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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 33 - I am liking this question and answer game. It was interesting to know them thru these. it was reminded me of dev-tara of Love & Despair of Devi. I found them similar to them. It was surprising that they knew very less about each other.


Wow I'm both honoured and a little intimidated.

Love and despair is one of my all time favorites.

I don't think anyone could make Dev Tara love like Devi could.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice n hot... Maan token was fabulous... It will surely make her remember him every moment...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ch 34
So simply he says the three words
That makes her his
And with the same simplicity
She accepts
Hats off to you for
Such a serene update
Awesome
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ch 35
Dream becomes the reality
Both the dream and reality
Narrated so beautifully
Loving the Maan
He is just as sweet as he was in the serial
Now they have come to the point
Where they are verbal about missing each other
And
Maan giving a special gift mark to Geet
For rememberance
Beautiful update
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Posted: 7 years ago
They really move fast lol, but 2 weeks is a long time god knows what will happen in that time.
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Posted: 7 years ago
36.

A phone call from India broke their little game. It was from Savitri Devi, Dev's grandmother.

Tara left him alone to take the call while she went inside.

They didn't speak about that evening again. If Nainatara was interested to see if they took it forward, she didn't acknowledge it. She was curious though.

When he came to bed that night, she felt the weight on the bed and didn't turn but closed her eyes, listening to his deep breathing.

"Are you asleep?" He asked.

"No"

"Dadi called"

"Oh"

"She wants us to visit her"

"Is she alright"

"Yeah, no problem health wise"

"Okay"

They remained silent for a while.

"She expects us to visit her this summer, like old times"

Every summer they had been to India for three weeks and that's the only time she had seen Dev in his element. He didn't say it often but if given a chance he would have gone back to live there, with his family.

The family that's now broken with all the brothers leaving home.

She knew Dadima and she knew how much she wants them to be together, all the brothers again. This might be her attempt to have her grandsons reconcile.

Tara turned her position to look at him. He was looking at the ceiling.

"What are you thinking"

Dev still looked about the patterns of light on the ceiling. She thought he wouldn't answer.

"I was wondering if I would get a chance to reverse time and go back to start over"

"Where would you start over?" Tara asked feeling exhaustion take over her, making her eyes close.

Somewhere in the corner of her mind, she expected him to say that he would start over at the whole fiasco about going to India and ruining Geet's life. Or maybe at the fight that broke the brothers apart. However, she heard his quiet voice now.

"When I was 19, I went to this painting exhibition. I would like to start over there"

The day when he met her.

He turned on his side to look at her now. They were both just a feet apart maybe.

"You don't want to make the biggest mistake of your life in meeting that person again?" She attempted a smile.

"I think I want to amend from there and meet her properly. If I make a list of who all I've wronged, that's how early it would all start. I would like to start making amends from there"

Tara didn't say anything. She blinked her eyes, wanting sleep to take over.

"Good night Dev" she had said and turned her back to him, not wanting to know, not wanting to feel... But something in her heart clenched.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I dont know about starting all over again but going about fixing and apologizing is a way to go.
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Posted: 7 years ago
This update make me come to write a comment here what makes it interesting Dev choose a date to go back if possible to the date where he met Tara ..He is still looking to bend his relation with her very beautiful and very deep way of portraying his and her feelings good job
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Posted: 7 years ago
his words hold so much deep meaning
but some mistake not just mistake but sin too
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ch 36
He wants to correct mistakes
Amend them from the age 19
Is he thinking about geet and ruining her life
Is he going to accept Dadima's invitation
Again ruining her life
Her happiness and Maan's happiness
??

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