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Beautiful update.

Beautiful update maaneet in a house that too alone loved it

hi thanks 4 da magnificent update! superbly written! Maan is drunk n 4get he sent the servants away! Geet makes coffee 4 him! he needed it! Maan admires her! she makes breakfast n he helps get the crockery that she cannot reach! they r so close! update soon

Thank you so much for a lovely update

lovely update..
waiting for next update..

I love this man and woman and it has nothing to do with them being Maan and Geet. That was damn beautiful !! I love when u write such scenes.
Thanks for updating :)
keep showering on us these small mercies :)

Why did you not tell me about this FF? I have always told you how much I loved the Hoshiarpur connect Maan and Geet shared. It left a lot to be desired. Maan is probably the only person who saw Geet evolve and transform the way she did. From somebody who would silently bear the beatings to somebody who dared it all and pushed her own brother who carried ridiculously false notions of self respect behind the bars. She started her journey from the scratch, struggled to overcome her fears, insecurities and despite being cheated in the most cruel manner, she never turnedIncapable of loving,never lost hope and faith in humanity. Maan played a major role in letting her faith stay alive. Though not in a sugary sense.

I was reading this again and I thought about how much hard work must have gone behind bringing the exact amount of romance in this particular chapter. And the previous comment did no justice to the update. Not that this one does but still here I am blabbering once again
The beginning of romance.
The unleashing of passion that had been very carefully caged inside.
The process of awakening of a woman has finally started now, can we say that?
I do not know why but I feel he has been burning since that Kurbaan hua night. I'm assuming that night has happened in this story.
The small nuances like that messy bun, those water drops, the cologne whiff , the jari sari, low cham cham of payals
Come down after bathing. i 'll fix lunch
Any thing else I should help you with? I missed a beat there!
What beauty this chapter is!
I agree this is a tough game especially...and I'm enjoying it.

Give me more and more.
Thanks for the update once again.