Teri Meri Maaneet FF # 2, ~Link to thread 3 in index ~ - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

woh tho hai
but i do post in updates so np
nowadays i like u calling ms bachan only..

hehe . 😉😆
kia ho rha ha ??
Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

nice tsrs

thank god he is not so mad at geet

how can he be mad at her 😉😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

lagta hai she was kidnapped by Maan's detective.

hmm 😛😆

Originally posted by: taahir004

Teasers are Interesting

So I guess that Geet is unconscious and Maan was called to where Geet was and seeing her in that condition he gets angry
when Geet sees Maan she happy after 3 days
I'm now anxiously waiting for next update

right guess 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtib

KYA HUA MAAN CAME TO KNOW THAT DORA IS BABY AND BABY IS BRIJ'S SISTER

yeah 😛
abi 1 hi din hua ha last update ko 😉

Originally posted by: nishamna

Great teaser. Waiting for update.

will update soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

hogya na satyanaash... jungli baby aur hero ka milan hi nahi hopayi.. par hero ko tho mehsoos hogaya ki kuch different hai.. par kya faida bina mile chale gaye.. aur idhar baby ka bhi wahi haal hai... chalo acha hua hero se milne office gayiii par kya faida udhar bhi khaali haath wapas aane ko mila baby ko... par koina ek kissy dekar aagayi na uski pic par😉😳

yeh lo yeh dooriyaan kam thi ab misunderstanding hona shuru hogaya... yeh maan ke dimaaag baby se dur hone ke baad ghaas khaane gayi hia shayad ..d ekho kya sochne laga .. par koi na pic dekhne ke baad mannn tho thoda badal gaya par poori tarah nahi..dekhthe hai aagay kya kartha hai


ab jaldi se update dedo😉

koi nai doorian khatam honay ko hain 😉... abi kuch nai karay ga ..acha maan ha 😆 baby k bina nai reh sakta na 😆

Originally posted by: taahir004

Double Updates Just Fabulous

Annie all happy and excited that she is going shopping but this time with her friend Dora too while Maan is missing his Baby and wants to know if she regret what they shared
Maan meeting Brij at his home and finds one of Geet ear ring and at first he wanted to throw it away but kept it he truly misses her
Brij and Geet comes to Maan's office and she somehow finds a way to come into his cabin and write a message for him but he sees her with Brij and he is enraged with this fact that she played him for a fool
it now seems that someone has kidnapped Geet but why

why will someone kidnap geet .. yeh apne hi kisi ka kaam ha g 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n double fab updates! well written! Geet with BJ bt misses Maan! Maan restless! he enters GB house! he senses her presence! bt shrugs it off! he picks up her earing Brij takes good care of her! Annie gng 2 meet her! Dadi n Annie to tease Maan! Geet n Brij at KC! Geet excited! she goes 2 his office n kises his pic! she leaves n hurts her hand! Brij consoles her! Maan sees them hug! Maan livid! he assumes tht they are romantically involved! Maan hurts himself! he wants to cancel the deal with Brij! Geet kidnapped! Oh no! update soon!

sab acha ho ga 😉😆 maan k assumptions wrong prove honay walay hain 😉

Originally posted by: preethia

I read all part in a go

just enjoyed reading it
Geet being so innocent and the hardship she faced
oops maan is so angry and misunderstood her relationship
who kidnapped her
eagerly waiting for next

thank u .. 😛

Originally posted by: Alamelu

aww starting with the last part...how could maan do this...just assumed is he mad or what...yes he is for her, but without waiting to hear her side just jumps to conclusions...he is crazy...he did not even think how much she will be hurt by his ignorance and anger...get your facts maan...wonder who kidnapped her

chalo maan ko gussa na karo ...possessive ha na zara 😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

yeh maan itna mu kyun karta hai...usse aur koi kam nehi hai kya...maan pehle puri baat sun lo...ek mauka do geet ko...phir natteje mein pauhuchna...na msk kabhi nehi sudhar sakte...

awesome updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

msk nahi sudhr sakta ..issi liye to usse MSK kehtay hain 😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u so much 😉... itne saray likes aur comments dekh k dil garden garden ho jata ha 😆😆
part 20


part 21



teaser

Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART : 22


Brij came towards his car only to find the door open and geet wasn't in ..he thought she must be around but looking here and there he didn't find any trace ... he got worried , this was the first time he left her alone... he had a fear that she will leave again ... he didn't want to loose her now ... after 14 years he found his dora and now he could let anything happen to her ..

Before he could call his phone rang , and he received the message that all his deals with khuranas have been cancelled ... he got another shock , but right now dora was more important so he didn't pay attention to it .. if not KC some other company will do his project , it wasn't a big deal for him ... he just have to suffer loss , which was surely bearable ...as of now no loss is bigger then loosing his dora again ..

he called police and reported about geet , and then started searching himself ... he searched here and there but no trace ... he felt someone stole his happiness again .

Brij called anni too , who was equally worried ...

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Maan checked his phone in the late evening , which he forgot to take with him in office and it was still silent , as he changed the mode for meeting ... he picked his phone , there were so many calls and messages ..some voice messages too ...

" OH !! shit ..." ... he muttered ,... the messages were from agency and they kidnapped her and took her to his farm house on his order .

Now he didn't want to meet her , so he decided to tell them that let her go ...

But later he decided to meet her and thought to get his answers at least ... he started his car and drove fast towards farm house ,which was away from city area ...

Geet gained her conscious and found herself on the lavious bed , the room was classy , and wasn't suffocating at all , and there was no was in room .. this wasnt supposed to be kidnappers den ..

" ajeeb kidnapper ha .. " [weird kidnapper ] she thought and checked herself properly , everything looked fine ...she ran towards door , it was closed ...

" koi ha ?? [ is someone there? ] she called and no one answered ...

" pata nai kahaan hun main ??" .. kaisay niklun bahar " [ i dont know , where i m .. how should i go out ] ...she looked at the window , its net was fixed .. there was no way out ...

She went to the bathroom and saw the open rectangular space , with movable glass .. she could go out of that ., it was high .but .not for her atleast . she was expert in climbing ...

She kept one foot on bath tub and tried to climb but her hand got hurt and she fell down , hurting her elbow ,

" ahh " ... Silent cry left her mouth and she sat there , holding her elbow and her hand was hurting so badly now ... her eyes filled ... First someone kidnapped her and now this ...her hand was already hurting and now it was all more painful ...

Maan entered the room , but she wasn't there ... he knew it , how could he expect something normal from this girl ... he thought she succeeded to escape ... but one last time he checked the bathroom coz he knew only there is a place to escape , and as he entered he saw her there .. , holding her elbow and her face showed clearly that she was in pain ... and for the first time , he saw her crying , out of pain ... he ran towards her ... all insecurities washed off ...

" hero ..."

how much he missed her , how much he wanted to see her face from last two days ... how much he waited to hear this ... He sat near her,...

" tu late aaya na " [ u came late ] ... she hit his chest and then hugged him ... he was numb ,feeling her in his embrace ...after whole three days , he felt breathing properly ... now no jealousy , no question nothing ... all mattered was his baby !! who was telling him that he came late ...

" 3 din ho gay ..aisay koi karta hai kya ?? kitna wait kia main ne "

He didn't know what she is saying ?? he was the one who must say this .. y she ??? he kept holding her in his embrace till he felt his shirt getting wet ... she was crying out of pain , n some tears of happiness too that she finally met her hero ...

"tum theek ho ??" [ r u ok ?] he said , looking at her face which was showing pain ... ...

" haan !! yahan dard hai " [ its paining here] she showed , her hand and elbow to him ...

Maan got worried ... her hand was plastered , and her arm was turning blue , he picked her up and place on the bed carefully ... She tries to get up ..

" lay here ,and don't move now ..i m calling doctor " ...

"par hero hmain yahan se nikalna chaiye , wo log waapis aa gay to .... [ but hero we have to leave ... what if they came back ?]

" kon log ??? [who ?]

" jo muje kidnap kar k le aay hain " [ those men who kidnapped me ?] ..he sighted ,..she don't know where she is ... well !! how will she know , they brought her here , in an unconscious state ...

" doctor in my farm house ...quick " ... Cutting the call he sat beside her again ... she was shocked ...its his farm house ...

He started massaging her arm softly ...

"did they hurt u ??"... out of all questions wasn't expected ... but he wanted to know... Whatever happen ., it was very clear ..he couldn't hurt her ...

" who ??... sshe didn't know what he is actually referring to

" those agency people , who brought u here ..." ...

" nai , wese muje kaisay pata ho ga ... I was unconscious " [ how would i know , i was unconscious ]

His eyes turned red in anger ... how could they ??? he so much hated her closed eyes .. no one ... not even him has the right to close those beautiful eyes ... But right now all his concentration was on her elbow which was turning blue ...

Doctor came ,and thankfully there was no fracture in her elbow , as it hit the bathtub edge hard , that's why was turning blue ...

He prescribed massage , and not to stress her hand for few days .. as he went off maan sat near her again ... ... ...

" kaisay hua yeh sub ??" [ how did this happen ?]

" wo .. ... I was climbing up ,so I fell down ... muje laga kisi ne kidnap kar lia ha " [ i was climbing up and fell down ..i thought someone kidnapped me ] ... he felt guilty , he got her kidnapped and because of that she is in pain ... Things were complicated ...

" aur yeh ??? "[ and this ?"] he was referring to plaster .

" main washroom main gir g ai thi " [ i fell in washroom] ... as much as he remember there was no washroom in jungle , but who knew better ,that she wast there all these three days , he was there only ... he didn't want to question anything right now ... ...

Pulling her in his embrace , he hugged her dearly n muttered " I m sorry "

" chal koi baat nai , par main na ,,... tere se naraaz hun ... " [ its ok but i m angry on u ]

" kun ??" [ y ?]

" mere samnay nai aaya aur muje kidnap karwa lia ?? main tere office b aai thi tu wahaan b nai mila " [ u didnt come to meet me ..and kidnapped me ..i also went to ur office ..u didnt meet me there too ]

" wo muje laga k ... " [ i thought... ] ... he was gonna question about brij ..

Suddenly she broke the hug and muttered "bj ..." ... Maan couldn't guess why she suddenly said that ... when she was in jungle , she never said his name this way ...

" hero , phone de na ...muje call karni ha " [ hero give me ur phone , i want to make a call ] ... y she was asking for his phone ?? according to him , she didn't have anyone to call ..

" hero de na ... bj pareshaan ho ga ... dekh na kitni sham ho gai ha " [ hero give me please ..see its evening .. bj must be worried]

" but "

" baad main sab btaati hun ... pehlay phone de na "... he handed her and she started dialing the number quickly ...but next thing made him wonder ... , name " Brij Handa "flashed on screen while she dialed ... he got his number saved coz he was handling his project himself ...
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i was replying u all ..phir socha update de deti hun , answer khud mil jaen gay 😆... Update is short hain na ?? chalo kam chalao ..next time will try to give bigger one .. post ur reviews about this 😉
Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
god why did u stopped here

please give us the next update as fast as possible

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