Beauty and a Dusht Danav (2) MG *** new thread link pg 1 ***

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Clearly Geet has escaped a worse fate. Her family apart from her mother are greedy lot with brij leading from the front. And looks like they are going to come calling at her door.

Maan is attracted towards Geet and he is trying to resist it using harsh words. But this time it was Geet's fault. She should not have jumped into conclusions especially now that he is not fighting with her at the drop of a hat.

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Chapter 10
Awesome update
Again Maan back in Dusht Danav avatar his big ego always stands like a mountain to bow a little😳
Brij plans to get all properties and for that he is willing to play dirty
Geet seeing Maan back to his rude self claims the moment she wants to think good about him he proves her wrong😆
Maan is dreaming about Geet now☺️
Loved the chapter
thanks for pm and pw

you are wrapping up in 3 more updates🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#693

Nice update dear brij is the main culprit of geet
Mann is dreaming of geet and he scolded himself for it

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Lovely update dear... Maaneet as usual are awesome. They like to hate each other and hate to like eachother... Wonderful. Hate this Brij and family. How low can they get. They didn't even help with rano's treatment and even made Geet run away. And now they want to sell of her land. How pathetic... 😡 . Wish to see Brij getting beaten black and blue by Maan.and maan babu is lattooo over geet. How much ever he try he cant even stop dreaming leave aside being in control before her 😉 .

Pls don't end it soon. If u want u can make them a couple and then continue their fights...

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Amazing update loved it ..oops maaneet ego n attitude clash

arghhh brij

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Nice update

Maan bahar se toh gussa dikhata hai par mann mein geet ki khubsurti usse satati hai...tabhi aisa dream dekh raha hai!...loved the dream!

Na,na,na karte pyaar tumhi se kar baithe!!!...maan ki halat aisi hai...abhi pyaar toh nahi hua par khayalo se geet ko nikal nahi sakta...

Geet ki help aur brij ke ant ke liye maan hai toh phikar not!

Prasad, meera, maan...nice scene!

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libros

@libros

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Originally posted by: dqno1

aisa nahi hai both of you

when i see readership dropping mujhe lgta hai ki logo ko pasand nhi aa raha hai

if someone does say that they r waiting or enjoying I try to update or at least post a teaser

thanks for the encouragement 😃

I agree with what you said... initially as a reader i wouldn't have been able to understand this thing like i can relate to it now... i agree if likes/comments decrease the first thing that comes to your mind is... is it boring/ dragging or simply just not good enough... why they stopped reading and all...? It's the same for me... I just started writing but I've felt this like after few updates but I stuck around just to complete the story and because there are those few handful who read and 1 whose there always waiting for more...

you also hang in there for us...😃 and dont cut short the story for those who left... it's their loss... they are missing out on a fab story... their loss... dont punish us because of them🤗

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libros

@libros

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: dqno1

oh oh 😆

maine toh chocolate hi socha tha 😆 😳

abhi toh chocolate hi gift kardo😆😆

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bina_a

@bina_a

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Posted: 10 years ago

#699

Yay... i'm back from my vacations 😃

Yaar!! I thought maan and geet had a truce (silent) ;) But never mind i'm loving the situation maan and geet are in. Confusion on both sides but for different reasons 😆. So Brij is that stupid conservative brother haan! I'm sure geet will handle him very well haina!! Well i'll wait for you to bring things up slowly 😉

I was thinking about somethings else too, but it slipped out of my mind. Bahut socha hai maine!! anyway if i would remember I will post it aain. Loved the update Avi 😊

Edited by bina_a - 10 years ago

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: libros

I agree with what you said... initially as a reader i wouldn't have been able to understand this thing like i can relate to it now... i agree if likes/comments decrease the first thing that comes to your mind is... is it boring/ dragging or simply just not good enough... why they stopped reading and all...? It's the same for me... I just started writing but I've felt this like after few updates but I stuck around just to complete the story and because there are those few handful who read and 1 whose there always waiting for more...
you also hang in there for us...😃 and dont cut short the story for those who left... it's their loss... they are missing out on a fab story... their loss... dont punish us because of them🤗

avi ..

totally agree with u say ..even shivi too ..

yaar ..write for ypurself ..write for us ..

we all r always there for u ..

tumhari story sab read karte hai ..par comment nahi karte ,...

dont pm them ...simple na ..bas jispe tumhe trust ho that they really love ur skills unhe bhejo and be cheerful ..happy shappy ,,,😳🤗