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CookieMonster

@heycookie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#671

Nice update
taiji n brij r so disgusting ppl..hate them..
woaah..maaneet fight..aur kitna ladenge???? Thoda romance b karlo.!!!
wow maan dreaming of geet dats something amazing..cant wait to c wht happens next...update soon

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#672

It was too short!

Aur tadapte hue dekhnA tha maan ko...hi hi

Why is maan still being so dd... Isko tadapte dekh kar mere kale he ko than dal milega

Bichara geet sare BHI torn

Badlaaa

Wo BHI jaldi avi... Luv u avi...write soon

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pop77

@pop77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#673

Nice part..Maan attract to Geet..but his ego stop him..if Maan visit more Meera that means he want to see more Geet..I hope Brij not find Geet..

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jasika

@jasika08

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+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#674

Amazing update

Waiting for next update.

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#675

Beautiful update...
Geet is lookinggg gorgeous in saree pic...
Maan is dreaminggg about Geet...intrestinggg...
but again dat over smart mind nd Ego of his not let d feel of his love toward Geet ...
loved it...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#676

Main kia karoon.. Main kia likhoon.. 😉
Awesome Update Avi 👏
That taiji.. brij n nandini are so sick.. always behind the money.. what happened in the past wants to know full 🥱
Brij tou achi khaasi maar mangta hai boss kab milega mouqa 😆 😆
geet came back from mandir, saw Maan admiring him laughing aww 😃
He actually wore those glasses so that wo geet ko full taar sakey 😆 😳
Kia avi hamari thodi khushi bardaasht nhi hoti tujhse.. phir se tarpaofy treatment 😆 😳
I thought her pallu will stuck somewhere else magar nahi usko bhi Maan ki hi watch atakna tha 😆
Ek slap tou parwa deti Avi 😳
Mazaa at 😆
Oops itni nafrat dono me.. upar se Maan ke erotic dreams 😎 😳
Loved it

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

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Posted: 10 years ago

#677

Res

Will edit tomorrow.

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Geet's family members are so disgusting and hypocrites. They treated Geet and Rano as servants in their own house and when Rani needed treatment for her illness the lowlife Brij refused to give them money. Moreover he now regrets not giving money only cos he misses her food and 'services'. Can he simply go die somewhere? No wonder Geet ran away. He must have done something terrible for Geet to take such a huge step. What more painful is Geet has property name after her and probably even has her own house but she is living at KF almost like an orphan. Although it is any day better since at KF she indeed made good relations who were strangers to her than having a family who are good diggers and can kill their own kin in their selfishness.

MG scene at the other hand was really nice and enjoyable. Glad Maan has learnt to control his irritations and annoyance by himself and doesn't lash out on Geet unnecessarily. He was drawn towards her more seeing her in a saree. He even put on his sunglasses so that she could not see his eyes that are always on her whenever she is around. Lol. This is something I found cute. Even him deciding he wouldn't take the prasad from her until she gives him was funny. However the whole scene turn into another misunderstanding btw them when her saree pallu got stuck in his watch. Both are such high headed people and have strong personalities that they always end up fighting. I really can't imagine how their life will be when they fall in love? It is something that makes me excited to look forward to the future updates. Their love story will have lots of fireworks I guess. Lol.

Maan is already having dreams about Geet that too some exotic dreams. So much that he had to remind himself he is MSK and she is a commoner and nothing can happen btw them. Dekhte hai for how long he ignore his own feelings.

Update was fantastic. Their encounters are getting intense and I'm loving it.

-Sanjana!

Edited by BrainEaterOwl - 10 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: libros

agree 100% with tabby

aisa nahi hai both of you

when i see readership dropping mujhe lgta hai ki logo ko pasand nhi aa raha hai

if someone does say that they r waiting or enjoying I try to update or at least post a teaser

thanks for the encouragement 😃

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
Main kia karoon.. Main kia likhoon.. 😉
Awesome Update Avi 👏
That taiji.. brij n nandini are so sick.. always behind the money.. what happened in the past wants to know full 🥱
Brij tou achi khaasi maar mangta hai boss kab milega mouqa 😆 😆
geet came back from mandir, saw Maan admiring him laughing aww 😃
He actually wore those glasses so that wo geet ko full taar sakey 😆 😳
Kia avi hamari thodi khushi bardaasht nhi hoti tujhse.. phir se tarpaofy treatment 😆 😳
I thought her pallu will stuck somewhere else magar nahi usko bhi Maan ki hi watch atakna tha 😆
Ek slap tou parwa deti Avi 😳
Mazaa at 😆
Oops itni nafrat dono me.. upar se Maan ke erotic dreams 😎 😳
Loved it

😆 Thank u Sheen 🤗