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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the continuous update! It nice to know about whats been going on with dev.
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for the triple updates! much appreciative! 😃
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I remember, the point at which the story is right now, I used to hate Dev and Tara in the show with all my heart. Here, however, I feel a soft corner towards them both and their story. I'm beginning to lean towards the opinion that they deserve a chance at redemption, which I never did believe during the show.
Their story is becoming interesting as they become more human to me with every interaction they have.

Thanks for giving the updates, S!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Was there anything more of a cliche than this, Geet wondered.

That night was a sweet scene straight from a story book. It was tucked neatly away like maybe it never happened.

At office, he was the same boss. His sarcasm didn't dissipate, nor was his obsession with work. They didn't even behave unprofessionally with each other. They were back to being normal.

But there were minute changes in him.

She had known him long enough to see the ease in him, the increased frequency of his lips cracking into a tiny smile that is barely decipherable but still being there.

Sometimes she wondered if she was this lucky, was she this blessed to be the one to be the reason for the his smile, his happiness.

It warmed her heart as much as it teared it apart. How long will she be able to hold the tenderness before she would combust.

She had gone to his cabin one afternoon when he was away for lunch and found something gleaming catch her eye.

She wasn't the one to break through others' personal space, yet, as she had seen the tiny object sitting snugly in a small container next to the book rack, she felt herself walk to it and take it in her hands only to see the Taveez that she had been given one fateful day.

"You'd meet your soulmate today" told the woman that day.

That day when she had met Maan.

It travelled all the way in search of its owner was it?

"Hey intruder" she heard and almost jumped out of her skin and would have surely slipped like a true clumsy person, but he was quick to steady her by her shoulders.

"Too bad there aren't any Olympics for clumsy people. You would have gotten a gold medal for India for sure if there was" he said.

"This Taveez..." She said her eyes taking a sweet confusion that he found adorable.

"It's yours. It's worse than you in not leaving me alone"

"It's yours" Geet said quietly. "It is for you"

She expected him to make fun of it. She in fact waited for it.

But in a surprising move, he took a step closer and bent down just a little for her to be able to put it around his neck.

The small acknowledgement made her lips wobble into a smile even as she felt sentimentality take over and have her eyes fill up with tears that would just stop at the threshold.

She put the Taveez around his neck in reverence and had her hands stop at his chest, slowly placed next to the now lying locket over his heart.

"Hey" he said trying to decipher her sudden silence.

In a move that both surprised him and pleased him, she raised on her toes and pressed a soft kiss to the side of his cheek.

"This is probably the most cliched thing to say to any person, but I would still say it although you would end up making fun of it.

I love you, and I can't tell you how disappointing it is to not have any other word that would justify or come remotely come closer to the feeling.

Can three words fit in the universe of an emotion Maan?"

"They can't" Maan said now "But your eyes can fit all of it in"

At her surprised silence at his sweet words, he sighed.

"Talk about beating you in being cheesy"

Geet laughed a sudden surprised laugh and this time he had pulled her with a hand around her waist.

"Marry me Geet" he had said without a prelude, without a poem or a setting or even a ring.

And Geet realised how much she didn't need any of them as long as he is there.

She cupped his jaw and had raised on her toes to press a kiss on his forehead, with her eyes closed, her heart pulsating with devotion for this man.

"I take that as a yes?" He said when she parted.

"Yes, yes and yes. A thousand times and over" she said making him give a grin as he lifted her up in his arms and twirled her around.

Talk about being cheesy.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 31

great update! wonderfully written!

glad seeing Dev and Tara interact! they are like strangers! at least by playing the name, they are getting to know each other!

curious as to why they got married?

Dev has a very colourful past!


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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update... Now will be waiting eagerly for the marriage... Love the proposal... On the spot.. no beating around the bush...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 32

impressive update! superbly written!

Dev and Tara do not anything about each other! nice that he is making her comfortable! Dev was really carefree! I am glad he admitted his faults and that he needs to apologise to that girl!

I loved that girl's response!



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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 33

remarkable update! well written!

its amazing that through this game, Dev and Tara are getting to know each other better and getting close!

glad that they are opening up with each other!

why is Tara so hesitant?

eager to know abt her past!

wonder why she feels her beauty is a bane!

feeling 4 Tara and Dev!!



Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 34

beautiful update! brilliantly written!

Geet's thoughts well portrayed! nice that Maan is still the same but yet there are some subtle changes in him and is all cos of her!

Maaneet lucky to have each other!

Indeed Maan was her soulmate! great that Maan never leaves an opportunity to tease her! she tells him abt the taveez!

Liked that he just wanted her to put it on him without asking any questions! she is overwhelmed!

Loved her simple confession straight forward confession which came from her heart! fitting reply from Maan!

omg he proposed! wow!! she did not need fancy words, an elaborate ring or a special setting but only needs him!

it was a unique proposal! and she said yes!

fabulous happy moments! excited for the wedding!

eager to see dadi's reaction!

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Posted: 7 years ago
what? he proposed?
omg..
the update was so wonderful. how words can't define their relationship, but still tell everything..
i wish i found my maan and my tavez..

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