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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

hi rashmi

love thisos ..this was brilliant ..

love geet and manu here ..specially the little girl manu who is so mature ..don't want to hurt anyonew ..she was so understanding ..want to take care of all ..it was so painful when she said ..mom papa ke bina reh sakti hai toh mein bhi reh sakti hoon ..

mohinder uff too much ..wish he would have listened to geet toh yeh separation nahi hota ..

geet maintain love the both the persons who were important in her life ..mohinder by obeying his words and returned back ..another maan ..though she left him but she took a part of him in her forever ..she was ready to spend her entire life alone just with her memories ..

finally maneet met ..all well thats end well ..dua kabool ho gayi geet ki

thank u rashmi for wonderful story ..i totally loved it ..each and every part of it ..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

hi thanks 4 da pm! bt read n commented already on TD thread! superb fab emotional OS! beautifully written! loved it!! 👏⭐️ pls post epilogue!

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

loved it...
awesome concept.
geet lived away from maan bcoz of her father
who forced her to do so. since maan wasn't so rich that time.
have a daughter maanu but never told her about her father..

mohinder confessed his mistake and begged apology from maan and his family..
maaneet still loving each other..
happy ending..

loved it

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

beautiful...

yaar ye OS hi achche hain...ek hi update mein sara dukh dard khatam...

thanx for pm...

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Lovely story.

Because of the ego of mohinder Maan and Geet had to stay apart for 7 years. But atlast they were able to come together due to mohinder. Maanu had to hold onto her natural feelings of live towards her father.

But then everything's well that ends well.