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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
superb teaser...
am just waiting for this update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
congrats for the new thread
nice teaser

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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Congrats for the New thread
Nice teaser
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
congrats for new thread
lovely teaser
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Congrats for the new thread 👍🏼
Nice teaser
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Hav read this story n more i read,more m in lov wid it.

u hav touched so many different aspects in this ff.
one of a kind.
i loved d way maan is going through changes,bit by bit.
obviously drastic changes cnt be more convincing.

and d way parth helping unknowingly.
but still lot to hppen.
maan is more worried about kid n not geet. He is but she is not his priority.

so excited to know what happn next.

continue soon.
thank u for such superb concept n writing it in most convincing way.
loving it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47



PART - 37




GEET walked off towards their room,holding Parth wrist firmly,followed by Maan. Maan calling her but she avoided him.


"Vinny get black coffee for Maan sir and ask him if he need something." Geet commands while glancing back before leaving from there. "come Parth." she moved upstairs with him.


Maan annoyed with her behaviour. Neither she is talking to him nor expressing her anger directly. Vinny went to ask but he walked off. Maan barged in the room to confront her. He grabbed her arm and pulled to him. "Vinny" he shouts. Vinny appeared quickly. "took him outside." he commands pointing towards Parth. Vinny nodded and took him out of the room.

"come Parth baba." Parth moving slowly holding Vinny's fingers, staring both without a blink.


"now tell me what's wrong with you? Why you are behaving like this?" Maan gritted his teeth,but failed to threaten Geet this time.


Her motherhood strengthen her. "apke liye chhoti si baat hai mere liye nahi. He is my responsibility. What if any thing wrong happened with him?" Geet burst.


"but he is fine na? Then why you over reacting?" Maan snapped.


Geet flinched off. "you will never understand. Meera leave him because she trusts me. I am answerable to her not you. Leave it Maan sir." She glared and moved from there dont want to fought with him any more.


Maan too in anger left the room. Time passed but both kept their anger. Parth went near to Maan and sat besides him. "chachu will you solve it for me?" he raised his colour puzzle to Maan.



Maan ready to denied but then took it and tried to solve. He was angry not paying much heed. His attentions were distracted. As a result how much he tries puzzle turned more difficuled and he got more angry.


"Chachu give it back to me." He took it from his hands and solve it in less then a minute and show it to Maan. "when i gave you this it was almost ready to solve. But you are angry and tangled it more." he said with a smile and staring at him. Maan was amused at his words. How deep thoughts he have in such a tender age. "when mumma brought this for me i to grew angry because it took so much time but never solved. Then she told me never handle this in anger. Because in anger we not able to think." He hold Maan's wrist. "come with me. I will help you."



Maan followed him without having a doubt. Parth reached to Geet and pacify her. He used same idea with Geet. Maan sat on bed and both stared each other. "chachi forgive chachu." Parth defend him and kissed her. She start melting. Parth winked at Maan and he slipped to Geet's side.



Maan to said sorry and quickly kissed on Geet's cheek. Her pupils widened. "i am sorry. Please forgive me." He said softly and Parth shook his head,asking Geet to forgive him. Geet agreed. She smiles and hugged Parth,took him in her lap. She kissed him and he smiles wide.


"chachu aap bhi." he demands and made his eyes popped out. Parth demands from both. Both raised towards him but before their lips met with his cheek he run away from her lap,let their lips collide. Both turn num struck and he giggled on his mischief. Both turn and glared him which made him giggle more.



"exact like you." Geet mummered while running behind him. "stop you little mischief."



Maan smirked and help Geet. He caught Parth and lifts him up. "now run." he said and Parth wriggle. Maan put him down on bed and tickle him on stomach made him burst in giggles. Parth was rolling here and there to save himself but not easy to get out from Maan's grip. "bas chachu bas." he pleads and seeing him Maan and Geet both enjoying.



Geet signaled to left him now. Maan stop and Parth jumped from the bed. He reached to door and glared both before leaving the room. "chachu chachi meri turn b aayegi." he cautioned and laugh again.


The moment he left Maan grabbed Geet in his arms. She was also in good mood. Hold him close to her. "apki ye side b hai. To khamkha khadus kyu bane rehte ho? Parth kitna khush hai apke sath. Firr kyu aap use apke pass nahi aane dete?" Geet asked.


"because wo ek aafat hai. Dont forgot today's incident what he did." Maan said rudely.



"it wasn't his fault. Plus dont tell me that in his age apne kabhi shrarte ki hi nahi. Sir pls try to understand him. Abhi apki sifarish leke bhi wo hi aaya tha. Still aap usse angry hai." she stare in his eyes which are expert to hide any emotion. Maan remain silent. He himself tried to figure out all the changes of incident which gave him new prospective regarding Parth. Seeing him silent Geet disappointed. She wants to brought both closer and when he didn't showed any intrest her eyes loose all spark and turned gloomed. Maan sense that.


Maan hold her chin between his finger and thumb. "what you want? Atleast i am trying not to scold him. I know my morning behaviour is very careless but i will try it won't happen again." He release a breath and leaned over her trembling lips. "But before that I want which left in mid." He took her warm lips. Geet clenched her eyes and let him devour her. Maan leaned on her shoulder and nibbled her soft flesh. Geet moaned, holding him firmly.

******


Maan was engrossed in his files and enjoying his drink. When Parth's football rolled there. Parth came behind his ball. He observed Maan so carefully and moved towards him.


"Chachu what are you doing?" He asked curiously.


"Parth go and play out. I am busy."Maan tried to get rid of him. He commands him and gulp one more sip from his glass.

"Chachu I to want this." Parth demands.


Before Maan jerked him off Geet came behind him. She listen every bit of their convo and now she knows its not safe to leave Parth here. "Parth your dinner is waiting baby. Lets go." She called him but he nodded no. "You don't want pasta? Ok then I will make daal for you." Geet caution him if he denoes then he have too eat dal in place of pasta.


Parth trapped and quickly moved out to catch his pasta. Geet went near Maan. "Suniye, I am not saying to leave your drinking habbit but please atleast don't drink before him." Geet pleads softly.


"So what you want? I stop enjoying everything." Maan clearly sounds sarcastic. "Don't do this. Don't do that. I am just pissed off with your every day restrictions. One day you will ask don't even breath. Only for this reason I leave KM but where I know I have to face all this at my own house." He burst his anger on Geet for putting restrictions on his life. He was a carefree bird and don't want bounderies.



No doubt she hurts but she will understand his frustration also. So instead of stretching this she apologies and left him alone.


Parth finished his dinner and indulge in playing again while Geet to busy in arranging Maan's wardrobe. Maan was in his study when he got some call on his phone. He left his drink to get some details from his laptop which was in his room. Parth again enter in his study while playing. His eyes catch the sight of glass which attracted him before. He saw every where. There is no one. His excited mind pulled him towarfs glass. He was curious to know what his uncle drinking. Plus the colour of red wine attracted his eyes even more. He push the stool near his desk and climb on it to grab the glass. Parth's eyes gleamed and hold the glass in his tiny hands. He took glass near his mouth and ready to gulp it. Maan entered and saw him holding the glass near his mouth. He roared and scared him to death. Parth scared and glass slipped from his hand. With so much npise whole mansion alerts and all came there. Maan hold him and called Geet loud.


"What happened?" She asked worriedly.


"Geet make him vomit now." He took him in his arms and moving towards Geet.


"But why?" She asked innocently having no idea about the incident.

"Do what I said." He screamed even more louder which scared Parth and he start crying.


"First you stop screaming. Don't scared him." Geet snatch Parth from him and took him to other room. Maan instruct his servant to clean the mess and followed Geet.


Geet trying to calm him. She wiped off hos tears but seeing Maan coming he buried himself in Geet.


"Geet he drink my wine. Do what I said." Maan told and she turned shocked.


Geet parted him little and Maan quickly called the doc. "Baby you drink what was in that glass of chachu?" She asked but he was only crying. He was so scared to told anything. "Parth look at me son. I promise if you tell me truth no one would say any thing to you. Please baby tell me will you drink from that glass?" She asked politely.



Parth staring Maan but Geet assured him then only he ready to open his mouth. "Only one sip." He admit and roses anger in her, but not for him.

She stare him in disgust. Maan sat near and pulled him. Parth was scared but Maan don't scold him. He knew this time fault was his again. Geet alerts him but instead of listening her he jerked her badly. "Parth that was not good for you." He said in a mild tone.


Parth sniffed sharp. "Then why you are drinking chachu?" He asked innocently. Wants to know if that thing is not good then why his uncle drinking.


His question made Maan mute. He had no explanation for this. He won't even able to glance in his innocent eyes which holding so many questions. He glance at Geet for help as he had nothing to say. Geet open her arms and called him towards her. Parth slipped to her.


"Parth that drink was bitter na?" She asked and he nodded yes. "Chachu ko b peene k baad pata chala that drink is not good that's why he leave the glass and don't drink fully." Geet handle the situation and Parth both tactfully. Parth agreed to every thing his aunt told to him. Meantime doc came and check him. He was fine but Maan got scold from her to.


"Kids only imitate their elders. Good you decide to live separate and alone else don't know next time what he will learn from you? Today he drink next don't know what." Geet taunts staring in his guilt fills eyes. him. His voice holding only anger this time. "Fault is mine. Mujhe use akela nahi chhodna chahiye tha. Sorry sir I will make sure he will not trouble and interfere in your space." Geet hold her self responsible to for this incident. She promised her self to be more careful in his case. Geet left and he regrets badly on his carelessness.


Geet cautioned him but he targeted her instead of supporting her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Geet is still angry on maan
maan is trying to control hus anger for parth..parth drank maan drink
again geet angry shatad is incident se naan ne aur thora sudgar aajaye
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Nice update
Maan is learning his mistakes slowly..

Waiting for the time he will realize his love for Geet.

Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
😡will maan will ever change...
parth part was good ..
i m tensed for geet baby...


nice update

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