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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 29 - Beautiful update. Finally she summarised about what happened bet him & rasika thru' the gossips in the office about raskia's father taking over that project instead of rasika. She felt bad that she doubted him. I liked how she compared herself with other girls when she thought about rasika matter. How she was insecure thinking about herself and maan, how she pondered about what maan would be thinking about her.

What happened next, now she must know what he thought about her. What he felt about her when both found home in each other's arms.

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Posted: 7 years ago
woww.. both parts...
Geet chided herself about kiss and try to talk to maan bt cnt have courage bt when maan speak her name and he some how tease her where maan is cool about that n geet still in thinking mode.'geet know abt rashika be out of project n she happy know abt it as she know rwson n try to figure out diff betwwn her n rasika. she heard horn of car n as their eyes meet like usual they forget everything
n again Kiss happen😉😉😉
m waiting for more to she romantice side of both
n some assurance from maan so geet can full come out from her painful past
waiting for nxt😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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They have parted after a long while.

She hadn't raised her eyes to look at him afraid that if she will, she wouldn't be able to stop the tears that are threatening to fall.

She was afraid that he would see it too, the strength of her feelings.

"Missed me Ms. Hoshiyarpur express?" He asked with a tilt of his head.

She raised her eyes then, glad that in the guise of the rain, she could still look at him with wet eyes.

"Dadima did"

"And you?"

"Those clothes are getting wet. I should go" she said vaguely pointing towards the heap of now wet clothes.

"Wait" he said catching hold of her wrist. "Why are you in a hurry?"

"I want to leave before it's too late"

"It's already late Geet. You have no choice"

"You do" she said, fighting her agony.

"What are you talking about?"

She turned towards him then, just a couple of steps away.

"This" she said waving her hand between both of them, "This shouldn't happen"

"Who says that" he said taking a step closer, becoming the Maan sir everybody fears. He had been just Maan for a few moments out there, but she had effectively pushed him away.

"I don't deserve you" she said her voice a mere whisper.

"I don't" she said shaking her head taking another step back.

"That is true" he said then. "You don't deserve my short temper. You don't deserve my scathing words. You deserve better"

"Maan..." She says taking his hand that was extended towards her.

"I am scared"

He took both her hands and entwined his fingers with hers.

"You should not be"

"I am not a virgin"

"Neither am I for years now. What's your point"

She smiled through tears at how comical he suddenly made it.

"I was married"

"You were trapped. It wasn't your fault. I think we already established that"

She couldn't hold the tears that escaped now. She had longed to hear this one line; that it wasn't her fault. Maybe that would have been enough from her family. Strange how we find family in strangers when your family turn into strangers.

"You have to let go of yesterday if you want to move forward"

"What if the past catches up with me?"

"Then I'll help you in kicking your past in its ass" he said making her smile. "All this Tai-Chi practice should lead to something now, don't you think?" He said and when she smiled, he looked at her with those kind eyes that warmed her heart.

He pulled her closer now with his arms circling her waist, her forehead touching hers.

"If I had any control, I would have made sure with every drop of blood left in me to save you from the hurt, from the deceit. Geet, are you going to push me away because what someone else had done?"

Such tenderness had undone her. She raised both her hands to touch his jaw. "I can't even if I try till my last breath. Maybe I'm too weak"

He smiled. "If so, I'm glad you're"

With that he took her in an embrace that was a promise to protect her from everything that could possibly come between them, while she hugged him back as fiercely with all the love left in her.

Maybe the cliched words of love wasn't needed after all, maybe their relationship unnamed as it was, still meant more than any other relation ever did to both of them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
😛


some time unnamed relations are more stronger than so called named or tag ed relation ...



love this maan as MAN ...



he so simply dismiss all her questions


love his answer when she say she is not virgin ...his ans make me fall more for him ..


he is all ready to beat that person who hurt geet ...

imagination of upcoming story scaring me ...


please don't show any MU between MG please ...that will make lost difference essence of this story so please

Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing! I loved Maan's come backs :)

I'm glad he made her see the brighter side and her emotions...
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Posted: 7 years ago
You know one things always baffles me, our Geet show was fantastic but how they managed to prolong the phycial expression of love was just unbelievable. In most english shows that's not the case and for life of most Indians also that is not the case...(check out the couples sitting in a park in any city, lol)

I'm glad you got that piece taken care of at the right moment and it could not have been more perfect! With Geet's apprehensions yet attraction for Maan... with Maan's attraction and finding Geet's diary and his picture gave him the affirmation to step ahead. Great track and it kind of gives a contentment to the fans as they might have numerous times wished that they just kissed.

Your connection of this story with real one gives us that high and closure! Thanks

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Posted: 7 years ago
superbb updates
loved it very much
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wovvv
Finally both r together officially
maansi25 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wonderful proposal
without any cliche words of love as you say
With the promise to take care of her
Protect her from the past agony
😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aww That was beautiful love the reassurance it was light hearted, but it was filled with love at the same time.

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