ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED # 9 Updated NOTE on P 94: 105 / 2-10-2015 - Page 2

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congrats for the new thread
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CONGRATULATIONS FOR NEW THREAD
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PART 44


Even being on work, his frustration don't leave him. Geet once again denied his proposal. Even after spending plenty of time she was adamant on her thoughts. He assumed that past months would changed her thoughts on marriage but no use. Now he worried how he handle the baby without wed lock?


"Every thing is slipping from my hands. Because of her condition I won't force her and politely my words not get in her pea size brain. I never saw a girl this much fool. Here I want to provide her every thing, but she still struck on her weird thoughts. Why she wants to bound me? When i gave up my life for her then why she don't leave her rules?" Maan was struggling between his feelings and thoughts. His own feelings were over powered by his thoughts.


When Maan was lost in his analysis, Dev came to remind him about conference. He found Maan lost and asked the reason. In return he got his stare. "What happened bro. Are you upset with me?"


"Yes and not only you. I am upset on all of you. Tum sabne use sir pe chada rakha hai." Maan burst on him for no reason.


"Who? Parth?" First name came in his mind as Maan and Parth not share good bond.


Maan stared him even more. "Why Parth? I have one more small child at home." Maan snapped.


"Who? Geet? Now what she did?" Dev was curious to know what bothering his big bro.


"She act like a child always. Her small brain unable to think logically." Maan was hell angry and his gestures confirmed it clearly.


"Bro why you always judge every one as per your thinking. I told you always try to spend time with her, then you would able to understand her even better." Dev sides her which not likes by Maan.


"Why i always understand her point of view? Why for a change she try to understands me? And this idea of yours is totally useless. I tried to share but she slept even without listening." Maan blamed her for every thing.

"What exactly you share with her?" Dev narrowed his eyes and Maan told him. His jaw almost dropped. "Apne usse ye sab discuss kiya? This files and numbers and projects?" His eyes widened with pity for Geet.

Maan annoyed more. "What?"


"No are you seriously told her her all this and then you cribbed she slept before you complete. Bro Geet deserve bravery award fot tolrating you. If I was on her place I would die much earlier with boredom." Dev taunts and Maan shot a glare.


Before Maan opened his mouth Sameera walked inside his cabin. She greet both. Dev's eyes narrowed. "What the hell are you doing here Sameera? I think you forgot..." Dev's anger visible and before he could get out of control Maan intrupts in between.


"Dev relax. We forgive her." He said in a straight voice.

'What? How can you bro? May be you forgot what she did?" He was unable to believe on his ears and eyes. "Bro I am telling you, just stay away from her." Dev not able to pretend and showed his true self. He doesn't even allowed Sameera to convinced him. He just refused to listen a single word from her and left his cabin.


Sameera shed tears and Maan irritates. "It's ok Sameera now tell me why you are here?" He come straight to the point.


"Maan you are angry on me right?" She asked to cnfirm again.


"Sameera I don't have much time for all this." He talk casually not like buttery words at all.



"I am sorry Maan. I just came here to invite for my b'day party at my county side farmhouse" she invites him in a very soft tone, glancing in his eyes try to scann his mind.


"Well I won't assure you. I am not free you see." He told her roughly.



"It's ok Maan. I am not forcing, but will be glad if you come, even for few minutes." She pretending a sweet smile and left.



In evening at Maan's mansion :



Maan thought to talk with again and change her mind regarding her decisions. "Geet what you think about my proposal?" Without playing with words he asked directly.


Geet numbed again. She tried to avoid as this topic leads to rift between both. But Maan not ready to leave without her yes. "Sir please I already told you then why starts again and again?" She said in a meak voice.


Maan hit the table hard and made her tremble with fear. His raised brows and quicken breathing sending a shiver to her. He shot a glare and went inside the washroom. He fresh n up and ready to leave. After so many months he was leaving her in night time. Though she fears still asked where he was going but in return he got his glares only.


"It's none of your business. I don't give this right even to my dadima. Now talk with me when you make up your mind for my proposal." He announced and stromed out of the mansion. Not even bothered that once again he hurt her badly.



Maan reached to Sameera's pool party where all are enjoying in shorts or two piece. Sameera smirked seeing him and kissed on his cheek to welcome her. She kissed him but Maan didn't respond. He was came here in anger.


"I can't express my happiness Maan. Thanks a lot for coming." She showed her happiness and offers a drink to him.


Maan took the glass from waiter but his eyes were not showing any interest. They were blank. He gave gift to Sameera and wish her b'day. Sameera held his wrist and dragged along with her. "Come Maan we can sit there." Both sat on pool side, dipping their legs into the cold water. Maan sipping his drink glancing all around silently. "Maan I thought you don't forgive me but yaha aake you assured me." Sameera tried to be nice with him so she can start conversation on the topic she wants.


"Hmm.." Maan only sounds not initiate for any thing.


Other guests sply girls came up to get him with them in pool but Maan's temper cautioned them. His one glare enough to push all away.


"Relax Maan. I apologize from their side." Again she talk sweetly. "Okay leave all this and tell me when you both are going to marry?" Sameera already observed his temper which actually going to help her. She overheard the talk between Maan and Geet. And now she know how to play with them. Her question increases his anger.


Maan stood up and ready to leave but she stopped him. Sameera doesn't let him go till her motive full filled. "Maan what happened? Did I asked something worng?"



Maan's breath quickened again. "I want to but Geet is not ready." He poured out his frustration.



Sameera smirked evil and hide instantly before Maan catch It. She clenched his shoulder. "But why? Don't mind Maan but baby is going to arrive soon and for baby's better future its very necessary that you both get marry as soon as possible." Sameera use her words very carefully. She knows how to enraged him.

"That's what I told her several times but she don't even try to think about it." Sameera's words made him open up with her. He reacts the way she wants.



Maan if you allow, I will try to talk with her on this matter." Sameera offered. But Maan left without giving reply to her. Sameera took one drink and sipped like it was her winning drink. "It's ok Maan aaj nahi to kal you can't keep her away from me and I will make sure that you kick her out of your life and mansion." She smirked even more evil and finish her drink in a go.




IMPORTANT NOTE :-


This is my last update on IF for ES. Again likes not completed on last update.


No issue. If this update get 260+ likes then only I update next part or else ES ends for me.


Like Revengeful Love 2 I shut ES to. Now choice is yours. When I got 293 likes on many updates of ES then 260+ is not a big deal.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yar ye iski kya problem hai
why cant he understands for once tht she wants him wholly
uper se y sameera ka kya masla hai
age kam masle hein jo ye bhi agae
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Posted: 9 years ago
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y cnt maan understand geet...jst marriage is not enough...plz dont discontinue this story...i love this story
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Now me confuse ... Why isn't maam still not in love with geet.. Why?? Urrgg.. On the other hand he have hurt geet so much...leaved her alone in house... Party with sameera... Not a good sign... Hope this evil mistress sameera willnt be able to accomplish her plan... At least maan should NT bring sameera in their matter and I think geet should also explain things to maan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb updt
maan thinks she z a fool didnt wanted to marry him
maan frustrated about geet decision
sammeera try to make da situation favour

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Posted: 9 years ago
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yarr what is this maan problem .y he is not understanding people at all this time also he hurt geet and now this sameera is coming between them he is giving this opportunity to that stupid and geet is not ready to marry maan. y maan is not loving geet r he is not ready to understand himself that he can't be in peace without geet . please don't separate them .full of confusion please next part fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maan's anger is not justified as he thinks just marriage is enough to bring up a child...he is adamant on his decision and got easily pulled up by Sameera's sweet talks.. Dev tried to warn him.. Loved it..Waiting for next..
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