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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
nice prolouge
geet maan ke saath nahi hai!!
usski yaad ke saath ek kadwaahat lagti hai
sameera se bhi maan khush nahi hai aur divorce chahta hai!
aisa lagta hai ki sabko sazaa mil rahi hai...
maan, geet, sameera aur bachhe...sab ko!
waitng for unfold the story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Awesome prologue
Sam was maan wife 5 yrs back
N he divorced here
Now he is in thoughts of Geet
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Awesome di waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Interesting Prologue
Maan divorced with Sameera and I think have more than one kid may be 2 kids but he is missing geet and crying for her , who is geet???
Eagerly waiting for the start
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75


Thanx Huma for lovely banner




Remorse


Chapter 1



Before he could turn over some pages of Geet's diary...Maan got a call from Mr. Sharma..He gave a reminder to Maan regarding an important meeting at 11 " Still I have to wait Geet so to explore what you had in your heart ?..your emotions...Which you had pen down." He sighed and decided to read Geet's diary after meeting.


*****



" It really taken long...Already 1:30...Meeting main itna time lag gaya..I have to pick kids..Aneet gonna make everyone's life hell over there...if I will get late." A chirp of smile came to his face thinking about his bully daughter. He wrapped everything in jiffy..Putting Geet's dairy in his laptop bag he strode toward KC parking hurriedly...


*****



@ Kids' School


" What !!! Sameera picked Aneet and Arhaan five minutes earlier than usual time...How dared you let her take my kids ?" Maan exploded on security staff at school after finding, instead of him Sameera picked kids. When today he had made a promise for a fun out after school.He would again be entitled as " Biggest Liar " in terms of Aneet.



" Sir humko thoda patta hoga aapka kya plan tha..We just know that like you , your ex wife also has legal guardianship to both of kids..According to that we handed over kids to her..We followed all instructions" Security head Karam Lal gave explanation to prove his staff right.



"I am sorry Mr. Lal..I will handle.." Maan regretted and left for home.


*****



@ Khuraana Mansion



It was like Sameera's everyday affair to do exactly opposite to what Maan had planned for kids.If again she did intentionally or like always it would turn out to be a coincidence...It always happened when it came to kids..



Sam always tried to be a good mother..Maan he never trusted her...But reality was he couldn't throw her out of his kids lives even after divorcing her...They were sharing same space KM...living under same roof from 5 years.


(why u ll get answer ?)



" Sam...Sam..." Fuming Maan entered the mansion calling out Sameera.



Much wary of Maan's wrath...some how she dared to be in front."Maan please let me explain once...maine intentionally tumhara plan khraab nahi kiya..."



"I know you never do things intentionally..." he taunted..." aise he sabh ho jaata hai..tum kush nahi karti...since childhood due to your devilish mind..ur evil character ...it was your favorite time pass to make others lives hell....Aur agar tumko lagta k tum pakdi jaa-o-gi...It was Geet who always took whole blame of your deeds on herself..." He got blastic...




" Maan kabb takk...kabb takk sazza dogay mujhe..Even you have snatched whole rights from me..to be mother of my kids...to be your wife..." She wiped her eyes but Maan not let her complete...



" Just shut up...tum sirf ek legal guardian ho isliye tumko main apne bachon ki zindgi se nahi nikaal sakta...don dare to ask my kids as yours. they never belonged to you...wo sirf..." A haunting past let him tongue tied...He struggled to spoke up but not...

(why she is just legal guardian not mother will tell you later...?)



" I know Maan...But please trust me...I was aware about your meeting today...thats why you could be late...So I decided to pick kids up ...Even I rang you...When you didn't answer me I phoned at your office but Pinky refused to give line...Fir main kya karti...?" She gave justification to prove herself right..



They could continue with their blame game little Arhaan interfered with his demand " Baba...Baba...listen to me..." he pulled Maan's hand..



Keeping their violent eruption aside Maan knelt down in front of Arhaan and cupped his face " Yes my boy...kya baat hai...bollo ?" placing soft kiss on his 5 years old son's cheek Maan said lovingly..



" Baba you promised me na we will pay a visit to Mommi...When we are going..bollo na ?...I miss Mommi..." Tears dribbled down to his cheeks while expecting favorable answer from his father...



"Aaj he...aur abhi...ask Aneet to get ready..." He stamped his son's wish to be fulfilled...



" Sachi Baba...Aneet is also very sad...she is missing Mommi...you know na...She always gets bully and has jumbled up whole room..." Arhaan pouted lips making him aware about mentally disturbed little girl...



Cherished with his father's promise Arhaan ran upstairs to bring Aneet...



"Maan kya main bhi chal sakti hu saath..?" In a feeble tone Sam pleaded


Suddenly Maan found his Daddi Mrs. Savitri Devi Khuraana entering the living area...Due to some major differences Maan and his Daddi's relations were turning out to be bitter with each passing day...



"No , tumhari zaroorat nahi hai...neither me nor my kids...I think my dearest Daddi Maa she needs you more..." He sneered rejecting Sam's wish ...



Totally heart broken with Maan's behaviour Sam ran to her room...



" Maan I am waiting for the day when you will accept that what your Daddi did that was right...If I decided to let Sam stay in KM after divorce I had valid reason...For the sake of kids..She has legal guardianship for kids..." She rested her hand over Maan's shoulder...



She continued " Agar wo kahi aur rehti...Wo bachon ko apne saath le ja sakti thi...just by saying that she wanted to spend time with kids...In that way it was quite possible she could had brainwashed kids...And it is not hard to divert a 5 years old's mind...Yahan Sam hamari aakon k saamne hai..." she was frantic thinking about the destiny of kids...



" Why you did ? ...I don wanna discuss...But the fact is you kept her here against my wish...She had legal guardian...per Maan Singh Khuraana koi na koi raasta nikaal leta iske liye..." Already grumpy Maan jerked off her hand...




" Kaisa raasta Maan bete...to find such ways it is Sam's old habit...it is not your cup of tea...If she could marry you ...she could do anything... Filhaal aap jaaea...Kids are waiting for you..." she sighed showing him the real face of Sam's personality...



Sonia



Prologue




Tense liberties always here intentionally according to flow and rules of contemporary writing...



I don't want two words comment...You are not bound.. If you don't want...


Chapter 2 Page 18- Crime

Edited by Sonia.KN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Thank you for the pm..
nice starting..
interesting story...
waiting to more about geet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Wow ... So Sam is just a guardian she is not their mom... What happened to geet ... R they going to see her now ... Or will he read her diary... Is something wrong with aneet... Looking forward to read the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
pari staying in mansion after divorced
bcuz of daadi pari legal guardian of kids
so they r not her kids its her relatives
i think so
arhaan want to see his mummy
daadi told reason behind letting
pari stay in KM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Lovely update
Dadi is correct
As she is legal guardian she may
easily get the kids as their are small
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Nice part. So Sam is not their mother. Is it Geet but then why she left. As daadimaa hinted , is it because Sam manipulated the situation. Waiting to know more.

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