Beauty and a Dusht Danav (4) MG, Ch 22, pg 127, new thread link pg 1

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cutekanan

@cutekanan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Amazing update
finally geet accepted maans feelings..hope nw they live happily
geet told maan everything...now maan knows how to handle geet and gain her trust

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Lovely part. Tara helped Dev and Meera and now both are set to marry. Geet told all her past to Maan and hopefully Maan gets justice for Geet by punishing Daman and her family.
Thanks for pm.

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jasika

@jasika08

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Amazing update

Waiting for next update

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nish285

@nish285

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Hellooo aaavvviii...
The update has kinda left me.in mixed emotions...
I am certainly very happy dat the past is out ...maan knows about it...geet and maan are together and so is Tara and dev...all the things have fallen into place...
But wat has struck me is dat... the ending was kinda abrupt...its like u wanted to finish it off soon...and dat has kinda pulled down all the excitement dat was build right throughout the story..to see maan and geet together...u know the cat and mouse game de have been playing so long ...but i am sought of not satisfied with the ending...
I have read ur work wen i was very new in the forum...dat time i dint have access to commenting in my basic cell...
But now geeting to reading ur work aftrr such a long time...i was very very excited and happy as well...needless to say u are a wonderful writer...and somewhere i had expected dat the """happy ending"" of dis ss will be very beautifull and special...
Nd also seeing ur status ..and after today s update...avvii i felt dat u are not happy or disturbed... and may be its because of forum...i dunno i may br completely wrong...
But i just want to let u know dat ur one of the finest writers i have come accross in the forum... der are very less who have an a amazing style to think and conceptualize a story...and in all honesty u are one among them for sure... i hope u get more motivation and get better and better at ur writing...

And p.s...i dont mean to criticize or bash u for ending the story...being the reader i thought i should let u know my thoughts ..from being on the recieving end ...sincere appologies if i have by any chance offended u... :):)...

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: nish285
Hellooo aaavvviii...
The update has kinda left me.in mixed emotions...
I am certainly very happy dat the past is out ...maan knows about it...geet and maan are together and so is Tara and dev...all the things have fallen into place...
But wat has struck me is dat... the ending was kinda abrupt...its like u wanted to finish it off soon...and dat has kinda pulled down all the excitement dat was build right throughout the story..to see maan and geet together...u know the cat and mouse game de have been playing so long ...but i am sought of not satisfied with the ending...
I have read ur work wen i was very new in the forum...dat time i dint have access to commenting in my basic cell...
But now geeting to reading ur work aftrr such a long time...i was very very excited and happy as well...needless to say u are a wonderful writer...and somewhere i had expected dat the """happy ending"" of dis ss will be very beautifull and special...
Nd also seeing ur status ..and after today s update...avvii i felt dat u are not happy or disturbed... and may be its because of forum...i dunno i may br completely wrong...
But i just want to let u know dat ur one of the finest writers i have come accross in the forum... der are very less who have an a amazing style to think and conceptualize a story...and in all honesty u are one among them for sure... i hope u get more motivation and get better and better at ur writing...

And p.s...i dont mean to criticize or bash u for ending the story...being the reader i thought i should let u know my thoughts ..from being on the recieving end ...sincere appologies if i have by any chance offended u... :):)...

@underlined: This was not the ending

I will try my best to not to disappoint you all.

Thanks for the nice words. Truly. They mean a lot.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

hi thanks 4 da pm n fantastic update! superbly written! Dev wid Tara! Meera j n curses Tara! Bt Tara confronts Dev abt Meera! he explains! she helps him! Love Tara! her drama was rocking! Dev js enjoys! Uff Maya aunty angry! Maan talks 2 Geet! he confesses his love! she shares her past with him! Maan angry hw she was treated! Maan wants to marry her! terrific moments! lovely pics! update soon!

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Beautiful.they really needed to talk n finally maan has confessed, giving geet better reasons to believe him.

I really want that daman thakur to ask for death, he is tortured so much. N that nandini n her mother to rot in hell.

Pls dont end the story so fast.i want a long romance avi style.abhi to stage set hua hai

Write a sizzling romance part asap.luv avi

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Outstandinggg update...
Finally Maan confessed his love to her..
Geet also share her whole past too...
He also proposed her 4 marriage too..
Loved it..
Tara nd Dev drama is Superbbb too...