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hi babbie ..
abhi rakhi celebrationsr over ..where r u ..still busy with family
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hi tabby
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rakhi kaisi gayi???bhai ko kitna loota?
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m good how are you???
rakhi kaisi gayi???bhai ko kitna loota?

hi dona
me fine ..
bhai ko mast loota ..rakhi was mast but tiring so ..
tumne kitna loota aapne bhai ko
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me fine ..
bhai ko mast loota ..rakhi was mast but tiring so ..
tumne kitna loota aapne bhai ko

cool
arre ek to mera bhai mujhse chota hai so nolootna ulta main loot ti hu aur wo abhi bangalore me hai so nothing
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friends 🤗
i m in fever from ystrdy ,, not able to sit ..
cold nd body ache ..









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cool
arre ek to mera bhai mujhse chota hai so nolootna ulta main loot ti hu aur wo abhi bangalore me hai so nothing

okk ..tumhara bhai banglore study karne gaya hai kya ??
my brother is also younger than me ..butnow he earns so lootna banta hai ..

waise someone told me rakhi is not celebrated by some bengalis ..is this true ?
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The Myth


The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 32


Part - 33


Whole day passed in thoughts nd all d three ppl wr tensed at their places ,, reason was same but d thought nd solution wr diff ,,eagerly waiting for d eve to discuss d matter together ,, when Kabir came at eve all looked at each other tensed nd settled in living hall with d mugs of their coffee ,, after a casual talks Geet started d main topic .

Geet: uncle do u have any suggestion , I m very tense for daijaan's visa .

Daimaa: Geet beta u cn stay at ur uncle's home nd I'll go for that .

Kabir& Geet: what ??? NO ...

Geet: I never send u alone there , not at all .

Kabir: I agree with Geet, Farida ,, I won't allow u to go alone , if needed then i'll go with u .

Daimaa: what wrong in that , Geet don't forget , I went for Huj alone ,, u both don't think me a dumb .

Kabir (nd Geet smiled): we know u r very smart , but I cn't send u alone there .

Geet: Daijaan , going huj was a diff thing ,, u wr in a group nd this is a diff matter ,, u have to stay in Delhi , visit embassy ,, talk to authority nd ppr work ,, u cn't manage alone , u know how we spent hrs for visa ,, no I cn't send u alone .

Kabir: Geet , u don't worry beta , i'll go with her .

Daimaa: then who'll stay with Geet here , I cn't left her alone here .

Geet: I m doing fine nd I cn manage few days ,, it's hardly a matter of 3-4 days .

Daimaa: no , I won't leave u alone ,, u'll stay with ur uncle nd i'll go alone .

Kabir& Geet: no farida/ daijaan .

Kabir : OK fine i'll try to leave an attendant for Geet in my home , nd she'll stay there in our absence .

Daimaa: nd what about day ,, if something happen in day time , if she fall , what if her BP go down or she get sickness ?

Geet: Daijaan , if u r this much worry nd I have a wonderful solution for ever , nd after that there was no need to go again after 6 months .

Kabir& Daimaa: nd what is that ?

Geet smiled naughtily nd looked at both : aap dono ki shaadi .

Kabir& Daijaan: what !!!!!

Daijaan angrily: r u mad Geet ? I don't like this joke .

Kabir looked at Farida sadly nd then at Geet : Geet , essa nahi sochty beta ,, u hurt farida , say sorry to her .

Geet : why daijaan ? what is wrong in this ,, if u cn say to me to marry a man which was choosen by my so called family ,, if u cn say me to stay in that man's home who played with my life , if u cn say to Keep this baby where we all knew that this baby never got it's father's love though he is alive nd enjoying his life with his GF ,, then why cn't I say something for u ,, don't u have a life ? don't u deserve a family ?don't u consider me as ur well wisher ,, cn't I think for ur good future ? don't u know Kabir uncle from childhood ,, cn't u trust him .

Daijaan: it's not like that Geet , u cn think for me , u r my child , but this is totally nonsense , think about Kabir , he cares for us nd u hurt him .( Kabir looked down )

Geet looked at Kabir: he was hurt long back , but now he is very happy getting his lost happiness again ,, cn't u see anything Daijaan ,, u know him from yrs .

Kabir: Geet , no beta ,,what r u saying ?

Geet: bas uncle aur matt chupaiye ,, aap dono ko bhi apni zindgi jeene ka haq hei ,, u both tried hard to go with society but what this society gave u ,, u both r alone hiding ur feelings deep in ur hearts ,, at least open up now , nd spend rest of d days together happily .

Daijaan: do u know what u r saying ? u r not mature enough to think all this ?

Geet annoyed: if I cn marry ,, if cn bear d pain of rejection by my own family nd husband, if I cn give birth a child without it's father then I m much capable to understand all these things , I said what I saw nd feel ,, I don't know why u both r ignoring ur feelings ,, Daijaan u r not in India nd u r not bounded by any of ur past relations ...

... Daijaan agar mere ache future ke liye aap mujhe shaadi kerne ko kaha sakti thi to mai aapke acche ke liye kun ahi soch sakti ,, agar kal mujhe kuch ho jaye to kya aap wapas usi Handa family ki dahaliz( door) per jaogi zindgi bitane ?

Daijaan: Geet ,, ess anhi bolty beta , tumhe ku kuch hoga ,, tumhari aai mujhe aa jaye...

Geet: ku , kya surety hei ? Aur Kabir uncle aap ku chup hei ? aap kuch ku nahi bolty ,, kabhi-kabhi dil ki baat ko kahana jaroori hota hei ,, aapne mujhe adopt karne ki to kaha di , lekin meri Daijaan ka kya ? Unhe to aap mujhse bhi pahale se aur acche se janty hein aur wo aapko ,, kya etna janna kafi nahi sath nibhane ko ? Mujhe dekho maine sabki sunker kya paya ? maine wo kiya jo sabne mujhse kaha aur aaj mai kuch kaha rahi hu to koi meri ek baat manne ko ready nahi ,, shayd mere naseeb mei pariwaar ka sukh hei hi nahi aur na shayad aap dono ke .. ..

I m very sorry Daijaan , Kabir uncle , I m really immature ,, facing this life bcoz of very mature ppl ,, pagal hu mai .

Geet got up from there nd went to her room dejected, leaving Kabir nd Daijaan in a fix ,, both looked at Geet nd then at each other with painful eyes ,, a deep silence prevail there for few min ,, Daimaa was sitting with lower head nd Kabir was staring at her ,, at last he cleared his throat to break that silence .

Kabir: Farida I m sorry , bcoz of me u have to face this situation ,, she is innocent nd just spoke in gush of emotions nd mood swings ,, u know she bore a lot nd deffo miss that normal life like other married girls .

Daijaan : I know she is in pain nd lost many things in life from d day of her birth , but how she cn think about me like this ,, she is my child nd I m like her mother ,, mai ussi ke liye wo ghar bhi chod aai ,, aur wo ...

Kabir: she is also worried for ur future ,, she know about u nd that is why think about ur secure future ,, she is facing insecurity ,, bcoz of this visa issue, her nd ur helplessness made her to think like this ,, like her we both r also worried for her security in our absence ,, nd it's not d matter of this time ,, it cn happen again .

Daijaan: i'll go alone nd u cn..

Kabir cut her words: do u think now she'll listen us ? Or we cn forced her to listen our advice? Farida don't call her immature ,, she is a fighter ,, she put her future aside for this baby ... etna sab hone ke baad bhi usne apne bare mei nahi uss innocent baby ke bare mei socha ,, aur ye uska solo decision tha , apni future ki khushiyon ko dav per lagaker usne ye faisla liya tha aur uss faisle mei kahin tum bhi thi .

Daijaan: mai ,, maine to usske har decision ki support kerne ko kaha tha.

Kabir: but she knew u well ,, ur past , ur pain , ur loneliness ,, ur life affects her decisions .

Daijmaa: my life ?

Kabir : yes ,, her family left her , then her husband ,, she is alone nd understood d pain of loneliness , then she meet me who was also alone like both of u ,, but when we 3 came close we became happy ,, my wish to adopt her change her mind nd she became conscious about u .

Daijaan: I m always with her .

Kabir : u r her Daijaan , u love her as ur child , but this is a formal bond, formed by love , trust nd care ,, she want a solid legal relation which cn make us a family ,, Farida she knew that we both knew each other well ,, we both r alone ,, we love her like our child ,, I m happy to adopt her ,, ( farida looked at Kabir thoughtfully ) plzz don't mind nd take it wrong , but I want to fulfill her wish if u don't have any prob ,, we all are alone nd cn make a perfect family ,, we cn protect her well like our child ,, we cn adopt her ,, Geet is an angel for me Farida , she brought u back in my life when I lost all hopes ,, I never thought in my dreams that I cn see u again , but see bcoz of Geet u r here with me ,, we r away from all ods ,, here we don't have any boundaries of religions nd society ,, time has change nd so our lives ,, this time not for others , but for us nd Geet's happiness ,, hold my hand Farida .

Daimaa gasped nd looked at him stunned ,, Kabir spread his hand infront of her gesturing her to give his assurance ,, Daimaa heart skipped many beats , she never thought that she wd face this type of situation in her life ,, nothing was coming in her mind to react ,, she thought back about her past but there was nothing to think ,, she had covered a long distance ,, there was only bad nd painful memories , nd then she thought about Geet who completed d void of her life ,nd lastly Kabir whom she knew him well nd deep in her heart she very well knew that Kabir has feelings for her from their teenage, but they wr bounded by their diff societies nd never dare to cross their boundaries ,, today at this stage of life , far away from that past life nd place ,, he was expressing his desires to held her hand , even Geet too wanted this nd clearly said about Kabir's feeling ,, she wanted them together , but is this right at this age ,, she hesitated .

Daijaan: Kabir ,, in this age , how cn we ..?

Kabir: this is d age when we need support nd someone to share our heart ,, this is d age when ppl need companion ,, we don't know what is store for Geet in her future, but at present we cn give her a family .

Daimaa: but marriage in this age , what'll ppl say ?

Kabir : farida , I m not coming riding on a horse ,, it's a legal court marriage ,, simple , nobody knows , nd there was no need to say any one ,, we three knew nd that was enough .

Daimaa: nd what about Geet ?

Kabir smiled: now we cn put condition in front of her .. our marriage nd her adoption side by side ,, ku?

Daimaa ribbed her hands nervously : mujhe darr lag raha hei .

Kabir chuckled : ku yahan kiska darr hei ,, here we cn romance on road.

Daimaa stunned: shut up Kabir ,, kuch umar ka lihaaz karo .

Kabir chuckled again : ab umar ko dekhty hue to darr nahi lagana chaiye tumhe .

Daimaa: hye Rabba ,, kuch sharam karo , aur Geet ki socho .

Kabir : OK , fine nd thanks for ur support nd understanding Farida ,, come lets give this news to our angel ,, no,,no two angels .. ab to chotu bhi sunn sakta hei.

Daijaan smiled nd got up ,, Kabir wrapped his arm around her shoulders nd brought in Geet's room where she was sitting in her bed nd reading something in her lappy ,, she saw Kabir nd Daimaa once nd then again started reading ,, Kabir was smiling , but Daimaa was nervous .

Kabir cleared his thought with a smile : Geet , it's not good to get angry beta ,, she is ur Daijaan , cn't she scold u ?

Geet: she cn, if I m wrong ,, if she hopes that I listen her as her child then I also have right to say her what I want .

Kabir looked at Daimaa who touched with Geet's words nd her eyes turned wet ,, Kabir pressed her shoulder to ease her .

Kabir: nd if she listen nd do what u want then ?

Geet froze nd tried to get d meaning what she had listened , then looked at them shocked with open mouth ,, d smile of Kabir face was saying everything ,, there was happiness nd brightness on his face nd eyes , where as Daimaa was looking aside nervously ,, Geet noticed Kabir's hand on Daimaa's shoulder nd understood that they had decided something related to her proposal .

Geet: matlab ? aap sach mei meri Daijaan se ...

Kabir: she is spl to me too , u got this ,, u r my angel nd I cn't unturned ur wish beta.

Geet beamed , placed her lappy aside nd jumped out from her bed ,, she wrapped her arms around both's neck to give them group hug in excitement .

Kabir& Daijmaa: be careful geet/beta .

Geet: I cn't believe this ,, aaww,, thank u so much ,, thanku daijaan, I love u ,, thanks Kabir uncle .

Kabir: , thanks to u too , but there is a condition for this .

Geet: condition ?

Kabir: yes ,, Farida ur turn ,, bolo.

Daimaa: haan u have to accept ur adoption .,, we want u as our child , only then we'll become a family ,, bolo.

Geet startled : my adoption ...

Kabir : yes cn't we make our perfect happy family ,, cn't u accept us as ur legal parents ? is there any prob ?

Geet: no , but u know I m married nd going to be a mother soon then ...

Kabir: so what ,, cn't we get d happiness of becoming d grand parents of ur baby ,, bcoz of this baby we cn get one more beautiful relation .

Geet was overwhelmed nd chocked with emotions nodded in a Yes ,, these 2 ppl wr so pure heart nd selfless like angles ,, only know to shower love nd care on her ,, where her own ppls rejected her these two wr protecting her ,, showering unconditional love nd care ,, she had nothing to give them back but she cd give them happiness nd love of a firmly ,, if this adoption cd give them happiness ,,security nd protection to Daijaan,, if it cd give Kabir uncle his lost happiness back nd cd unite two pure hearts then she wd accept d adoption ,, what she had in her life except these two loving ppl nd her baby .


Precap---- missions started ...


Part - 34

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4446299/mg-ss-the-myth-thread-3-updated-pt-34-pg-125-31st-aug

sorry for mistakes ...


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i m in fever from ystrdy ,, not able to sit ..
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take care of urself ..hope ur fever comedown soon ..
take proper rest and medicines ..
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friends 🤗
i m in fever from ystrdy ,, not able to sit ..
cold nd body ache ..

hi di
take care...fever kam hua na abhi??meds li??

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