Sazaa (A Few Shots Story ) / chapter 3 pg 26 / 14 Aug - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Di will comment tomorrow. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's going interesting day by day dear I love to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting part... even after divorce sam is legal guardian to the kids and very much living in KM ... where is geet and who is mummi kids referring to...waiting eagerly for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice part dear ... enjoyed reading it ..so sam is living with maan and his kids in km...according to maan she intentionaly ruined his plans to spend tym with kids ... curious to who is kids mother ...and ya ..geet kha h... lets see kya hota h ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Crime


Chapter 2





Maan was on the way...taking kids toward destination where they had planned to go..His phone buzzed in the mid way..He had given this number to very few important people.Even Sam didn't have this number.So it might be any important call...He carefully stopped the car to one side of road after observing traffic...



" Rohan ka call ?...what's reason he is ringing again and again...Kya wahan sabh theek to hoga na.?.." He mumbled putting phone on his ear with trembling hand...

(Rohan a well known doctor and Maan's friend)



"Hello !!!" In same state of desperation like always ...he said in ailing voice..." Rohan if everything alright ?..Wo theek to hai na.?.."




" Baba...its uncle na.. aks him if Mommi is alright...what happened to Mommi...tell me...?" Impatient terrified 5 years old Aneet jolted Maan's arm from back seat...




" Aneet plz beta let me talk to uncle.." Maan requested..whisper near to her ear..and again diverted his attention toward what Rohan had to say...



" Don't u worry Maan rather than any bad one its very good news..First you have to come here..." A chirping voice of Rohan was a enough proof that some miracle was waiting for Maan...



" Ya Rohan I am already on the way...Bachon ko main hospital he laa raha tha..." overwhelmed..Maan replied...



" Come fast..." Saying this Rohan cut the phone...



" Aneet ...Arhaan...Rohan uncle said he has some good news regarding Mommi...So challe.." Maan informed kids...




" Yes Baba fast fast...hurry up" Arhaan stamped his what his father said ...and Maan again took the on the way to hospital...



" May be hamari Mommi theek ho gayi ho...haina Baba...? " Aneet encircled her arms around her father's neck from back of seat...



" Even me waiting for the day baby...But for the moment aap seat per beith jaayo...Let Baba drive safely..."An unfortunate father consoled his five year old daughter..who was trying his best to give a better life to his motherless children...




*****

Back in KM



After Maan left Daddi dropped down to couch...A hopelessness again clutched her...Memories of past never let her sleep peacefully for a night and always haunted her throughout day..



She got frantic thinking about what had happened or happening till now.. Which had shattered whole family...



Daddi's side what she was thinking in my words :



Maan's Papa Ranvir Singh Khuraana , Sam's Dad Parkash Khanna and Geet's Bau Ji Mohinder Handa...three of them were besties...Even three of them were well established businessman but there were no thing like rivalry in between them...



In same way when they got their next generation..even they were on their fathers' footprints...



Ranvir got married almost three years earlier than Parkash and Mohinder

Ranvir and Garima had two sons Maan and Dev.

Parkash and Meera had one daughter Sameera.

Mohinder and Rano had one daughter Geet and a son Kunal.




Geet's brother Kunal was too young...Where Geet ,Sam and Dev...were of same age...Maan was four years elder than three of them...




Maan he might be elder than all but his friendship with Sam and Geet was much famous...this trio was inseparable...



Where Maan was a much intelligent guy but too much bully...

Geet was a very calm girl with helping hand for all

Sam she always remained a clever cat...She always got jelous becoz Maan n Geet shared their birthday on same date...





Sam loved to spoil things in everyone's life...and Geet she usually took whole blame on herself for the sake of friendship which Maan never liked...



Once in childhood Sam asked Maan's father to help in her school project as he was very good at drawing...But Ranvir was busy in making blue prints for his new project...So he asked her to wait...But how could Sam bear this...some one saying no to her...So when she found a chance she turned a glass off water over blue prints to put whole of his hard work in vain...He was under too much depression.



Coincidentally Dev had found Sam coming out of room one hour back... When he told Maan he questioned Sam...As always Geet came in front for rescue taking blame over herself..As she told Ranvir that it was her fault She went to room for taking scale but by mistake glass of water turned over the table and drenched whole of staff over there...


Much disturbed Ranvir even slapped her and that day Mohinder also scolded his much loving daughter.Maan and Dev hadn't any solid proof so this time they couldn't do anything for Geet..But when Maan targeted Sam She pretended like much ashamed of her act...even felt sorry to Geet and Maan



Maan asked her to accept this in front of all..But Geet stopped them to do so as she had already got punishment..Why too make Sam a target again ?




So it was enough for this update will give more later...


Sonia


I am not going to drag so everything will be wrapped up soon...I have read all comments will like all later...



Edited by Sonia.KN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhh god kitta confusion maan nd sam are divorced
sam is guardian of both child
geet is the mom means geet nd maan r married
Hope u clear this sooonn
nice strt
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesomee update
is Sam really guilty or showing off.
I don't trust her..
maan too.
always ruin his plans according to him..

loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. Alot of confusion is there, if Sam is not mother of kids, who is? Where is Geet. waiting for next update.
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