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Posted: 7 years ago
"Though with his mouth, he utters venom and piercing words, with his eyes, he apologizes.
And for me, that is enough."

This has to be one of the best lines I have read in any story.

It's been a long while since I've read any story based on the original track and I'm already looking forward to what is in store.

You've raised my bar of expectations higher just with the prologue.👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
enjoying this SS...

Chap 19

magical update!! superbly written!

Maan knows his dad so well! loved how he flops her plan!! Poor dadi is so obvious! Geet heard what Maan said! his words have impacted on her! she checks herself in the mirror!

Loved that Maan was mesmerized seeing the celestial beauty in front of him!

hmm did not expect Geet to indicate she heard the convo!!

update soon



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Posted: 7 years ago
Now what was that teasing at the end??? Curious and confused
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Posted: 7 years ago
The journey so far has been one of the most enjoyable that I have had in a story. I love your characterisation of every person. It's been a long while since I'd read a story based on the original GHSP, and I lucked out that it's just a wonderful story. Really.
I especially love Maan's character, specifically in the latest few chapters. He seems more human and more acceptable here. Can't really wait to see what happens when he tries to chew his words back and makes her believe she is a nymph, for him.
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Posted: 7 years ago
20.

"Why did you not leave me?

It was way past 3 am and she sat there in the hospital, dozing off in the sleeper couch in the patient's room. He was shifted from ICCU a couple of days back but was still kept under medication.

They were told he couldn't walk for a while due to the fracture, but otherwise he was no more in danger.

And that small window when she had thought a fear grip her, when she lost her mind and let herself hold his hand all the way to the hospital, that window was coming to close.

She wasn't particularly in love with Dev.

She wasn't looking for love, nor to marry for that matter.

They were a lot of things; him and her, but lovers were not one of those. There had always been a veil between them, something that held both of them back.

Maybe it was their insecurities.

In the three years of their marriage, they never grew out of the ties that bound them and she had realized that they have never grown close, nor had grown together like other couples.

There were moments of intimacy, but it was more physical than anything else.

It surprised herself that when she got that call about Dev's accident, how she had driven to the ambulance and then to the hospital with an unconscious Dev.

She had faced a moment of dementia, and if she was honest with herself, a moment when she was scared...scared that she might lose him.

Here and now, when she woke up disoriented in the middle of the night, after three nights to the accident, she had observed he was awake and was trying to fetch himself a glass of water.

She had gotten up and went to the jug of water, and poured the water wordlessly, and had handed it to him in silence.

She had helped him in siting up, with pillows backing him, and when he was drinking water, she had gone to charge her phone.

She took the glass back and was meaning to go to her couch when she had heard his voice.

"Why did you not leave me? he had asked then.

They both knew he wasn't talking about her staying in the hospital.

"I am realizing I am a masochist she had told him uncharacteristically and went back to her couch to sleep.

And Dev lied back on his bed, thankful that the medication could help him to the sleep that wouldn't grace him otherwise.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey guys!

A little treat for you.

The scene in chapter 19 with the Kohl, is inspired from a scene in telugu movie. For those who are interested...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQZLB0xOzfk[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update dev woke up to see Tara by his side he was surprised she didn't leave him continues to ask her why didn't she leave him but Tara had no answer she herself didn't know why she was with him when she no feelings for him it was only physical but still she couldn't leave him nor she could answer him
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Posted: 7 years ago
Dev and Tara feel more real and relatable in this story that they were in the show (No offence intended to anyone!). They are just two humans who have been forced together for whatever reasons and who made some wrong decisions and now realise it too. Although I am not particularly fond of either of the two, I can still sympathise with them and they way their life has gone from bad to worse.
Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for updating!!

chap 20 - amazing update!! well written!

though Dev and Tara are married they strangers...

wonder why she married him if she has no feelings for him!

I am surprised she stayed with him at the hospital!

but Tara is scared of losing Dev! its unexpected seeing Tara care for him!!

they are now suffering for their sins!

tfs link for video!!😃




Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hy just came across this story of yours.. liked the title & prologue..
seems quite interesting..
Do you mind if I read it??

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