Sazaa (A Few Shots Story ) / chapter 3 pg 26 / 14 Aug - Page 17

Exploration- Unfolding Past

(Part 1)

Chapter 3

It was Daddi's everyday affair to wander aloof in awful past.But she could not bear that stress which she always got after that "Nakul please take me to my room.. My heart is sinking and have palpitation again " She called her head stevert Nakul for her help...

"Daddi Maa...I think we should call the doctor...Main apko apke room takk le kar jaata hu...Ramesh doctor ko phone karta hai" She staggered to her feet when got up.It was Nakul who gave support to Daddi

What the past held which scattered an adorable family to pieces ? Whole story in my words:

Personality!!..My question is if each and every one's personality it remains same ?...From childhood through teens and than in adulthood...What the readers think I can't judge ?..But I think like two sides of same coin it could happen or not...May be or may not be...Even changing circumstances sometime brings major change in any person...

When this question appears to judge the trio Maan,Geet,Sam...their personalities remained same but with passing time they got more of same childhood morals and values...(good or bad)

Geet became a much sincere young girl ...

Where as Sam...no change could be expected in her...a clever cat even her evil mind always remained spinning off strategies..That how she could keep Geet apart and how to get Maan's closeness for herself ?

Sudden Shock :

On the other hand sudden death of Ranvir and Garima in a plane crash when Maan was just 15 totally shattered Daddi.

How to handle the business once again from which she had separated herself years back ? She had to..For the sake of two innocent souls...Who were now a sole reason for her survival...Whole incident brought an unexpected change in Maan behaviour..Where at one side he became introvert rarely spoke to anyone...But at same time he turned out to be short tempered guy...couldn't bear things going against him..

In this situation Sam's dad Parkash came in front to rescue the Khuranna Construction.As he was in same business...But Mohinder he couldn't do anything being in Textile Industry except moral support...Slowly and steadily Parkash and Khuraanas started business in partnership...Daddi trusted him as being just like a part of family...Things seemed ongoing at right track...but reality was something else...

Just after completing his Bachelors in Management...Daddi Maa took a bold step to send 21 years old Maan overseas for his higher studies..Main motif was that he could recover from that mental trauma...to get back real Maan...

A genius mind...well built Maan with sharp features was dream of every girl but he never paid attention..For him Geet was his soul mate...only person with whom he could share even his small life events openly...If Sam was in Maan's life it was due to just Geet...

Sam had a crush over Maan but Maan never let her any chance to express But what relations Maan and Geet shared ? They could never realised or never tried...They always remained mere besties in other terms

The news that Maan was going out of country made Sam crazy..She threw whole furniture of her room...smashed windows..headlights..windshield of every car in house...Her strange obstinacy to accompany Maan knelt Parkash down to accept her demand...

Unfortunately a dumb...below average student could't clear the required education qualifications and tests to study in US...Here Parkash's bank balance couldn't do any miracle...Sam left with no other option to stay back home...

Geet had chance but she opted to be with her parents and to wait for her best friend Maan...

In coming years Maan and Geet both of them got busy in studies..May be due to this the communication between them reduced by each passing day...But still they stayed in each other's heart...

What Sam was cooking ? If she couldn't get student visa but her wealthy father could arrange visitor visa for her...

I think this is enough..the heavy past is bit tough to digest so in bits...Will update later...

Sonia

Tense liberties always here according to rules of contemporary writing

Chapter 2 Page 18- Crime <--

superb start di .
maan ws about to read geet's dairy bt he couldn't due to meeting nd babies .
so sam is married to maan .
bt she is not the mother of his kids .
aneet nd arhaan r swtheart .
they were so eager to meet their mommi .
Maan.ws gussa on his dadimaa coz she let sam live with them .
I think maan should understand her pov.also .
coz dadimaa is also right ns ,
she wants kids to be with them always .
past is really painful di .
sam ruined maaneet's life just coz of her craziness .
waiting for next part di .

part 1

part 2

Nice updt,lvd it.
Slowly the story unfold the past of trio to know them better.

It's amazing. So maan loves geet.from childhood itself. Than how he end up.married with Sam. Sam is such a cunning woman from the start.geet was always a innocent should which become target of that witch Sam.maneet had lost their parents which was biigest blow king this life. After than maan become introvert and also started to loss his temper. In all this geet was always remained in his heart. Maan left out if country for his further education. But still he was so sure that only geet is his soulmate. Waiting for next dear