Maneet SS-Birthday surprise

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey all

This is a short story that I had earlier written in other forums..I thought you will like it on our Maneet and so here it is..

In this story,
Maan is a fashion designer and his fashion house is one among the top three in the world..Maan,Geet and Dadi live in Mumbai ..Dev and NT have positive roles and they live in Delhi.. Dev is a lawyer by profession and NT works in his firm.. Its an arranged marriage for Maan and Geet..Geet has fallen in love with Maan while Maan has started having feelings for her..For now , they are best friends who share everything with one another:)

For those who haven't read my OS's here is the link to one of them..the link to the other OS can be found inside this link :)

Wow what a day!

INDEX
Part One- Page 1
Part Two- Page 4
Part Three- Page 8
Part Four - Page 12
Part Five - Page 16
Part Six- Page 19

PART ONE

It's a fine Sunday morning and after having a late breakfast with the family ,Maan and Geet come back to their room and decide to watch TV for sometime . They see Zindagi na milegi dobara featuring on Filmy and excitedly settle down on the bed to watch that.

After around an hour into the movie ,
Maan says .." U know Geet? I had a gang of three friends , during school. Rini,Anu and Vinay.. We always used to hang out together .. Dev was two years junior to us and because they were close to me , they know him really well too..
Rini was the understanding one and used to put up with all our tantrums and random arguments and she was also the favourite in the gang. More like my younger sister, best friend to Anu and Vinay and a Di to Dev..

Vinay was more a brother to me, who was there always . We had a lot of fun playing and inventing games till late into the night after the girls went home .

Anu was the funny one and she was always a bit slow in understanding the spontaneous comebacks from Rini and I during our arguments and so we always used to make fun of her. All in all , ours was one awesome gang ...We never hid anything from each other.. This movie reminded me of my friends..I miss them "😔

Geet : "Wow Maan this is so sweet... Where are those three? Are u guys not in touch?"

Maan : "I don't know Geet .. after school each of us had different priorities.. Rini wanted to do CA.. Anu wanted to get into fashion designing and Vinay wanted to be an engineer and u know what I am now So as we started chasing our dreams we had to travel to different cities and after the first five or so years after school we kind of lost touch I even tried going to their place after few years but all of them have shifted and the present occupants don't have any idea about them .The last we knew about them some five years back was that Rini and Vinay were studying abroad and Anu was into fashion designing and in Delhi ..I feel bad even now as they can never be replaced and that was one of the best phases of my life.."

Geet: "Hmm Dev also has no idea about them kya ? Atleast one of them ?"

Maan: "No Geet I don't think so .. We both moved here together soon after school and I got busy with going to Harvard and things and Dev was busy with his life .. So i don't think he has any idea either.."

Geet :"I hope you get to meet them someday.. After listening to what you just told about them even I want to meet them now

Geet happens to see the TV by chance and realises only around half an hour of the movie is left. She wants to divert Maan and says "Maan ..You have a meeting tomorrow for which you had to prepare na.."

Maan : "Oh ya Geet .. I totally forgot that with all this talk we had about my friends...and yes I hope I get to make you meet them someday.. you will like them too ..lets go now"

Geet thinks:"Awesome chance now Geet!!.. You have been thinking about what to do for Maan's b'day next month right? Find these three friends somehow and make them talk to him on his b'day.. I am sure that will be the best surprise ever!.. I know he doesn't like celebrating birthdays but I am sure he will approve of this ..I want to see that smile on your face when you see your friends Maan..I will try my best to get in touch with them..this b'day will be your most memorable one "

Hey guys ! How was it ? Let me know if you like it and if I should continue ! *Fingers crossed* 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi congrats on the SS! Thanks 4 da pm! awesome title! Fab update! well written! Maaneet watch ZMD! Maan tells Geet abt his friends! She dcides 2 surprise on his bday! she will find his friends so they can meet! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi congrats on the SS! Thanks 4 da pm! awesome title! Fab update! well written! Maaneet watch ZMD! Maan tells Geet abt his friends! She dcides 2 surprise on his bday! she will find his friends so they can meet! update soon



Thank you so much! Will update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for ur ss... Great going...part 1... Maaneet are watching movie... And maan tells her about his friends how their nature was and now he have lost them... Geet divert his mind so that he doesn't think of it and she can plan for his b.day which is next month...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: doll.12


Congrats for ur ss... Great going...<div></div>part 1... Maaneet are watching movie... And maan tells her about his friends how their nature was and now he have lost them... Geet divert his mind so that he doesn't think of it and she can plan for his b.day which is next month...



Perfect gist:) thankyou so much !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow nice starting...
Geet want to give surpise to maan...
now let's see how does she do...
waiting to read more...
good luck.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidMLOVER

Wow nice starting...
Geet want to give surpise to maan...
now let's see how does she do...
waiting to read more...
good luck.



Thank you very much !:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one...do continue😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CookieMonster.

awesme :))
waiting 4 next



Thank you :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi_2010

Nice one...do continue😊



Sure will soon :)

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