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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Beautiful updt,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
Loved the way maan confessed his love to geet.


thnks dear 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



wow lovely cute update.te way geet wants to spent time with my maan in their hectic schedule but my maan want to sleep and making her melt in his kiss was lovely..te way my maan wants to take they relation to next level but geet ki insecurity abt his past and my maan assuring her wat she meant was lovely..te way naughty geet teasing my maan but my maan will get his pay back at any cost he he..i love te update yar


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tania90

finalllyyy maan falls for geet nd he confesses his feeling nd now their first night waiting for it dnt put any fight plz plz unji first night ho jane do phir jo marzi kr lena


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dekh le first n8 ke baad

separation chalenga kya 😉
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Part 15

She kissed on his lips , and left...for few seconds he shocked, but then smiles...

Maan : geet

Tumne bhut intzaar kiya hai

.

Apne pyaar ka izhaar toh kr diya maine

.

Par ab mein humari phli raat special banana chahta hu

In all manners

.

Just wait for today night

***********

After breakfast, maan tell to geet for get ready, we going on shopping...

Geet : maan why shopping

Aapko kuch lena hai kya

Maan : mujhe kuch nhi lena

Hum tumhare liye shopping pe jaa rhe hai

Geet : par maan mujhe kuch nhi chaiye

I have all thing

Maan : geet

I know

You have everything

Par meri khushi ke liye le lena

.

Now I don't want to hear your no

We are going

That's final

Geet : ok

********

Geet tum pe ye top acha lagenga

Geet : maan mein ye sb nhi phnti hu

Maan : oh geet

College mein sbhi ladkiya asi hi dress phti hai

Geet : maan

Wo unmarried hai

Maan : ydi tumhari mujhse shaadi na huyi hoti

Toh fir toh tumhe koi problem nhi hoti na

Geet : maan

Maan : geet

Mere liye

I want you live your life

Geet : maan

Maan : bhaiya

Wo red top dikhana zara

.

Then he pick jeans and give to her...

Geet go to trial room and try all this...

Tb tak mein aur kuch pasand krta hu tumahre liye

Geet : maan

He take her to the trial room and push inside ...

Maan : geet

Try all this

Tum bhut pyaari lagongi

Geet : maan college ke liye

Mere pass cotton suits hai na

Fir faltu expense kyun krna

Maan : geet

Mere liye

.

Aur ha tumhare liye fir kuch suits bhi dekh lenge

Bs


Geet : ziddi hai pure

Maan : I know

*********

Maan go to other shop and select one sari for her...

Maan : pack this

********

Geet (think) ye maan mujhe yaha chodke kaha chale gye

Maan : thinking about me

Geet : aap kaha gye the

She notice one bad in his hand...

Isme kya hai maan

Maan : surprise hai

Geet : show me

Maan : abhi nhi

Raat ko

.

Tum ye batao

Tumhe fitting thik thi

Geet : hmm

********

Geet : maan ab shopping bhut ho gyi

Ab hum chalte hai

Maan : tumne accessories toh li hi nhi

Geet : maan

Mein wo sb nhi phnti hu

Maan : I don't want to hear anything

Lets choose some accessories...

He take two bracelets, few earrings...

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Geet : bs maan

Bhaiya

Bs ho gya

Maan : geet

Geet held his hand tightly and take him with own...

Maan : geet ye kya kr rhi ho tum

Geet : maan I want to go home

Maan : chalange

Phle tum kuch kha lo

Geet : mujhe bhookh nhi hai

.

Maan : par

Geet : aap mere sath chl rhe hai

Ya

Mein akeli jaayu

**********

Maan : geet

What your problem

.

Tum ab kis baat pe gussa ho

Geet : maan aap abhi bhi nhi smjhe

.

Maan : nhi

Tumhare liye sb liya

Fir bhi ye gussa

Ye narazgi

Geet : maan mein aapko mna kr rhi thi na

Mujhe ye sb nhi chaiye

Maan : geet

Mein toh bs tumhe wo har khushi dena chahta hu

Jo tumhe milni chaiye

Geet : maan am happy

So happy with you

Meri khushi humare sath mein hai

In sb cheezo ki jaroorat nhi hai mujhe

Maan : thik hai

Nhi chaiye

Na

Tumhe fak do

Bs

He angrily goes into room...

Geet : uff

Ab ye gussa ho gye

Kaise smjhayu inhe

**********

She come and sit near to him, entangled finger into his, then placed head on his shoulder...

Geet : maan ase kaise fak du

Aapne mujhe phli baar kuch diya hai

It's our first shopping

Maan : fir kyun krti hu itna gussa

Aur bina baat ki narazgi

Geet : maan

We have to control our expense

Dekhiye

is one month mein kitna expense ho chukka hai

meri college ki fees

fir palampur jaana

aapki bike ki EMI

sam ki medicine ka expense

ghar ka expense

aur is ghar ke rent

maan : geet

tum in sbki fikr mt kro

.

Ghar ka half rent company deti hai

Aur palampur official trip thi

.

Aur baki ka toh bs

Geet : maan

We have too save money for our future...

Kb tak hum rent pe rahenge

Hume apna ghar bhi toh lena honga

Apna ghar ho jaayenga

Tbhi toh hum

Maa papa ko yaha bula paayenge

.

Maan

Maa papa

Aapko bhut miss krte hai

Maan : geet

Mujhe bhi maa ki

Papa ki bhut yaad aati hai

Geet : hmm

.

Waise maan

How you know about college dresses, accessories about so much...

Maan : pucho mt geet

Sam na

Mujhe apne sath le jaati thi

Subh se sham ho jaati thi uske in sbhi cheezo ki wajh se

Abhi maan mujhe is dress ke sath matching ye nhi mila

Kbhi won hi mila

Maan tum us shop mein dekhke aayo

.

Kbhi us shop mein

Janpath ki saari market chan daalti thi wo

Geet : kbse jaante hai aap sam ko

Maan

He realize what he saying all time...

Maan : wo geet

Geet : maan btao na

Maan : college time se

.

Wo geet maine wo sb

Geet : maan

It's ok

Acha chlo mujhe wo packet do

Jo aapne mujhe dikhaya tk nhi

Maan : geet

Wo raat ko milenga

Jb hum dinner ke liye bahar jaayenge

Geet : maan

Mein ghar mein

Maan : geet

Ek Sunday hi toh milta hai na

Hum dono ko ek sath spent krne ko

Tum wo bhi kitchen mein bita do

.

No way

Geet : acha

Thik hai

Par after this

I don't want

Maan : I got it

***************

Geet open this

I hope you like this

She opened the gift wrap and sees black & red-pinkish georgette sari...

Geet : it's beautiful maan

Par

Maan : geet aaj ke liye no par

Jaldi se ready ho jaaye

Geet : hmm

*************

She wrapped the sari and come outside from washroom, he patiently waiting her...in this sari she looking more beautiful without any jewellery , any makeup...

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Maan why you staring me like that

Maan : geet tum bhut khubsurat ho

She blushed...

He makes sits in front of dressing table, and opened one box in front of her...

Geet ye na gold ke hai

Ya hi silver ke

It's only artificial

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I hope you liked this

.

Mujhe ye dikhe

Aur laga tumpe ache lagenge

.

Tumhe ache nhi lage kya

Geet : sshh

I liked it maan

I said before you too

Mujhe in sbse jyada aap ki jaroorat hai bs maan

You are my life

I said to thanks to god every day

Unhone aapko mujhe diya maan

Maan : geet how you fall in love with me

.

Geet :

Throughout in our lives, many people come & go

But on that beautiful day when you come into mine

Everything changed so much for me as you know

I fall in love with you, like none other before

You are love for me, opened whole new doors

I believe it was destiny, which brought us together

One day we fall so much in love, with one another

We share a very special kind of love

The kind only gives by the lord above

.

.

Maan

Jb aap mere sath nhi the na

Tbse mein aapse pyaar krti hu

.

Soch rhe ho na kaise

.

Maan you save my life

My family honour

I respect always for this

.

Jitna aapke baare mein jaana

Maa - papa se

Pata nhi kb

Kaise

Pyaar ke ehsaas ne chu liye mujhe

.

Thoda ajeeb hai na

Bina ek dusre se mile

Bina time spent kiya

Kaise pyaar ho sakta hai

.

Bs ho gya maan

Jbse aapko smjha

Jaana

My respect for you increases with passing time

Aur sayad pyaar mein badal gyi

.

Nhi jaanti maan

Bs ye jaanti hu

Kissi bhi kimat pe

Aapko nhi kho sakti

.

Ye khudrat ka khel jaroor tha

Par yhi humari kismat mein likha tha

.

Now you tell me

How you fall in love with me

Maan : tumhare pyaar nhi mujhe tumse pyaar krne ke liye majboor kr diya geet

Tumhare pyaar ki takaat hi thi sayad

.

Geet : maan par aap sam ke liye jo feel krte the

Wo sb kaise

.

Maan : geet

Jbse tumse shaadi ki

Tb mere dil mein sam thi

Par mein papa ko mna nhi kr paaya

.

Aur tumse shaadi ke baad

Maine soch liya tha

Mein tumhe sb bta dunga

.

Par dekho na

Kuch nhi kh paaya

Aur ase hi chla gya waha se

.

Aur yaha jb aaya

Toh sam se sb sch kh diya

.

.

Uska khayal rakha

Na jaane kb wo ehsaas nhi rhe

Usse kbhi hurt nhi krna chaha tha maine geet

Aur na hi tumhe kbhi

.

Par dono ko maine dukh diya hai

.

Geet : maan

Now am happy

Aap bs mere swal ka jwab do

Maan : geet

Tumhara yu hak jatana

Tumhari ye smile

Tumhari ye aankhen jo humesha kuch na kuch khti rhti hai

Chahe tumhare ye hoth chup rhe

.

Tumhare wo cute- cute se faces

.

Jhootha gussa jo tumhare naak pe rhta hai

.

Geet that's 20 days its so beautiful for me

Geet : its 23 maan

Maan : 23

Geet : ha

Sam ko gye huye 23 days huye hai

Maan : geet tum bhi na

Geet : dekho jaisi hu

Waise hi rahungi

.

Ab dinner pe chlo

Baki ka jwab baad mein dena

Maan : ok boss

**********

We are enjoying the dinner, suddenly someone come and hugged my maan tightly... Then kissed on his cheek...I want to break her head... it's only my right... and my dust danav hubby smiling to see her...

Maan : am so happy to see you after long time

Kaha gayab ho gyi thi tum

She : mein toh yhi thi dreamy

Tum hi apni is pari ko bhool gye the

Maan : pari

How I forget you

Geet(think) ha - ha

Is chudail ko kyun bulenge

Par ha apni biwi ko jaroor bhool gye the caf mein

Pari : liar

Khi ke

.

Pata hai mujhe sb

Jbse tumhari life wo tumhari girl friend aayi hai na

Chudail hai jo puri

Geet (think) this time she is right

Chudail sam ko hi kh rhi hongi

Pari : she snatch my maan

Maan : pari

Ye kya hai tum dono ka

Jb dekho tum dono ladti rhti ho

Pari : maan am pari

And this sam is chudail

Maan : pari she is not chudail

Wo achi hai

Pari : rhehne do maan

Usne jaan buzkar humare beech misunderstanding create krne ki koshish ki thi

Bhool gye tum

Usne jaan buzkar tumhara pura assignment kharab kiya tha

Aur naam mujhpe laga diya tha

Maan : pari that's past

Aur usne sorry bhol diya tha na tumhe

Geet : sorry bolne se na thode sb kuch hota hai

Pari : right

She turns and sees one beautiful girl standing near her...

Maan who is she

.

Maan : pari she is my

Pari : your new friend

I got it

Maan : pari listen me first

She is not my friend

She is my wife

Pari : what

Before she fall , maan held her...

Maan : pari

Now stop your drama

Trio sited ...

Pari : dreamy you again my break my heart

Phle wo sam humare beech mein aa gyi

Now she

Maan : pari

Pari : mar gyi pari

Maan why you do this with me

You know

How much I love you

Fir bhi

Geet : maan

Maan : pari

Stop your childish act now

Pari : bs yhi sunana baki rh gya tha maan

Aaj tumne mujhe bhut hurt kiya hai

Maan : really

That's good for you

.

Geet don't listen her crap

Ye humesha se ase hi hai

Actually iske dimag ka ek screw loose hai

Pari : what

Liar

Geet he is big liar

You not know any thing

Dosti mujhse

Pyaar us chudail se

Shaadi isse

Maan : pari tum yaha baitho

And continue your drama

We are going

Pari : dost huya praya

Maan : pari please

Stop your drama

Pari : geet tum hi batao

He done wrong with me na

.

Maine kitna intzaar kiya iska

Par ye dhoke baaz nikla

.

Maan : now you know everything

So bye

Pari : mujhse mafi maangane ki bajaye

You going

Maan : yes

Because me and geet so much tired now

Tum yaha akele baitho

Aur apna drama kro

Pari : haw

Ek toh mujhe na apne break up pe bulaya

Aur na hi shaadi mein

Aur ab sorry bhi nhi bola

.

Mein naraaz hu tumse

Manao mujhe

Maan : faltu time nhi hai

Mere pass

Pari : you donkey

Geet : pari

Inki taraf se mein tumse maafi maangti hu

Par sch mein inki isme koi Galati nhi hai

Wo hum dono ki shaadi thodi jaldi mein huyi thi

Pari : he geet

Relax

Actually mujhe na tumhare is pati ko

Yu irritate krne mein bhut mja aata hai

Tumhe sorry khehne ki koi jaroorat nhi hai

.

Maan she is perfect for you

I like her

Maan : thank god

pari : chlo ab mein chalti hu

We talk later...

Bye maan

Bye geet

geet : bye

*********

Maan : geet am little surprised

Tumhe pari ko dekhke na jealousy huyi

Aur na hi tum mujhpe gussa

Geet : kyun ki wo sirf aapki dost hai

Usse jyada kbhi aapke beech kuch nhi tha

Maan : acha

Are you sure

Ho sakta hai

Asa kuch ho

Geet : nhi hai

I know this

Jis tarah meri aankhen aapse sb kuch kh deti hai

Waise hi maan aapki aankhen bhi bhut kuch kh deti hai

And I trust you

.

Maan : fir tum sam ko leke

Geet : maan kyun ki wo aapse pyaar krti hai

Aur aapko pyaar krne ka haq sirf mera hai

Aur kissi ka nhi

.

Maan : acha

Geet : yes

He scoops her in arms and takes her into own bedroom...

Maan ye toh aapka room mein hai

Maan : ab mein bhi toh tumhara hi hu

*************

this is long update...i want proper likes and comment😃

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
4 oct

WO EK DIN - EPILOGUE ON PAGE 28


7 oct

WO lamhe - PART 3 ON PAGE 31

My Beautiful Mistake - part 12 on page 119

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Posted: 9 years ago
Is this going to updated???
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsem updates maneet on shopping trip
Edited by tamanna1391 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-14
love it. He finally clarify what he feels for her & both of them are ready for the final step in their relation.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: doll.12

Is this going to updated???


socha toh yhi tha

iski update dungi

aur fir sunday ko time nhi mila

aur kuch romantic smjh nhi aa rha mujhe ...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

Part-14

love it. He finally clarify what he feels for her & both of them are ready for the final step in their relation.


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