Maaneet SS : Chup Chup Ke, Part 8- page 57, 29th feb - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loving it.
Waiting for the suspense
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
wonder why is geet refusing to marry maan???
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely Update
Both Khuranas and Handas are scared of Maneet and did not open the secret that they have fixed their marriage and when the secret opened both Maneet are on cloud nine, behind the door kissiya and in front Geet refused Why , we are hanging on cliff hanger, pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Both thought they can deny their proposals after meeting

Both gave angry glares after knowing what they came for

When listened that their families want them to get married they were happy beyond limits

They acting like they dont like each other infront of family

Maan is so romantic

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update!!!Maaneet parents opening about their marriage both of them shock and the way they are planning to make the bride and groom run away is Awesome...but both of them surprised and so happy when they heard that their family fixing their marriage is so lovely...both are in cloud 9...OMG!!Geet don't want to marry Maan😲why??😕😕Loved it so much...waiting for the next...Thanks for the PM dear😃
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PART 5

Before anyone could react, Maan just screamed.

Maan: whattt? Bt why??

Everyone looked at him amused bt vicky looks at him curiously.

Vicky: bro??

Maan then realise that he was about to make a blunder. So, he said.

Maan: Mera matlab hain, achcha hi hain na. Kaam se kaam mera picha toh chutega.

Geet starts giving him glares.

Yash: Bt Geetu, tumne bataya nehi tumhe iss nalayak se shaadi kyun nehi karna chahti?

Geet: Dad, aapke sawal mein hi mera jawab chupa hua hain.

Pammi: Matlab?

Geet: oh ho mom. Aapka beta nalayak hain.

Listening this everybody burst into laughter and Maan was feeling like strangle Geet's neck.

Vicky: Too good Geetu.

Maan: what good haan? And u, Geet. How dare u call me, Maan Singh Khurana a nalayak? Huh..

Geet: I can dare Mr. Khurana. Because abhi tak tumne mujhe propose nehi kia?

Everyone looked at Geet wide eyed.

Everyone: PROPOSE!!!

Geet: yup, propose. Jab tak yeh mujhe propose nehi karega, tab tak main iss ristey k liye haan nehi kahungi.

Geet winked at Maan without anyones notice bt what can anybody do, when our new james bond vicky is keeping eagle eyes on them. So, he noticed it. Bt didn't say anything. Maan starts giving Geet glares with big big eyes.

Daadima: oye, tu usse aise badi badi ankhon se ghurna bandh kar. Aur ja. Jake propose kar. Theek hi toh kaha hain meri bachchi ne. Bina propose k shaadi thodi na hogi.

Everyone starts pushing Maan for propose Geet. Finally Maan screamed.

Maan: ok, ok. Fine. Main kar dunga usko propose.

Geet: abhi karni hain.

Geet smirked and thought, "aab aya na uth pahar k niche. Mujhe kitna satate hain humesha."

If glares can burns, Geet would have gone into ashes.

Maan: Geet, will u Marry me?

Geet: yah lo. Yeh koi proposal tha, ya tumhari company ka koi deal. Huh. Thode pyaar se, muskurate hue, apne GHUTNE pe baith ke propose karo na.

Geet said evilly. Maan gritted his teeths and bends on his one knee. He holds Geet's one hand and looks at Geet's eyes. He got lost in them bt next moment he smirked and thought, "Jaan, tumse toh main inn sabka badla chun chunke lunga. Woh bhi shaadi k baad. Par abhi toh thoda hisab chukta karlu".

Maan: Geettt, mujhe pata hain ki hum dono humesha fighting karte hain, hum mismatched hain, humari banti nehi. Lekin phir bhi humare gharwalo ne pata nehi kya sochke humara rishta pakka kar dia hain. Toh mere pass tumhe zindagi bhar jhelne k alawa aur koi choice nehi hain. Par main yakeen k sath yeh zaroor keh sakta hu ki, main puri imandari k sath yeh KOSHISH karunga ki main tumhe jyada tang na karu. Bt koi gurranty nehi de sakta. Toh Miss Geet Handa main aapna full life aapke sath spend karna chahta hu. WILL U MARRY ME?

Listeng the proposal everyone looked at Maan shocked. Especially Geet.

Geet: Maan, yeh tum mujhe propose kar rahe the ya taana marr rahe the?

Maan: jo tum samjho. Dekho main toh woh sab pyaar se, muskuratey hue and ghutne pe baith ke kaha. Toh hui na proposal. Aab jawab do. Mere ghutne pe dard ho raha hain.

This time Geet smiled sweetly at Maan. Maan got scared. Because, he very well knw that Geet's this smile means that something is cooking in her evil brain. Geet replied.

Geet: Haan, Maan. Tumne bilkul sahi kaha hain. Hum bilkul mismatched hain. Par kya kare. Bado ki baat to mann ni hi hogi na. Toh main bhi tumse promise karti hu ki jab bhi tum mujhe tang karoge, toh tumhe sofe pe raat guzarna hoga. Aur agar jyada tang kiya toh main tumhe kamre se kick marke bahar bhej dungi. Aur main tumhe iss baat ki full gurranty deti hu. Toh Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, main bhi tumhare sath apni full life spend karne k liye taiyyar hu. Yes, I WILL MARRY U.

Listening this vicky brust out laughing. Even everyone starts laughing by then. Somehow vicky stops his laughing and said.

Vicky: omggg.. That was hillarious. The World's Most Weird Proposal And The World's Most Weird Proposal Approval. Aap dono ka toh pata nehi. Bt main yeh gurranty zaroor deta hu, aap dono k shaadi k baad hume entertaiment mein koi kami nehi hogi. Woh bhi muft, muft, muft.

Maan: vickyyy...

Daadima: kya vicky Maan. Sach hi toh kaha hain usne, aap dono k hote hue hume tv bhi on nehi karna hoga.

Geet: Daadimaaa.

Rano: arey.. Aap log yeh sab baatein leke hi baithe raho ge kya? Muu mitha karo. Ladka-ladki ne shaadi k liye haan kar di.

They starts feeding sweets to eachother. Everyone is soo happy. Geet went to Maan for feeding him sweets.

Geet: Maan, yeh lo sweet kha lo.

Bt Maan didn't eat that and whispers in her ears.

Maan: Nope. Mujhe yeh sweet nehi khane. Mujhe aapni specialwali sweet khane hain.

He said looking at her lips. Gee blushed cherry red. She slightly wacked his arms and said.

Geet: Maan, badmashi karna bandh karo. Sab log hain yaha. Yeh lo sweet aur chup chap kha lo.

Maan: theek hain. Pehle tum khao. Phir main khaunga.

Geet: pakka?

Maan: Hmm.

Geet eats half sweet bt there stuck a small piece of sweet in her lips. Maan looks at everyone. Seeing everyone busy, Maan slowly licked the sweet from Geet's lips, leaving Geet in a shock.

Maan: yummy. Sach mein yeh shaadi ki sweet to bohot jyada hi sweet hain. I love it and would like to eat it again.

Geet looked at Maan with wide eyes and open mouth.

Maan: Jaan, aise maat dekho. Kuch kuch hota hain. And close ur mouth. It's tempting me. Phir maat kehna, Maan tumne sabke samne mujhe kiss kyun kia.

Maan starts teasing her.

Geet: Maan, tum na apna yeh lafangagiri aapne pass hi rakho.

Saying this Geet again blush. They starts romancing with eachother without noticing this a confused soul watched their little romance. Yup, our new james bond vicky saw them together and thought, "What the hell was that? Akhir chal kya raha hain in dono k bicha? Mujhe pata lagana hoga."

After feeding eachother sweets. They left for their respective houses.

At night

Maan and Geet are talking in the mobile.

Maan: hello, jaan.

Geet: Jaan my foot. Maan i hate u, hate u, hate u. Aaj tumne sabke samne woh sab kyun kia?

Maan: arey Jaan..

That time Vicky was passing by Maan's room and Maan's room's door was slightly ajar. So, when Maan said Jaan, vicky's feet stopped immediately. Vicky thought in his mind, "kya maine Maan bro k muu se Jaan suna. Am i dreaming? Aur waise bhi woh itni raat ko kisse baat kar rahe hain? Itni pyaar se toh Geet se kabhi bhi baat nehi kar sakta. Phir kahi.. OMG.. Kahi bro Geet ko cheat toh nehi kar rahe hain! Mujhe unhe rokhna hoga. Par kaise?? Wait. Pehle main inki baat sunlu. Shayad kuch pata chal jaye." thinking this he starts listening Maan's talk.

Inside the room, Maan is trying to patofy Geet.

Maan: Dekho, Jaan. Mujhe woh sab karna padha. Taki gharwalo ko humpe shak na ho jaye.

Geet: matlab?

Maan: Matlab yeh hain ki, agar main waisa kuch nehi karta toh un logo ko pata chal jata ki hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain. Aur waise bhi tumhare chakkar mein London jane k liye bhi mujhe kitne papad belne pade.

Geet: Maannn..

Maan: Geet.. What Maan haan? Ek toh tum humesha mujhe satati ho. Aur upar se woh vicky ke bachche ne aaj mera mazak udaya hain. Chodunga nehi usse mein.

Maan said angryly and Geet giggled.

Maan: tumhe bohot hasi aa rahi hain na. Shaadi k baad main tumhe bhi dekh lunga. Aaj tumne jo kia, uska badla toh main jaroor lunga.

Geet: aur tumne jo sabke samne sweets khane k waqt kia, woh kya tha? Besharam kahika.

Maan: Geettt. Aab tum mere romantic mood ko spoil maat karo.

Geet: tum pehle mujhe yeh batao, tumhara mood romantic kab nehi rehta?

Maan: sach mein Geet yeh sab kuch kitna achcha lag raha hain na.

Geet: haan, Maan. Aab jaldi se humari shaadi ho jaye. Phir koi tension nehi hain.

Maan: hmm. Chalo, bohot raat ho gayi hain. Tum so jao.

Geet: good night Maan. I love u.

Maan: good night Jaan. Lovd u too.

They cuts their call. Maan went to washroom for freshen up. Bt outside of the room Vicky stood like a statue. Poor vicky, the truth is too much to handle. He thought.

Vicky: Matlab Maan bro aur Geet ek dusre se pehle se hi pyaar karte hain. Woh bhi CHUP CHUP KE. woh itni pyaari pyaari baatein Geet se kar rahi thi. I just can't belive it. Sab kuch hum sabke nakh k niche ho raha tha, aur hume bhanak bhi nehi laga. Woh dono hume bewakuf bana rahe the. Waha hum sab inn dono k rishtey ko lekar itna pareshaan the. Aur waha London mein yeh dono gulcharre uda rahe the. Aur bro ne kya bola, mujhe sabak sikhayenge. U just wait and watch Bro and Geet. Aab yeh vicky kya karta hain. Aap dono k shaadi ka sabse bada aur dhamakedar gift toh main dunga.

He starts smiling evilly.



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Edited by janna341 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hhahahahahha rofl.. Omg.. Haye... Maaneet tomance on full swing.. Oh ho caught by vicky babu.. Superb yaar... Ab aayega mazaa.. Cont soon hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello
lovely part ..maan proposed geet in funny manner ..got tit for tat from geet ..
vicky on mission maneet ..now he is shocked ..

thanks for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
enjoyed very much reading

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Posted: 9 years ago
vicky kabhi nehi sudhrega...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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