Dosti..bounding of soul part 1,2,teaser on 6,10,14- 14 april - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2

All of them felt hurt with pinky ...she is nave than how she done this it with them. Dev and meera fuming in anger ...it's too much how could pinky act with them like this in this maan feel trualy hurt with pinky act he know how nave she is but act like this ,there no excused for this act no...

Adi saw maan hard face and he get that now pinky going to really worse from Msk ,he soft with geet but he hate with lie and pinky done more than lie ...adi put his hand on mk shoulder and say ,please maan bahot jada mat angry hona ,kuch to reason hoga ,uske ye behave ke pitche ...

Maan took out adi hand form his shoulder and give a hurt look to adi and went from there without word ..

Adi want to stop him ..he once look to dev n meera but them also went from there . adi took deep breath and mummer ,pinky what u done ...

Maan ,meera and dev take their belonging things and went from there without eating Bf and without tiffin

Meera reach near ...shooting place ,she is today in her verse mood ,she so much hurt and angery ...n she missed her balance and get bumped on something or say someone ,its happen outside the door of her studio ...

Meera who all frustrated with first pinky act ..just took all her frustration that person

Kya u don't have any eyes ,nahi dikhata to went to doc and give proper treatment na ..ye kya hai agar mera dress kharab hota to ...pata nahi kaise log hai world main jinko do kadam thik se chala bhi nahi jata ...meera scolding that person nonstop ..Without looking to that person ...

After few min she feel ok that all her frustration come out ...now she closed her eyes and took deep breath ...and think ,main itna data usko ,koi reaction ku nahi aa raha ...than she look who is that person

N there she saw a girl around 20,21 standing in salwar suit have confused ,hurt emotion on face ,she is looking like lost ...like she don't here one word of meera scolding .she looking like zhoobi

Ajubaju ki koi khabar hi nahi ,meera feel bad for her ...

Meera called out hey ,r u ok...but don't get any response and before meera ask one more that girl start to walk road side ...next moment meera freak out in fear ...one car coming in full speed toward that girl ,and that girl don't aware of it ...meera in full speed run to ..that girl and ..with full force pull that girl to her side ...and thanks to god both girls land on safe side ...get small injury ...meera anger reach to seven sky ...she again going burst on that girl with anger ...but when she saw her ...that girl not once winch in pain after getting injury also ...now its feel odd to meera ..just than she get massage that her shoot get cancel ...meera closed her eyes to control her anger ...

She took deep breath and come near to that girl ...and make her stand on her feet and called taxi ...in this ...three hour went like this other side dev and maan also cannot constrated on their work ...come back to home but both totally avoid pinky ...pinky who is in her room feel wired when no one come to her , but she lost in work on laptop .

Meera reach to her home with that girl ...she press door bail

Maan in front of laptop ,he so much hardly to forget about pinky ...and do some work .

Adi in kitchen who making lunch

Dev on his guitar...now big question who is going to open door ...they r looking to each other at last ...maan stand from his chair but ...adi went to open the door .. n when he open door ,he cried meera kya hua tumko ...

With his word maan and dev run to door side n ...maan went first to meera side who is holding that girl who have her head bend ...so he cannot see her face properly but his heart start to run in fast speed ,he feel some uneasiness and when he touch that girl shoulder to took her inside ,he feel like he know her ...

He and meera took her to girls room ,so they make her lie ...and when they make her lay down properly maan froze in his place ,he feel like his heart going to brust in pain and same time in happiness...

Maan called out softly gudiya ...and in that room all froze in their place gudiya ...gudiya to maan ki ...

Maan went near her and called out gudiya ,gudiya kya ho gaya tuze why u r like this ,ma baba kaha hai ,and what r u doing hear ...he hug her ...so tightly ,please gudiya kuch to bolo main nahi datunga tumko ajj but talk with me ...a tears r falling form maan eyes ...he once look to meera and mummer ,meri gudiya meri gudiya ...

Meera called out softly geet handa ..she is first who come out from shock ,thou maan is soft but he never show his emotions like this ,but his face his tear ...so much saying about them

Maan isko kya hua hai ,why she not saying anything meera ,tuze ye kaha mili ,she never come out from our town ,uski padai bhi udhar hi hui hai ,ye yaha Mumbai kaise aa gayi ,ma baba kaha hai

Meera ,wo akeli thi maan ,rashte main agar main usko nahi bachati to shaayeg wo ...ajj

Maan - look her and geet in disbelieve ...

It's so much to take ...he feel like he lost ability of thinking ...he never in his bad dream ,think his gudiya will meet him like this ...maan mummer doc meera doc ,meera hum log jaake aaye hai she is ok bas she is in shock ...

Maan once look to gudiya ,meera nodded all to come out from room ,they all know maan need time to digest to all this ,his childhood love like this , thou its one sided ...he never say about love to her ...

O ho...

Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main

Tera intezaar karun

Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko

Tere hi naam karun

He is always that she get his unspoken word but that time never come and last month he heard about her engagement ...

Khudko main yoon kho doon

Ke phir na kabhi paaun

Haule haule zindagi ko

Ab tere hawaale karun

He so much want to cherished his whole life ,har ek pal with her ,and now he found her but like this a broken doll...

Sanam re, sanam re

Tu mera sanam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re

Tu mera sanam hua re

Karam re, karam re

Tera mujhpe karam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re

Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho...

Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon

To toote saare bharam re

When he start to get attract with him,he so much chided with himself ,but his love win on his brain and result is he is toe to head in love with this gudiya ..

Sanam re, sanam re

Tu mera sanam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re

Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho...

Baadalon ki tarah hi toh

Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai

Baarishon ki tarah hi toh

Tune khushiyon se bhigaya hai

Aandhiyon ki tarah hi toh

Tune hosh ko udaaya hai

She always give him happiness jaise suki zameen ko basish apni pani se ...bhigota hai wiase hi she give him happiness...and yahi gudiya uska ek din adhi ke jiase hosh uda gai when he first time get that he is love in her ...

Mera muqaddar sanwara hai yoon

Naya savera jo laaya hai tu

Tere sang hi bitaane hain mujhko

Mere saare janam re

Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)

Tu mera sanam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)

Tu mera sanam hua re

Karam re, karam re (karam re..)

Tera mujhpe karam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)

Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho...

Mere sanam re mera hua re

Tera karam re mujhpe hua ye

Its hard for him to look his full of life gudiya like this so broken ...he once again hug her hard and cried out his heart .


precap

punishment for pinky

and gudiya come geet ka 🤬


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Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
AayilA !!! Ye dosti me tension kaha se aa gaya ..
Maan love Geet and Geet ki engagement hone wali thi .. Geet.ayi hai Maan paas
but.. Not as Geet He knows...
Pinky ki To pitayi hoyegi lagta hai...
Geet ki Voice chali gayi hai.. kya...???
waiting for next part ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Awesome Update
All the friends are hurt with Pinky's prank the fact that the prank was of a serious nature
so yes the friends were hurt but now she needs to understand to never do something like that
again .
Meera meets Geet but her first meeting is one where Meera takes out all her anger and frustration on Geet but minutes later she sees Geet walking in the street and is not cared about her safety and she saves Geet from been injured or an accident could easily have happened
Meera brings Geet back to the apartment and Maan is shocked at seeing his Gudiya in that way
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice update
every body angry on pinky as she play cheap prank on all
maan shock to see his gudiya , childhood love in bad condition

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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
hi thanks 4 da pm n nice update! Well written! Maan stunned seeing Geet like that! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome parts yar. The story is very interesting, if possible do pm me waiting to read next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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y geet is like this..
maan is too much in shock seeing geet like that
all friends had a bad day with pinkys prank
nice part

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Posted: 9 years ago
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tumhari prank dekhi hai meine ...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

tumhari prank dekhi hai meine ...😆





kya di apni shiysha ko aise nahi satate

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update loong time mahi so all r hurt by Pinky's act maan is the most HD is angry adi tries to tell him not to be harsh he leaves meera is angry she pours her frustration in a girl who herself is list meera saves her bit she dosent respond she takes her home as she dosent seems to be herself here all r ignoring pinky who up till now hasn't gussed her jig us up asi shocked to see meera but maan numb to see the girl with meera is his geet his childhood love who has gotten engaged to someone else but still his heart always yearns for her but right now he is scared to see her she isn't responding even to him maan is in pain seeing his Gudiya like so

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