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After few days

Mumbai

Maan ans Sameera reached Pari's home which was getting decorated , many people were busy in doing something , house was full of people...

Pari came there to welcome them both..

Pari -hey maan bhai, hey sameera!!! happily she welcomed them..

Maan- congratulations pari!

Pari- thank u bhai!

Sameera- finally pari ur dream of getting married to rahul is fullfilling!

Pari(blushed a bit)- yeah finally!

Sammera- oh ho blushy blushy!

Pari- bas bas now stop teasing me, come let me show ur rooms!

As pari moved forward maan called her..

Maan- pari..mm..

Seeing maan stammering sameera shook her head..

Sameera- mr.remeo wants to ask whether geet is here or not??

Pari- bhai u love her alot na??

Sameera- i'm getting fed up with this question now.. offcourse a big yes!!!

Pari- bhai she is here, right now she and meera are busy in catching up in her room! do u want to meet her now??

Maan was happy to hear that geet is here but doesn't know what to accept from her so he denied!

Pari- okay , then wait till evening, come i will show ur room

Pari showed maan's room and then she and sameera left from there.. then pari moved with sameera to show her room..

Sameera- so pari , u met geet, what do u think is she too loves maan

Pari- geet came here yestraday only , firstly we had normal talks , she is still same as before silent types not that open , we tried to know whether see love maan or not but she successfully diverted the topic, then we also didn't pressure her much!

Sameera- does she have someone in her life?

Pari- i don't think so... and that's why i provided maan the room next to geet's room ..i mean if they want to talk , they can talk whenever they want to..

Sameera- hmm..

Pari- here's ur room! do u want to rest or want to join us?

Sameera- not now.. i'm feeling bit tired , will join u all later..

Pari- okay then, chalo rest well , today is sangeet , collect ur energy!!

Sameera- am i the only one to dance , right!

Pari- yes right.. but her phone rang in between, seeing the caller id.. sameera u rest, will meet in evening then..

Sameera- oh ho jijaji's phone continue...she teased her..

Pari- shut up! and she left from there..


Evening

today was sangeet and mehendi function , and whole house was busy in its preparations , sameera was already ready she went and met pari and meera who were themselves busy in getting ready , she was getting bored so thought to disturb maan ..

She was just 1 room away from maan's room when suddenly her phone vibrated , as she bowed her head to glance her phone she dashed into someone..

Both- ouch!

Sameera- who the hell.. but when she glanced the face of the person only one word escaped from her mouth.. geet..

Geet- sameera..

for few seconds both were clueless about what to say , when sameera initiated..

Sameera- hey geet, how r u ? , by the way looking beautiful(geet was dressed in beautiful cream and orange colour leghana with minimal accessories)

Geet- hey .. i'm fine and thank u for the compliment , u too are looking beautiful..

Sameera- thank u!

Geet- a.. how's life going on??

Sameera- it's going great , u tell anything new??

Geet- na..

Sameera- by the way u met maan?

Geet- maan.. a. nahi abhi tak toh nahi..

Sameera- oh strange ! don't u know he is just next to ur room??

After knowing that maan is just next to her room and for so many hours just a wall was present between them , made the butterflies in her stomach to flutter..

Geet(st)- maan was just next door , should i meet him now, na sameera is here, then.. but what if he gets angry to see me , what if... should i ask sameera about this, she is his best friend isse toh sab pata hi hoga, but how i ask..

Sameera- geet kya hua, where are u lost??

Geet- no..nowhere.. woh how is maan??

Sameera- why are u asking this question to me, ask maan himself , chalo , she grabbed geet's hand to take her to maan..

Geet- nahi.. sameera, i..

Sameera- kya hua? , don't u want to meet him?

Geet- nahi.. i mean i want too but..

Sameera - but kya?

Geet- first i want to know something, come with me.. geet took sameera in her room and closed the door..

Sameera- geet , what u want to ask??

Geet- woh..woh..

Sameera- geet i hate suspense , ask quickly!

Geet- woh..does maan have some other girl in his life?

Sameera- what!

Geet- please sameera answer me, it's really important for me to know!

for few seconds sameera just stared at geet, and then she plainly replied

Sameera- yes he have! u wanted hear this only right! with this sameera left the room...

her answer broked geet, she was proved right , maan proved her right , he forget her and moved on, immediately her eyes were full of tears..


Outside the Room

Sameera(st)- i can't believe maan love this geet so insanely , geet doesn't even trust him , till now she doubt maan, how can she! , i'm sorry maan for lying about u but the girl who doesn't even trust u should not be with u!!



Hall

Mehendi function was going now.. Pari was sitting in middle and girls were applying mehendi on her hands while meera was ordering few men to do this and that..

Sameera- see it's so boring , i told u this already!

Maan- shut up sameera, i'm not getting bored , why don't u go and sit with pari..

Sameera- and leave u alone in this ladies crowd , maan just look around , are there any men in this hall right now expect workers , go and rest in ur room , come after few hours when sangeet will start..

Maan- sameera, i'm okay .. i know u r dying for applying mehendi but because of me , u r not going , just go, and i'm okay!

Sameera- maan why don't u accept that u r waiting for someone or should i say for geet!

Maan- sameera u..

Sameera- maan u can't deny it , i know constantly u r looking upstairs for her... maan how i make u understand.. she doesn't love u!

Maan- sameera ! don't talk nonsense , have u met her or asked for this!

Sameera- yes i met her and asked her too! , she have forgotten u , she is living her life happily not like u always thinking about her!

Maan- u r lying..she..

Sameera- maan now its u who is talking nonsense now, in this 6 years have she ever tried to contact , no right! this clearly indicates she doesn't love u , can't u understand this simple thing! forget her , she doesn't love u maan , she doesn't deserve ur love...

Maan- how.. his voice was getting heavy now..

Sameera- maan truth is always bitter, and its also not possible that life goes according to our wishes so its better to accept the reality as soon as possible.. please.. she knows what maan must be feeling now , she tried to console him by putting her hands on his shoulder but he jerked her hands and left from their..

Sameer(st)- maan its time to accept the reality , it might be painful for u right now but i'm saving u from future pain...



Late Evening

now it was sangeet function time...

Rahul along with his parents were present their , many other guests too have come there..

Sameera has dragged maan to enjoy a bit but he was aloof from all this...

Meera went and called geet , but she denied first but after being pressurised by meera a bit she came downstairs..

Sameera- maan cheer up, sadu face doesn't suit u!

Maan- sameera please i'm not in mood to u hear ur bakwass , so just shut up!

Sameera- okay don't ! after a pause okay let's come at least meet rahul..

Maan- sameera i'm ..

Sameera- maan it will look rude, think about pari she will feel bad that her own friends didn't even come greet her soon to be husband..

Maan- okay!

Sameera took maan too meet pari and rahul, they had a formal introduction with rahul and started to have some causual talks , when pari said..

Pari- finally geet is here..

Geet's name grabbed maan attention, he turned his head to look at her, she looked same beautiful and sweet like before , maan's eyes were struck on her he observed her carefully , she looked normal , her eyes were looking on floors but when she lifted them maan was shocked to see her eyes they were slightly red and sore , did she cried was the first thought that came in his mind ..

soon both eyes met , maan directly looked in her eyes as if searching from some answers but geet didn't allowed him to see anything as she soon drifted her eyes to other direction , this angered maan , already he was in pain and now this her ignorance , it was getting unbearable for him now..

Pari introduced her to rahul , both formally greeted each other , maan was their only seething in anger that how can she ignore him so easily , not for once she looked at him and said anything.. and he too in his ego didn't initiated anything

Pari and meera tried to lighten the atmosphere but i didn't worked..

Raj- Geet??

Geet- raj!

Raj- omg ! u here how come? and he hugged her(friendly hug, which is reciprocated by geet too , which increased maan's temper more)

Geet- it's my friend's wedding..

Raj- rahul is ur friend?

Geet- no i'm from girl's side..

Raj- oh from bhabhi's side..

Raj is rahul's cousin brother same age as rahul

Pari- raj u know geet..

Raj- yes bhabhi me and geet were colleagues one year back , then i left that job as i wanted to move to foreign country..

Pari- oh...

Raj- geet come with me, i will introduce u with my friends!

Geet- a..i..

Raj- chalo geet , and he dragged her with him..

Maan didn't like this at all but he didn't do anything too...

In whole sangeet function geet was with raj , though she tried to go away but raj didn't allowed her as sometimes he will start introducing her with his friends , sometimes he will talk about anything and involve geet , like this he accompained her in whole function

Maan eyes didn't leave geet for a second , though he didn't even said a hello to her but his eyes followed her everywhere and seeing raj and geet together his temper was high!

whole function passed like this only , others were enjoying while maan and geet they were in their own world , one burning in anger and other trying to ignore everything!


Next Day was the marriage day , Haldi function was to be held in morning and in evening it was grand wedding ...


IN whole wedding too Raj didn't leaved geet's side , now geet was getting irritated with him plus was now getting uncomfortable too, as maan has only one job to notice geet , he did it perfectly and this discomfort of geet was not missed by him, and the thing that was frustrating him more was that geet not for once stopped raj , maan had beared enough now he was going to lash his anger on raj when sameera stopped him!

Sameera- maan where are u going??

Maan - can't u see that raj is irritating her!

Sameera- did geet said this?

Maan- nahi, but see her she is having ..

Sameera- maan enough! u know geet if she have any problem with raj she will directly tell him, as she is best in fighting for herself!

Maan- but sam..

Sameera- maan i told u to forget her, u urself have seen how she is behaving with u , ignoring u as if u don't even exist, if she had anything for u then she would have came to u right! but no she is with that raj not with u! maan i'm fed up of u know , please try and understand!

Sameera's words forced maan too think deeply on this and somewhere he too felt that sameera is right , if geet loved him she would have come to him , have looked at him for once but nothing like that happened that means she never loved him, he was just a time pass for her, all that was lie, he assumed it as love!



continued below..

Edited by GurTi123 - 9 years ago
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Cursing himself maan went to bar's corner which was made for guest outside in the garden area, time passed , wedding ended , guests came and went..but nothing effected maan , he was lost plus he have drunk so much that now he was not in his full senses..

bartender- sir ..

Maan-

Bartender- sir..

Maan- hm.m

Bartender-sir its time for me to close this can u please leave know..

Maan- what nonsense .. i have to drink more..

Bartender- but sir.. i have been ordered to close this .. please try to understand my situation..

Maan- understand! huh! she never understood me and u r telling me to understand u , why should i!

Bartender- sir u have drunk a lot please go to ur room

Maan- why should i...

Bartebder- but sir.. at the same time sameera came there while searching maan

Sameera- finally i found u! maan what the hell are u doing here?

Bartender- mam please take sir to his room , he has drunk a lot!

Sameera- hmm.. maan come with me..

Maan- no sameera , i want to drink more!

Sameera- maan!!! okay then let's go to ur room , i have kept many bottles for u to drink!

Maan- reallly?

Sameera- yes!!! now get up!

Maan obeyed her like a obedient child , he walked ahead while sameera walked behind him to make sure he didn't trip.

Maan- why it's so silent , marriage was going on right??

Sameera- maan marriage is over and now everyone is resting , expect u and me!

Maan- and geet?

Sameera- i don't know!

Maan- hmm

Soon they reached in the corridor , when sameera's phone ranged, she glanced her phone..

sameera- ah..maan , the last room in this corridor is ur room , its open , u can go now right..

Maan- hmm.. and he started to move towards his room, sameera looked till he reach near his room , she thought now he will enter his room , so she left from there to attend her phone call..


But maan instead of entering in his room , he entered the room next to his as that room too was open..

Geet was standing infront of mirror removing her earrings, when she heard the door of her room opening , she turned around only to witness a tripping maan entering inside her room..

Geet- maan..

Maan too was surprised to see her in his room..

Maan- what are u doing in my room?

Geet- ur room?

Maan- yes mine, what are u doing here?

Geet- maan.. it's mine room , ur's is next .. please go to ur room.. she coldly answered him..

Maan- u r lying , it's mine !!!

Geet- maan it's mine ! u r not in ur senses, so..

Maan- so what?

Geet- nothing just go to ur room.. and she turned around to avoid him.. this agitated maan and with quick steps reached her and grabbed her upper arm and turned her towards him..

Geet- maan.. what r u..

Maan- shh geet enough of ur ignorance now, how much will u ignore me!

Geet for few seconds looked at him and then again diverted her eyes and said..

Geet- maan please u r not in ur senses, please go..

Maan- go! yeah right u have only this word for me, go, why geet why u like to play with my emotions!

maan's grip was getting stronger with each word and now it has started hurting her..

Geet- maan leave me ... u r hurting me..

Maan- hurting! huh ! then i should hurt u more because this hurt is nothing in front of my pain..

Geet- pain??

Maan- yes pain! , the pain that u gave me!

Geet- i gave u pain and what u did!

Maan- what did i do , i just waited for u, waited for u that one day u will come back to me but i was so wrong.. so so wrong to accept this from u!u don't deserve my love..

Geet- yes i don't deserve ur love.. that's why u moved on..., it was the first time when maan witnessed some pain in her eyes and it hurted him too.. he loosened his hold from her arms

Maan- now why r u hurt?

Geet- everything is over maan.. she removed his arms and moved from there.. but this time maan grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards him..

Maan- say it clearly geet..

Geet- maan please.. why u want to create more complications , u have moved on ur life , i'am happy for u..

Hearing her maan closed his eyes in frustration

Maan- geet ! what nonsense u r saying moved on, who moved on?

Geet- u maan, see u did what u said , u proved me right maan.. saying this her eyes were full of tears..

Maan- geet u r confusing me , say i clearly!

Geet- maan why are u troubling me, it's okay if u r happy with someone else .. i'm happy for u!

Maan- what! and how u know this that i'am happy with someone else.. oh wait don't tell me u again assumed this thing!

Geet- no i asked sameera she said..

Maan- she said that i love some one else now?

Geet- hai..

Maan- and u believed her ?

Geet- hai..

Her this reply shocked maan , again she did same she didn't trusted him...

Maan- geet.. maan shook his head nothing.. and he turned to leave, his this expression force geet to think in some other direction and finally the tubelight in her head lit up!

Geet(st)- that means maan still love me and i.. oh babaji and i believed sameera and.. ye kya kiya meine..nahi.. i can't let him go now!

AS maan was just going to move out, geet called him..

Geet- maan.. maan stopped hearing her but didn't turned around..

Geet- maan i LOVE YOU! she said in one breath..

hearing her maan immediately turned back

Maan- what ?? what did u say?

Geet- i love you maan..

Maan- what??? he said while coming closer to her..

Geet- ahh..maan i love you.. now just a step gap was left between them..

Maan- w.. But geet cut him in between

Geet- now don't say what, i have repeated it so many times now...

Maan- but i want to hear it again..

Geet- no maan .. sameera might have lied to me but i realized that i don't deserve ur love, i don't even .. but this time maan placed his finger on her lips

Maan- shh..geet no more words now..i don't want to hear any nonsense now..

Geet- but maan..

Maan- geet no.. it's me who will decide u deserve my love or not , and i know u does.. i love u geet..

Geet- maan..

but maan didn't allowed her to say anything more and hugged her tightly..

after few minutes when geet was stable

Geet- maan..

Maan- hmm..

Geet- woh.. i'm sorry i..

Maan separated him for her

Maan- geet i told u na , u confessed that's the biggest thing for me , now i don't need any prove , aur rahi baat u deserve my love or not then i know how much u deserve it, i know how lonely u r from these 6 years , how u have isolated urself from this outer world..

Geet- but maan how u know all this..

Maan-i just know..


Geet- maan u understand me so well.. i'm really very lucky to have u... with that she hugged him back!

few seconds later

Geet- maan u were drunk right?

Maan- yeah little bit..

Geet- but..

Maan- that i acted, so that i can enter easily in ur room and seeing me not in senses u will behave bit softly with me and see my plan worked !

Geet- too smart!

Maan- from birth! and he raised his invisible collar, at this geet shook her head but again a thought striked her..

Geet- maan sameera lied to me ..kahi..she still..

Maan- not again geet , she doesn't love me , she must have some stupid reason for hers for lying to u..

Geet- how u know?

Maan- geet she is already married and i know her she will never do this , she is too loyal with relations

Geet- what sameera is married ! but with whom?

Maan- with dev!

Geet- what! how?

Maan- geet its long story , i will tell u some other time abhi i have some other work to finish..

Geet- other work?

Maan- geet where is ur mom?

Geet- mom is in banglore only..

Maan- u left her there..

Geet- i didn't left her, some urgent work came up so she didn't make up here..

Maan- oh.. i thought to talk to her about our marriage today only , koi nahi kal we will go to banglore then..

Geet- marriage this soon!

Maan- sorry i can't wait more now.. what if u change ur mind .. i can't take that risk..

Geet- maan.. and she playfully smacked his shoulders!

and their nok- jhok continued...

Phew it ended finally!!!

waiting for ur reviews now

request to all silent readers to please comment for a last time on this , whether u liked this story or not...

thank you for reading it😊


Edited by GurTi123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
That's Awesome
Will Be Waiting !!

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uff yeh geet bhi na har baar ulta hi sochthi rehthi hai.. aur iss baar bhi sam ki baatein maan liya aur sochne lagi ki maan move on hogaya.finally maan ki nautanki ki wajah se geet ne sachayi maan li aur confess bhi kardiya.. thank u for this lovely story.. will be waiting for ur other work.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally Geet ne apna pyar man hi liya
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chalo atlast geet ki tubelight toh jali...aur usse apni galti bhi pata chal gay n she confessed...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely ending...


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Posted: 9 years ago
I was shocked that Sameera took it on herself to decide whether
Maan and Geet should be together and as a friend she did not do good
whether she felt that Geet did not trust Maan or not she should not lie to both of them that was wrong .
I'm glad that Maan drunk a bit and came into Geet's room as I was getting scared that Sameera must not do something to him but instead he is cleaver he is just sharp and knew that Geet too will be in her room and he comes there
I'm happy that finally Geet took that big step and confessed her love finally after all these years

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