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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
achcha hai maan ne gusse mein kuch gadbad nehi kar diya...dekhte hai kya hota hai age...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Lovely update
Geet gave suggestion to maan... He is angry
Will he consider geet's suggestion... Waiting to know
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Superb update. Geet makes kheer which Maan liked. But Ayesha taunt her that Maan not liked. Geet listen Maan on phone asking someone to demolish orphanage. Geet tells him not to do this and make alternative arrangement for kids.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Interesting. LOVED IT. Ayesha is so evil and want to destroy maan. Innocnet geet gonna make ruthless bussines man to fall in love.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
amazing update...
maan saw geet coming out from
shower...
and he was drooling on her...
geet makes kheer ayesha taunts her
which maan didn't liked...
geet talked maan about orphanage
he doesn't like her interference
in his business...
Waiting 4 the nxt prt.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Thanks to all who commented and liked my previous parts😊

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Part 6

Maan came back by 3 am in his room only to watch his beautiful sleeping with the comforter till her neck.
A smile crept into Maan's lips effortlessly. He too slept as soon as he laid on bed due to tiredness. Geet got up at morning to find Maan sleeping peacefully. She laid there for a while niharofying maan. His m-shaped lips. Manly figure. Geet whack herself mentaly to drool over her husband. Koi aise drool karta hai apne hi pati ko? Apne pati ko nahi to kise drool karegi. Maan's slight change in position alerted her she ran to the bathroom before he gets up.

At breakfast table today only dadi, Maan and Geet where present. They talked very less. They sat at the hall after breakfast. Bete apke mama ka phone aaya tha pagphere ki rasam puri karni hai. Apka koi bhai nahi to aapko khud aane ko kaha hai. Maan aap geet ko handa house drop karne ke baad office jaana.
Ji Dadi. Geet be ready within 5 minutes. ''be ready within 5 minutes''Dadi imitated Maan. Geet giggled only to get a glare from Maan. Geet ran before volcano burst. Maan Geet aapke office worker nahi jo aap hukum de rahe ho. Waise bhi aap in baton apne dada pe gaye hain. Woh bhi aise hi the. Khabardar meri bahu ko sataya toh.
Maan chuckled listening to his dadi but he was very happy to find her happy after so many years.
Dadi saalon baad meine aapko itna khush deka hai.
Humari khushi aapki khushi mein hai. Agar aap khush to hum bhi khush. Kal tak ek darr tha jo aapne geet ko apna humsafar banakar khatam kardiya. Maan iam really happy for you.
Geet came back exactly after five minutes. She was really happy as this would be her first ride with her hubby and she was going meet her mother.

Maan droped geet at the gate of haveli. aap nahi aayenge? Asked geet. Nahi tum jaao. Mujhe ek zaroori meeting attend karni hai. Shaam 5 baje aaunga tumhe pick karne. Tayyar rahna.
Maan started the car when Suniye...Geet paused Kahiye... Maan said giving emphasis on each letter. geet pouted and maan chuckled seeing her expression. Woh...orphanage? geet was shivering but was ready face his wrath. She closed her eyes as though Maan would hit her anytime.
Maan took out a file''Tum padhi liki hona?
Ji matlab
yeh padlo.
Maan went of in no time. geet carried the file with her to the haveli. She read the file while walking. Rano saw maaneet at the gate. but she took everything in wrong sense. She thought her daughter is treated as a servant and Maan was just completing his responsibility to drop geet.
Rano ran to geet thinking she is going to find a crying geet but when she saw geet entering the hall she just stood looking at her. Geet didnt see Rano and was thinking about her hubby. The way he kept her words. the way he tackled the problem really amused her. Maan changed the idea of building a hotel and was builing a housing colony for middle class people. there would be many facilities for them from gardens, temples markets etc. This would be done in half of the land. Some barren land that is very near to it orphanage would be built.
geet was amused by Maan's decision. Geet's knee hit on the sofa near by. All thanks to her hubby who didnt leave her mind for a second too.
Sambalkar beta Rano's voice brought her back. Seeing her daughter happy Rano was on cloud nine.Both sat on nearby sofa. Sab thik haina. Aapke sasuralwale ache haina? Rano asked Geet was busy thinking about her husband when Rano shook her to bring her back from her lala land. Mama waha sab bohot ache hain. Aur Maan kaisa hai? Geet remembered yesterday's night conversation and today his decision. Itne dusht bhi nahi hai. Rano was confused with her changing expression from sad to happy then proud but seeing her daughter lost somewhere she assumed everything is normal. She is tensed unnecessarily.

Maan went to office to find fuming Ayesha. Maan whats this. why are you doing this. Colony bananese kya milega that too for midd leclass families? Isme sirf loss hai! Ayesha shouted. Di this is my office and my decision is final Ayesha stood shocked never in her life she thought Maan will behave in this way with her. Maan took a deep breath. He knew Ayesha is hurt but he knew how to convince her. Ayesha left his cabin with tears only to be followed by Maan. She entered her cabin when Maan too entered. Di plz sit. Ek baar mujhe jo kehna hai wo suno phir aap jitna chahiye mujhe daatna ok.
ayesha shook her head and sat on the sofa. Maan too sat besides her in sofa. Adi bring the file. Maan instructed Adi his most trusted employee and head of finance department. adi brought the file. ayesha read it
Now explain how this b***** will make profit for us.
Maan stood and spread a blue print on the table.
we will built housing colony at half of this land for middle class people. As they dont want any extra luxury things at there house a simple villa will be enough for them. Markets, Malls and playgrounds will be build. The facilities will make it self sufficient in itself. With time we can built a hotel in remaining land. Near by mall and temples and all will be extra facilities of this hotel. Trust me this will bring profit than we thought before.
What about this orphanage you are thinking to built here (pointing to some place in the plan).
Goodwill of the company... To remove them from there we have to spend a lot. I really dont trust that politician who said he will help us. If orphanage will apeal to court they can easily get a stay order affecting both our copany financially and company's goodwill too. This can solve both the problems. what do you think now?
ayesha was convinced like never before. She trusted Maan. he can never be wrong. What made him think in this way was the question.Never before he said about goodwill. She knew dadi wouldn't interfere this much in office matters moreover this project was only in first stage and only three people knew the actual project. As though Maan read her said Geet she made me think this way.
Ayesha was now sure that Geet would be very dangerous for her. She is naive but not brainless. She had to do something fast.
Di! i have a meeting with Mr Chopra now.
But it was at 5pm right? Its only 11am now.
I preponed it. I have to go to pick Geet in the evening.
Ayesha gave a fake smile and asked him to go. As soon as Maan left Ayesha broke the vase kept on the table. I have to do something. Before all i have to separate dadi from geet. then only i can plan something. Just have to keep dadi away from KM for a while and everything would fall into place.
Ayesha got an idea just had to implement it.

Maan reached exactly at 5pm at HH. Geet too was ready before 5 itself Rano could find her daughter restless and exited to go back to her house. She was now relaxed and ready for her treatment. It didnt matter anymore to her the after effects of the treatmet. Even if she dies she knew Maan would be there for geet.
Maan came inside the haveli only to find geet already. It feels very good to find wife with a happy face all waiting for only you after a tiring day. Both wanted to speak to each other but would become quite at the last moment. They didn't knew what to speak. Rano was observing both from top stairs. This was the Maan she saw at the hospital for the very first time. The caring MSK when his sister got asthma attack in a party. None knew this side of a ruthless, heartless MSK - a business shark.
She came down and Maan gave her a fake smile as though they were in any official party. Rano understood that he is only MSK for her and expecting ''Pairipona maaji'' dialogue from him is like expecting cold from fire.

lets & go were the only two word other than hmm he said in one hour he spent at handa haveli. geet bid bye to Rano both cried a little but not like at her bidaai. Maan wanted to just push geet into the car and drive of but he kept patience.

From last 15minutes they were alone in the car. A complete silence. Thank you geet said suddenly confusing Maan for the orphanage geet said with a smile. Maan's lip widen a little only to shock her.
Aap hase
what
Aap hase abhi abhi this is your first smile after marriage. hayere! mein marjaava!!. aap ki hasi nabohot cute hai
Maan looked at geet as though she is an alien. he never saw this geet in these two days but was happy for this bubbly geet. he felt everything cute about her. he was falling for her cute antics while she for a beast unknown to both of them.
Both reached KM only to witness the fight between the famous fighters of khuranas. Ayesha was very loud only to frighten geet to the core. She clutched Maan's hand. Maan kept his hand on her's as though asking her not to worry.

Edited by masti_maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Great part. Geet was delighted when maan gave her a file in which it shows that he will not break the orphanage but will make a building for middle class people. Rano was also happy seeing her daughter happy. Omg what this ayehsa is up to. I don't know how maan couldn't able to know her truth till now. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
lovely update geet was getting reday maan was drooling on her he wanted to touch her feel her but his trance broke when he got the call where he ordered to destroy orphanage and throw away the ppl living there geet was shocked to hear she didnt know maan was ruthless dadi made geet understand that she is maans wife her job is to keep him happy and stand by him ayesha taunted geet but maan liked her sweet dadi told geet to fight for her dignity if not for herself for maan atleast geet very scaredly told maan he dosent have to trow orphanger ppl out he can build a part for them which will be good for his company too maan hated geet interefered in his buisness but when he thought properly he got her point
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
nice ud
daadi told maan to drop her HH
geet asks about orphanage maan
gave her file to read and geet was happy
maan told ayesha about changing in project plan
maan convince her and he told its geet idea ayesha
thought its better to deal with geet first before its
to late but she don't know its already late maan
consider geet as family and this relation now
matters him very much like her's and daadi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Lovely update...
waiting for d next part...

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