geet : haan karungi..she spatted on his face looking straight into his eyes..
Geet : when you can dance , when you can drink this yuck drink .. And when you like those high heel girls than I will do all..
Samjhe MSK..
Maan : then baby don't expect any leniency from me.. He kissed her hard in the parking making her loose her intoxication.. And she opened her eyes wide.. While maan smirked..

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear!!!!

awesome thread and lovely concept!!!!!!!!!👏


great effort from you!!!!!!!!⭐️


and about my os,edit...i cant make edits...but will try to give an OS if possible...cant promise though...but will surely try.😆


love


uma...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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finally jhuti won over beer..lovd it
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
Really Maan slapped himself with juthi ... Geet s laughing like mad ... Enjoyed reading ...
thank u for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
wait is tat a beer bottle in Maan's hand r is it cool drinks wala bottle.. nice idea btw..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahahahah jhooti vs beer.: finally beer out.. Lmbo.. Bechara maan.. Maar de bum pe laat.. ;) suoerb hun.. Enjoyed ur os..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ha!!Ha!!Ha!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 fabulous last part😃finally jooti won and beer loose and what a way geet used to through beer out of maan's life by threatening him of divorce 😛poor fellow swore to never even smell it again in his life 🤣 🤣 🤣

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