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@Endgame

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Posted: 7 years ago

#331

they finally indeed found home
not scared not hesitate they gave in their pure love

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soniaz121

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Posted: 7 years ago

#332

What beautiful love relation they have hope geet feel all the happiness with him

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vydehi

@vydehi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#333

Very nice updates. You portrayed all the characters very well. Dev Tara characters in your story are more realistic than the original. Hope they give their relationship another chance.
Geet's reaction and Maan's teasing is awesome. Waiting for a conversation between them after this homecoming!! Thanks for updating.

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ExpectoPatronum

@ExpectoPatronum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#334

What have you done to me?!! My heart is beating so hard and fast that I'm pretty sure I was on the terrace and it was me Maan had kissed so sensually!☺️

Damn you girl, you've managed to weave in magic with those words to form these silky sentences sliding right into our hearts❤️

Atleast I know whom to blame if I have a *cough cough* dream tonight🤣

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Piaa21

@Piaa_21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#335

It was too good...Loved it...Please update quickly can't wait to read more...Nd more scenes between maan nd geet...And lots of passion nd paassion

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#336

Chapter 28

splendid update!

Geet wonders what Maan thinks abt her and avoids him! can understand her feelings!

glad she did not regret the kiss! hmm how can she expect him to forget the kiss?

now she is running away to Delhi!

at least she called him and apologised!

loved Maan's teasing reply!

Geet flabbergasted!

Indeed practice makes perfect!

I sure there will be a next time...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#337

Chap 29

Exceptional update!

Happy that Rasika is not doing the project! at least Geet now knows what happened!

its sad that Geet at some point feels she also threw herself on Maan! but then realises what happened was out of love!

Maan means more to her but they do share a nameless relationship! will they give it a name?

upset that she is comparing herself to those women who throw themselves at Maan!

great that Maan is back! wow he goes to see her!

loved that he kissed her! intense passionate kiss!!

Indeed they have found each other! the moment was beautifully portrayed!

already waiting for next...👏⭐️

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

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Posted: 7 years ago

#338

Both great updates :) Maan is really just putting his feelings out there, but I feel like Geet needs reassurance, she has bene hurt once and this time aorund she wants to make sure I guess. I feel like with the kiss its like how does it feel so wrong but so right type of situation. I wonder if they are going to speak at all.

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

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Posted: 7 years ago

#339

Wow, missed a few chapters and finlaay getting caught up... Geet is getting bold and Maan got his guards down and going with his heart - finally!

I honestly got distracted when Dev track details started. Your writing reminded me of the times when Dev and Naintara had destroyed Geet's life and were benton making it worse... i could not go through that phase again...

But coming back to Maan and Geet the story has its own charm be it with her cousins (that made me teary eyed), or Rasika that made me angry at her guts. Like your spins and boldnes!!

Are they in live now? Will he seal the deal with an engagement? In real show they never got close or kissed but here you can take the liberty and make it how you want it too. We are sure enjoying it!