Sazaa (A Few Shots Story ) / chapter 3 pg 26 / 14 Aug

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Priya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

firstly thanks fro pm dear

loved the first part👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

oh Sam is just legal guardian not biological mother of Maan's kids 🥳...Maan ke bachchon ki maa to Geet hi honi chahiye...

when Arhan said --he wants to go to meet mummy...are they going to meet Geet...but where is she...and Aneet is mentally disturbed...how...

poor kids...

very interesting start...

waiting for next part...

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Alamelu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Interesting...looks like Sam somehow married maan. But whose kids are these geet or Sam is their mom. Looks like the kids too miss their mom a lot. Feeling bad for maan. Wonder where geet is

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awesomepooja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

interesting...
maan n dadis relationship has turned bitter reason is sameera... maan is divorced to samira... i m wondering where would geet b
mm

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vrinda22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Nice part

Masn went for meeting

So he couldnt read geets diary

Sam took kids ftom school

N masn angry on her

Masn n kids going to meet mom..means geet

Where is she..in hospital or ...?

Dadi has valued reason for making sam stay

Sam doesnt seem a negative character

N kids r maneets not sam too

But y she has the legal gaurdianship

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palak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

amazing start
i am too waiting to see whats in geet diary
the first part was so griping i dint want to stop reading
poor children living in such tense atmosphere

so much happened in past
cant wait to know whole thing

please give me blink if you update there

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jayshu17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

for the New Story dear👏👏👏

Awesome Concept👏👏beautifully written⭐️⭐️⭐️Superb prologue and part 1 update!!!Maan have kids...Sameera is his ex wife but not kids mother😕😕😕Maan divorce her but she is still staying in KM...kids wants to see their mommy...who is tat mommy??😕😕and where is Geet??😕😕because of Sameera Maan and Dadi's relationship has turned bitter😕Loved it so much...waiting eagerly for the nextThanks for the PM dear😃

for the late comment dear😳

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nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

It's very nice starting . maan was about to read diary of geet , suddenly his phone rang and had to leave for meeting. Maan went go pick up his kids from school bit he was shocked knowing sameera already picked them. He was very angry on her. There is lot of questions coming in my mind but I know I will get answer after reading next part.waiting for next dear